Santana Rising
04:48:16 San
Would have been smarter if I hadn't grabbed the one shard from the falls I've already had two of by mistake (while having none of the others) 🤦🏻‍♀️
ArcticLights
04:37:48 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Ah, smart :)
Santana Rising
04:36:27 San
I'm very content with the bits usually taking about 30 minutes to craft- that way I can get to exploring to find new shards right on time 😉
Motonemi
04:35:09 AL, mum to Nemi
If a multi-craft got added I would be really happy
Santana Rising
04:34:01 San
They used to be a few hours. I'm glad Eve shortened the time on them.
ArcticLights
04:27:43 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Huh, never realised that crafting time varies on the same item. I have crafted some bits and its been between 5 and 44 minutes crafting time so far?
Golden Crest
04:16:46 | Eve
I believe so, it sounds exciting as I have a fair few bits and the pieces stacked up across accounts
Santana Rising
04:13:05 San
A Valentine's one? Glad we don't have to wait for Easter or the next Capture Party. I've stocked up on bits, but I use them for training so they are already earning their keep
Golden Crest
04:11:35 | Eve
It is a February event, super excited for it
Santana Rising
04:01:00 San
Really curious about that event tab. I wonder when it will be announced (as well as the new background I keep coming across but which hasn't been officially released either)
Santana Rising
03:59:18 San
Maybe you accidentally clicked on the 'event' tab? I can see the items just fine
Flying Stud
03:59:15 
Never mind i clicked event...
Flying Stud
03:58:27 
Why is the store not showing items?
Santana Rising
03:35:02 San
-HEE Click- she is a nice surprise!
Golden Crest
03:28:08 | Eve
My advice would be: Lunge the pony and make sure there is no lameness. If the pony is broken in, make the owners ride it through walk, trot and canter before you hop on. Make sure the pony is loose in the paddock when you arrive and not already caught or in a small yard / stable. Make sure there is no sweat marks as that would indicate that the owners have made the horse tired before you got there. Ensure the owner picks up all 4 hooves in front of you etc. If you would like anymore advice you are welcome to send me a message :)
Kingswood Eq
03:15:43 ghost
Going to view a potential loan pony in half an hour or so, anyone got any advice?
Santana Rising
03:01:43 San
I promised myself tofinally finish my story this year. Real life bulldozed over me last year and Ijust couldn't find the mindset to work on it. But it's so dear to my heart and I want to see it completed
Kanenoki Estate
02:56:15 Noki
green - you should!! i recently got back into writing a story for myself (which if i ever finish it, may try to get published at some stage) and i've been having a lot of fun with it lol
Greenheart Stables
02:38:02 Green|Gren|Grenlin
You know what? I need to get back into writing for the fun of it. Not to try and entertain a imaginary audience but for myself lol
Lunalovegood
02:32:16 Loony
Thanks Pera i have voted yet I may not be able to pay a lot.
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-insert smart title here- December 28, 2018 11:20 AM

