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Glacier Bay Cove

12:49:26 Arctic Katz

Quick question, who would look good, matched with him after he is trained

Glacier Bay Cove

12:48:15 Arctic Katz

Next goal is a round pen for bravery training

God is Mighty Stable

12:47:45 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Anyone up to help with matches?

Silver Bird Stables

12:41:56

Okay, thank you!

Wisteria Run Farm

12:36:53 Solar/Ria

if you have any, it would be down below your achievements

Silver Bird Stables

12:34:31

I cannot find my leader board standing on my page

Crescent Estate

12:32:43 River / Crescent

-HEE Click- why did it take so long just to get a PPP T0T

Glacier Bay Cove

12:26:10 Arctic Katz

Still trying to complete that same quest, myself

Red Horizon Ranch

12:23:59 Red

Him* lol oops

Red Horizon Ranch

12:23:37 Red

Thanks! She was just for a quest but a fun little surprise :) I’ll keep her around

Glacier Bay Cove

12:20:12 Arctic Katz

Going to watch him

Glacier Bay Cove

12:19:43 Arctic Katz

Cute brindle, Red

Crescent Estate

12:17:23 River / Crescent

Bluey

Thank you <3

Crescent Estate

12:14:09 River / Crescent

Red

she's so cute ^^

12:14:02 Bluey

Red
the brindle looks like sparkles lol

12:13:42 Bluey

River
It's cute ^^

Red Horizon Ranch

12:13:31 Red

-HEE Click-
Aw, I bred my first brindle

Crescent Estate

12:12:17 River / Crescent

What do we think about my profile so far? it's a work in progress still.

Black Moon Magic

11:57:37 Mori

Name ideas?
-HEE Click-

Imperial Warmbloods

11:56:10 Imp/Impie/Impy

~River
Your welcome, <3
~ Em
Pretty girl!

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Glacier Bay Cove

12:49:26 Arctic Katz

Quick question, who would look good, matched with him after he is trained

Glacier Bay Cove

12:48:15 Arctic Katz

Next goal is a round pen for bravery training

God is Mighty Stable

12:47:45 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Anyone up to help with matches?

Silver Bird Stables

12:41:56

Okay, thank you!

Wisteria Run Farm

12:36:53 Solar/Ria

if you have any, it would be down below your achievements

Silver Bird Stables

12:34:31

I cannot find my leader board standing on my page

Crescent Estate

12:32:43 River / Crescent

-HEE Click- why did it take so long just to get a PPP T0T

Glacier Bay Cove

12:26:10 Arctic Katz

Still trying to complete that same quest, myself

Red Horizon Ranch

12:23:59 Red

Him* lol oops

Red Horizon Ranch

12:23:37 Red

Thanks! She was just for a quest but a fun little surprise :) I’ll keep her around

Glacier Bay Cove

12:20:12 Arctic Katz

Going to watch him

Glacier Bay Cove

12:19:43 Arctic Katz

Cute brindle, Red

Crescent Estate

12:17:23 River / Crescent

Bluey

Thank you <3

Crescent Estate

12:14:09 River / Crescent

Red

she's so cute ^^

12:14:02 Bluey

Red
the brindle looks like sparkles lol

12:13:42 Bluey

River
It's cute ^^

Red Horizon Ranch

12:13:31 Red

-HEE Click-
Aw, I bred my first brindle

Crescent Estate

12:12:17 River / Crescent

What do we think about my profile so far? it's a work in progress still.

Black Moon Magic

11:57:37 Mori

Name ideas?
-HEE Click-

Imperial Warmbloods

11:56:10 Imp/Impie/Impy

~River
Your welcome, <3
~ Em
Pretty girl!

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May 26, 2021 08:02 PM

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Heyy guys

I'm currently trying to get back into art and I'm trying to find my own style. I think I'm getting there but I'm not completely happy with my work. I can't put my finger on what it could be. The pieces below are more realistic pieces and I'm going to try working on more fantasy-like pieces to see if that helps me improve. Anyways I'm getting off track.

I'm just looking for a few people to hardcore critique my art so I can try and improve to the point I'm comfortable and happy with my work :)

Examples:

(newest one where i've found my style ^^)

May 27, 2021 05:23 AM

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Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD

But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^'

For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^

And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high.

The backgrounds are always incredible. <3

I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3

May 27, 2021 05:54 AM

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Thank you so much I really apperciate it! Not too harsh at all <3

Werty said:

Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD

But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^'

For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^

And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high.

The backgrounds are always incredible. <3

I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3

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