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https://i.postimg.cc/vT8Kh89W/Untitled235-1.png
I tried something completely different for this peice and quite frankly it took forever (around 7-8 hours)
I'm looking for some critique please, especially on the fire. Lighting and hair
Updated versions https://i.postimg.cc/MHTbxjwq/Untitled235-2.png |
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The tail looks thin and stringy. Maybe add more hair to it. |
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Thank you I'll try that now |
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Such a cool idea! You can make it better with adding more light to the places that's close to the fire, like the front legs, chest head area and the end of the feathers on the wing. |
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I'll try that now thank you |
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How's this https://i.postimg.cc/MHTbxjwq/Untitled235-2.png |
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Looks much better! Maybe make the wing fire brighter? It looks much darker and duller. |
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If I do that the quality will be lost, the stock was originally quite dark ^^ |
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^^for rains comment,only slightly a just contrast and brightness,until your are happy,not much quality is lost ;) |
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I'll give that. Ago now ^^ |
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Afternoon Storms, then Clearing
