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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful. I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right? #1 https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png #2 https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png
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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to. |
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Thank you The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially. |
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Does anyone else have any more critique? |
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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)
I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat
With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.
The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.
With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.
I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!) |
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