Horse Eden : Critique/tips in general on peice

07:40:21

Thank the lord your a filly

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07:38:00 Sun/Sunny

For sure. Her art is stunning. Grim always does amazing work. I love the piece she did that's on my X filly. Been waiting a long time to use that one

Dash and Duchess

07:37:19 DD (#2)

Sun, that's such a pretty name!! I hope she doesn't disappoint!

Sunstone Elite

07:36:30 Sun/Sunny

Iduna :) Hoping she's strong but I am excited to get her shine into my AA program

Dash and Duchess

07:32:02 DD (#2)

Oooo sun! Have you picked a name for her yet as well? :D

Angels angels

07:28:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Don't you hate when you have a cute outfit but it is painful to wear ;-;

Sunstone Elite

07:24:18 Sun/Sunny

Ahhh my AA girl's art is done and it's so freaking pretty I can't wait until I'm on my laptop and can put it on her 🤩

Willow Grove

07:23:31 Stalker of Chat

Welp. Im sold, ill see how she trains XD

Shamrock Equines

07:20:34 Crowley

Willow
I had a EEExWWW filly that turned out to be an WWE train really well.

Shamrock Equines

07:19:03 Crowley

Min

Willow Grove

07:18:35 Stalker of Chat

She is! That shine is irresistible
I guess I might see how she trains, she may surprise me

Minerva

07:17:23 Min

Oh but she's SO pretty!! And you never know until you try them!

Embervale Acres

07:17:01 Solar Phoenix

She might do alright, you could always see how her week 4 goes and decide then

Willow Grove

07:15:41 Stalker of Chat

Ok that reads like I had a stroke.
No way she trains well either, based on her parents* xD

Willow Grove

07:14:27 Stalker of Chat

I do not know what to do with this shiny little thing.. Theres no way she trains well based on either based on her parents 😒
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Embervale Acres

07:13:06 Solar Phoenix

Well...I was looking for one P at least, but I'll happily take it XD
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Hy Brasil

07:09:57 Croft

I have re rolls but she seems pretty perfect as she is -HEE Click-

Santana Rising

06:39:13 San

My RO was so crap, the only good thing was an WWE filly I wish was a colt and my svenned match resulted in an EEE colt that I would hsve kept for colour if he hadn't been ugly and plain 🤦🏻‍♀️

Pony Loving Pons

06:32:33 Peep/sam

Alrighty bye

Pony Loving Pons

06:29:54 Peep/sam

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Critique/tips in general on peice

September 25, 2019 02:50 PM

Sunset Grove Farm

Posts: 7336
#452785
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https://i.postimg.cc/vT8Kh89W/Untitled235-1.png

I tried something completely different for this peice and quite frankly it took forever (around 7-8 hours)

I'm looking for some critique please, especially on the fire. Lighting and hair

Updated versions

https://i.postimg.cc/MHTbxjwq/Untitled235-2.png

Edited at September 25, 2019 03:13 PM by Sunset Grove Farm

Critique/tips in general on peice

September 25, 2019 02:55 PM

Palm Beach Stables

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#452789
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The tail looks thin and stringy. Maybe add more hair to it.

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September 25, 2019 02:59 PM

Sunset Grove Farm

Posts: 7336
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Thank you I'll try that now

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September 25, 2019 03:05 PM

Arabian Race Stud

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Such a cool idea! You can make it better with adding more light to the places that's close to the fire, like the front legs, chest head area and the end of the feathers on the wing.

Critique/tips in general on peice

September 25, 2019 03:05 PM

Sunset Grove Farm