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SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:50:50 
bye
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:40:42 
jeepers
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:17:58 
i am trying to put things i will not use ever into the shop. BUT every time i try it says "ooops this item is alrready in a shop" DOES this mean, if someone else is selling it, that I cannot sell it too?
Elks
02:15:37 Elky
Sting
Thank you! Was trying to get a dapple grey (if I even can with her genetics) and got that so settled haha
Narran Park
02:11:39 Sting
That looks lovely on her Elky
Elks
02:10:44 Elky
Newbie to the stables -HEE Click- <3
Narran Park
02:03:03 Sting
yay Fish!
TheLandOfFishAndFish
02:01:11 Fish
I have 90 capture tokens, 26 pirate maps, 18 sherpa maps and 7 adventurer's maps saved for capture day
Narran Park
01:54:56 Sting
I am tired of Showing Quests.
Narran Park
01:49:08 Sting
Nice!
ZequineZ
01:47:19 ZEZ - ZZ
Haven’t really decided, I’m not super breed focussed myself but I’m thinking I’ll try for quarter horses
Narran Park
01:46:33 Sting
What breed will you catch ZZ?
Nightingales Ridge
01:46:28 
I've only got 4 maps...I will keep tryna hustle em haha
ZequineZ
01:45:08 ZEZ - ZZ
This will be my first time actually taking advantage of capture day, gonna spend all my ebs XD
Nightingales Ridge
01:44:25 
Very cool :)
Narran Park
01:43:31 Sting
Capture day is my Favourite!
Narran Park
01:43:17 Sting
:D
Afterglow Radio
01:41:47 Tobi | SA
Goddamn Sting :O
Narran Park
01:40:34 Sting
Nightingales.
I see you are a new player.
Every 3 months they have a capture party day where they turn up the ratings slightly on wild horses.
Its on the 16th i believe.
Its also half price
Nightingales Ridge
01:36:13 
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SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:50:50 
bye
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:40:42 
jeepers
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:17:58 
i am trying to put things i will not use ever into the shop. BUT every time i try it says "ooops this item is alrready in a shop" DOES this mean, if someone else is selling it, that I cannot sell it too?
Elks
02:15:37 Elky
Sting
Thank you! Was trying to get a dapple grey (if I even can with her genetics) and got that so settled haha
Narran Park
02:11:39 Sting
That looks lovely on her Elky
Elks
02:10:44 Elky
Newbie to the stables -HEE Click- <3
Narran Park
02:03:03 Sting
yay Fish!
TheLandOfFishAndFish
02:01:11 Fish
I have 90 capture tokens, 26 pirate maps, 18 sherpa maps and 7 adventurer's maps saved for capture day
Narran Park
01:54:56 Sting
I am tired of Showing Quests.
Narran Park
01:49:08 Sting
Nice!
ZequineZ
01:47:19 ZEZ - ZZ
Haven’t really decided, I’m not super breed focussed myself but I’m thinking I’ll try for quarter horses
Narran Park
01:46:33 Sting
What breed will you catch ZZ?
Nightingales Ridge
01:46:28 
I've only got 4 maps...I will keep tryna hustle em haha
ZequineZ
01:45:08 ZEZ - ZZ
This will be my first time actually taking advantage of capture day, gonna spend all my ebs XD
Nightingales Ridge
01:44:25 
Very cool :)
Narran Park
01:43:31 Sting
Capture day is my Favourite!
Narran Park
01:43:17 Sting
:D
Afterglow Radio
01:41:47 Tobi | SA
Goddamn Sting :O
Narran Park
01:40:34 Sting
Nightingales.
I see you are a new player.
Every 3 months they have a capture party day where they turn up the ratings slightly on wild horses.
Its on the 16th i believe.
Its also half price
Nightingales Ridge
01:36:13 
😶

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Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 01:43 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/PJ5pddQh/Untitled4-1.jpg

This is my latest piece. Tell me what you think how much it could go for and what I can do better please ^^
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 02:41 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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This looks very nice. But this is not a Palomino, and in fact a champagne. You can tell by the pink muzzle. :)

I think you did an awesome job on the cut out as well as the pose placement and proportion to the background.
The tail looks really nice as well.

A few things stick out to me as places that could use some improvement. First being the mane.
The top looks really nice, but the bottom is kind of blunt. Like someone just cut it with scissors.
In order to correct this, i would draw on some more flyaways / wisps at the bottom to give the mane a more natural appearance.

The second thing i think could use some adjustment is the ground connection. The area where the horse is placed would be a hard wet sand. Yet the feet just kind of disappear. In this situation the feet wouldn't sink in very much and should be mostly visible. I dont think you can correct that in this piece, as youve already erased a good portion.

Next would be a shadow. Even in dim lighting, a shadow is always cast. There are very few instances where a shadow isn't present.

I think if you start by studying and correcting this few fundamental things, your art will really take a step into the next level and you can start focusing on learning lighting. :)

Good luck!
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 15, 2019 08:14 PM


Chidori
 
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These videos made by Amanda can help :)

https://m.youtube.com/channel/UCBja60SdRTmGBaypsBgyowg
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 16, 2019 06:25 AM


Toxic Carnage
 
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Thanks guys! Im always looking for where I can improve ^^

Edited at September 16, 2019 06:25 AM by AnimeAcres

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