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By Twilight Stables
She ran, bursting through the forest. Her pack beside her. As her pursuer came closer, all of her pack shifted, gaining extra speed and momentum to sprint through the forest.
They came into a clearing, and sniffed the air, and quickly shifted human.
Many people stepped into the clearing
They where surrounded
Ch. 1
Twilight sat in school, listening to her iPod.
“Miss mela, if you know this lesson enough to not listen, would you like to teach?” Came a voice from the whiteboard.
“N-no mrs. winsenburge”
“Then why don’t you put away that technology?”
“Yes madam.” Mrs. winsenburge was Twilight’s seventh grade teacher, and she spared no niceness to Twilight, even on her thirteenth birthday.
As her science teacher taught something very boring, Twilight watched the clock, like many other kids in her next class, she was very excited. In five minutes they would be getting on the bus.
Suddenly Twilight realized it was yet not five, but one!
“Don’t forget homework on page one-twenty si-“ but everyone was already out.
The crowd in the hallway was chaos, especially as the bell rang. Rangggggg it yelled, a pitiful sound, thought Twilight.
As Twilight boarded the bus, she saw something, no, someone running through the forest nearby. But, she ignored it.
The bus hit a bump, lurching forward.
“Seven bottles of pop on the wall-seven bottles o-“ the singing stopped as the bus came to a quick stop.
“Camp mountain!” Called out Mrs. Alana, Twilight’s favorite teacher, the nature and living things teacher. Twilight smiled. She had been preparing for this class camping trip for weeks, and twilight was ready. She checked her draw-string bag that she had looped over her shoulder. Lots of water, check. Extra provisions, check. Flint, check. Hunting knife, and cover, check. She thought, checking everything off. Then ran to the luggage area in the bus and surveying her other items. Tent, check. Medical kit, check. Backpack, check. She wasn’t allowed to bring backpacks into class, so she brought one in her extra items so she could use that instead. Twilight set to work moving everything into it, as other kids grabbed their stuff.
Suddenly, a fight broke out between two boys.
“It’s my tent! Mine was camo!” Shouted one, throwing a punch.
“No!! It’s mine! Mama got you the blue one!” The twins where fighting, again, as always.
“Everyone go set up your tents, we will go hiking soon.” Shouted Mrs. Alana, over the fighting boys.
Twilight set up her one-person tent and hiked with the class, enjoying the nature and beautiful forest around her. Once she thought she saw a face in the forest, but quickly forgot about it. And as she lay in her sleeping bag, provided by the teacher as she forgot to get one, she had forgot totally. As twilight drifted off, she felt at peace, at peace with the owls hoot hoot hooting, at peace with the wind, swishing in and out of trees and grass, and at peace with nature. All of it. Then the world fuzzed away.
Paws.
Those where what Twilight saw when she awoke at the moon’s full rise.
Paws. Four of them.
And she could move them, stand on them. Move, with them.
Suddenly a soft glow came from her fuzzy body, and she was human again, standing in her tent. That’s when she knew something was wrong. Something, or someone was watching, waiting for her.
She grabbed her bedroll, rolled it up, and put it in her pack, along with everything else but the tent, then stepped out, she looked around, noticing how she could see very well in the darkness, and could she hear! She could hear a young bunny, shifting underground just below, and, wow, she could smell! Like, really smell. She could smell the forest, the leaves of the trees, the sticky sap that oozed off one nearby.
Twilight felt the warm tingling of this new thing inside her.
This new… thing, felt just right.
Ch.2

Twilight looked back at her campsite, she heard the zipper of someone’s tent, then a bunch of them. All of her friends, and classmates there looked,well, a lot of emotions.
“Did you guys see that?” Said one of the twins, beaming with excitement.
“The…” the other said, obviously feeling the exact opposite, “paws? And fur?”
“You guys had it happen too?” Asked twilight, and everyone nodded. “What a weird birthday…”
“Wait.” Said some of the kids, “your birthday?”
“Thirteenth” replyed twilight, but that was quite obvious. “Wait, I know this sounds weird.. but raise your hand if it's your thirteenth birthday..” slowly, all the kids raised their hands, the moonlight flickered on them, leaving shadows in their wake.
Suddenly, a branch snapped nearby, causing most heads to turn, and some kids to quickly become wolves, yelping with the surprise of it.
“Wow, a scardy-bunch!” Said a jokingly voice, as a young boy, looking no over the age of fifteen. Looking at them all.
“Who are you?” Said twilight, stepping forward as some kids stepped back.
“Fido” the boy joked, flashing a smirk “no, i am Leo, Leo of the wherewolves!” At that, some kids gasped. “Well, I'm here to collect you all. So, let's get a move on. All of you that are still in human form, try and reach that warmth in the back of your mind.” With that, Leo started off at a sprint, leaping over a log and with a flash, became a wolf mid-run “com-on!” He yelled, and twilight sprinted after him, and become wolf in the same way he did, hearing the pounding of the other kid’s paws striking the ground as they pursued Leo. Twilight felt almost, safe with Leo, but she had just met him, and, well he definitely wanted to get back quickly. So, they followed him. To where they would soon call home.
Ch. 3
Twilight gasped as she was allowed into the den, Crystals and minerals sparkled and glinted before her. “Come down here, everyone!” Called Leo, as he loaped downwards. Twilight and her class ran after. Everyone had to stop as they entered, becoming human, before they emerged from the darkness. Whispers came from wherewolves all around, many people where humans, with wolf ears and tails.
“The new group..”
“The wherepups”
“The proficided one is in there!” That's what they heard as the walked in,

Just because it's trash doesn't mean your allowed to steal, so please don't.

Edited at December 28, 2018 11:24 AM by Twilight Stables
-insert smart title here- December 28, 2018 11:21 AM

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Go ahead and post, just don't talk about anything other than this trash, thanks!

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