Shamrock Equines
05:46:06 Crowley
Evelyn
Ooph
flying fillies
05:45:06 Tia
-HEE Click- her daddys twin
Cappuccino
05:44:49 Heyy it's Capp
are the new pages giving anyone else trouble or is it just me??
Everglade Equestrian
05:39:38 Evelyn
Accidentally put a stallion in a pasture 😭 its just cool colour horses so im not bothered but i cant beleive i forgot 🤣
Dunhill Farms
05:26:36 Colorful Capp
Very nice Whiz!!
Mythological
05:20:55 Myth/Crowley/Grinch
Hey Toto
WhizBar Eventing
05:05:08 Toto
OMG
-HEE Click-
*snuggles*
PieceofHope
05:02:36 
Oof breeding for color and all the pretty ones are colts sad times
Night Star Lane
04:58:50 Nyx
A secret admirer sent me the coolest little adoptable art??😭 Thank you!
Night Star Lane
04:29:34 Nyx
-HEE Click-
Pity we aren't breeding for colour 👀
Siren Sound Estates
03:39:48 S҉ Sem
Pretty Brindle. Hope he'll do well. -HEE Click-
Nordic Designs
03:13:10 Keonah
grant it those next two were more of an attempt at color since I had no faith in actual promising matches and didnt want to waste them lol
Nordic Designs
03:10:43 Keonah
I knew AD was going to be doodoo when my first match came out EEE... I chose not to breed for a few days because I was busy anyway, my next two were PPP XD I have yet to breed on any other account since then X.X
Minerva
02:34:35 Min
This RO has been the worst I've had in terms of freshie production (which given that they're what I enter into my futurities is a bit annoying), but it's STILL kicked the arse of my AD project
MC Ace
01:44:05 McFossil
Yep doesnÂ’t matter what kind of AD year I have itÂ’s always a good SD year lol
Minerva
01:42:10 Min
I definitely get more satisfaction from SD than AD. Plus it's easier to hand show them as well as there's only 1 day of actually looking at bars needed
MC Ace
01:41:27 McFossil
Nice! RID were/ are still really mean to me. I cannot for the life of me to get even SD RID working. So I stuck it out with PONs and WBs
Sagruesal
01:40:33 Ru
But I have a slight suspicion that 221 means a very different thing in WB and RID.
Sagruesal
01:39:49 Ru
Hope these guys show me at least something decent, like W3 221
Sagruesal
01:39:22 Ru
McFossil
RID are still a long way to go. I'm gonna buy a separate barn for WB soon
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Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 01:43 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/PJ5pddQh/Untitled4-1.jpg

This is my latest piece. Tell me what you think how much it could go for and what I can do better please ^^
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 02:41 PM


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This looks very nice. But this is not a Palomino, and in fact a champagne. You can tell by the pink muzzle. :)

I think you did an awesome job on the cut out as well as the pose placement and proportion to the background.
The tail looks really nice as well.

A few things stick out to me as places that could use some improvement. First being the mane.
The top looks really nice, but the bottom is kind of blunt. Like someone just cut it with scissors.
In order to correct this, i would draw on some more flyaways / wisps at the bottom to give the mane a more natural appearance.

The second thing i think could use some adjustment is the ground connection. The area where the horse is placed would be a hard wet sand. Yet the feet just kind of disappear. In this situation the feet wouldn't sink in very much and should be mostly visible. I dont think you can correct that in this piece, as youve already erased a good portion.

Next would be a shadow. Even in dim lighting, a shadow is always cast. There are very few instances where a shadow isn't present.

I think if you start by studying and correcting this few fundamental things, your art will really take a step into the next level and you can start focusing on learning lighting. :)

Good luck!
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 15, 2019 08:14 PM


Chidori
 
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These videos made by Amanda can help :)

https://m.youtube.com/channel/UCBja60SdRTmGBaypsBgyowg
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 16, 2019 06:25 AM


Toxic Carnage
 
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Thanks guys! Im always looking for where I can improve ^^

Edited at September 16, 2019 06:25 AM by AnimeAcres

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