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Breadcrumbs
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rude...
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Tamarack Mountain
06:17:48 Opal
you have to choose list view
Mishasia
06:06:56 
Nvm. I found it. Thanks for the help Kanenoki :)
Mishasia
06:05:57 
How? I don't see any option.
Kanenoki Estate
06:05:00 Noki
mishasia - yep just choose the training view
Mishasia
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Is there any way to disable the mini-images in the barn view? I can't find it if so.
Mishasia
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The Coven
05:45:08 Cal
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I love it when they end up with that heterochromia eye
Z,Nugget
04:29:39 ZN(Zombie nugget)
Proud of this lady but have no idea who I’m gonna send her to next RO

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Sashimi Stables
04:25:05 Sash
The brindle *0* she's beautiful, Eve
Golden Crest
04:00:12 | Eve
Omg you’re gorgeous! -HEE Click-
Vesper
03:55:42 
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I love her so much. She MIGHT have been an accident but shes so pretty.
Tiluu
03:48:32 Honey
Hey Tosk! Sorry, I disappeared for a bit xD
Wacka do
03:43:18 DavidKing
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Finally
Wacka do
03:41:52 DavidKing
Is this normal?
Wacka do
03:38:51 DavidKing
This boy ONLY gives fillies!

What the heck ! XD

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Equile
03:18:15 Tosk's RID
hey Honey :D
TheLandOfFishAndFish
03:09:40 Fish
Thanks!
Lunoa
03:07:53 Honey
Should be 3rd week of July
TheLandOfFishAndFish
02:54:57 Fish
When is the capture party?

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Breadcrumbs
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rude...
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Tamarack Mountain
06:17:48 Opal
you have to choose list view
Mishasia
06:06:56 
Nvm. I found it. Thanks for the help Kanenoki :)
Mishasia
06:05:57 
How? I don't see any option.
Kanenoki Estate
06:05:00 Noki
mishasia - yep just choose the training view
Mishasia
06:04:01 
Is there any way to disable the mini-images in the barn view? I can't find it if so.
Mishasia
06:03:31 
Hello
The Coven
05:45:08 Cal
-HEE Click-
I love it when they end up with that heterochromia eye
Z,Nugget
04:29:39 ZN(Zombie nugget)
Proud of this lady but have no idea who I’m gonna send her to next RO

-HEE Click-
Sashimi Stables
04:25:05 Sash
The brindle *0* she's beautiful, Eve
Golden Crest
04:00:12 | Eve
Omg you’re gorgeous! -HEE Click-
Vesper
03:55:42 
-HEE Click-

I love her so much. She MIGHT have been an accident but shes so pretty.
Tiluu
03:48:32 Honey
Hey Tosk! Sorry, I disappeared for a bit xD
Wacka do
03:43:18 DavidKing
-HEE Click-

Finally
Wacka do
03:41:52 DavidKing
Is this normal?
Wacka do
03:38:51 DavidKing
This boy ONLY gives fillies!

What the heck ! XD

-HEE Click-
Equile
03:18:15 Tosk's RID
hey Honey :D
TheLandOfFishAndFish
03:09:40 Fish
Thanks!
Lunoa
03:07:53 Honey
Should be 3rd week of July
TheLandOfFishAndFish
02:54:57 Fish
When is the capture party?

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


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