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Cozmic Elite
08:41:51 
Oh my, I wish the best angel <3
Insignia Elites
08:41:26 Em
Im curious of her next training session. -HEE Click-
MC Ace
08:41:01 McFossil
Fingers crossed for you Angels
Angels angels
08:39:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
I have her week 4 tomorrow
HWS
08:39:28 
how about Buffy
MC Ace
08:37:39 McFossil
Oh I'd be nervous too.
Cozmic Elite
08:37:09 
Lol its all good.
Cozmic Elite
08:36:56 
-HEE Click-
Im nervous for her week 4
MC Ace
08:36:47 McFossil
Lolz sorry Elite
MC Ace
08:35:53 McFossil
Ducking Fike
Cozmic Elite
08:35:33 
I had a panic and thought it was Monday for a good second pfft
MC Ace
08:35:23 McFossil
Got a name in mind for him now.
Angels angels
08:32:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Damn Ace that was rude
MC Ace
08:31:49 McFossil
Well... this was disappointing.

-HEE Click-
Angels angels
08:31:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Spunk would be a cute name too lol
Angels angels
08:30:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel
His face just looks like he is a spunky but lovable little man which makes me think or P names xD
Hummingbird Meadows
08:29:05 Bird
@Angels, lol going for the P names I see. XD
Angels angels
08:29:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Or Pluto lol
Angels angels
08:28:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
For some reason the first thing that came to mind when I saw his face is he needs a P name.
Like Pebbles, Poncho, Popcorn, Pip, Peanut, pistachio lol
Hummingbird Meadows
08:25:24 Bird
I need some name ideas for this little guy. He comes home Friday.
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Cozmic Elite
08:41:51 
Oh my, I wish the best angel <3
Insignia Elites
08:41:26 Em
Im curious of her next training session. -HEE Click-
MC Ace
08:41:01 McFossil
Fingers crossed for you Angels
Angels angels
08:39:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
I have her week 4 tomorrow
HWS
08:39:28 
how about Buffy
MC Ace
08:37:39 McFossil
Oh I'd be nervous too.
Cozmic Elite
08:37:09 
Lol its all good.
Cozmic Elite
08:36:56 
-HEE Click-
Im nervous for her week 4
MC Ace
08:36:47 McFossil
Lolz sorry Elite
MC Ace
08:35:53 McFossil
Ducking Fike
Cozmic Elite
08:35:33 
I had a panic and thought it was Monday for a good second pfft
MC Ace
08:35:23 McFossil
Got a name in mind for him now.
Angels angels
08:32:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Damn Ace that was rude
MC Ace
08:31:49 McFossil
Well... this was disappointing.

-HEE Click-
Angels angels
08:31:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Spunk would be a cute name too lol
Angels angels
08:30:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel
His face just looks like he is a spunky but lovable little man which makes me think or P names xD
Hummingbird Meadows
08:29:05 Bird
@Angels, lol going for the P names I see. XD
Angels angels
08:29:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Or Pluto lol
Angels angels
08:28:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
For some reason the first thing that came to mind when I saw his face is he needs a P name.
Like Pebbles, Poncho, Popcorn, Pip, Peanut, pistachio lol
Hummingbird Meadows
08:25:24 Bird
I need some name ideas for this little guy. He comes home Friday.
-Click-

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HRAs Creative Writing Stories February 22, 2021 08:45 PM


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So this is just going to be a collection of my short stories.
Some might have TW, meaning Trigger Warning.
You are free to give me critique, but I would rather it through PMs so theres no posts other than mine on this forum :)

Edited at February 22, 2021 08:47 PM by Hell Raised Arabians
HRAs Creative Writing Stories February 22, 2021 08:46 PM


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TW - mentions of suicide

The Note

By the time I had gone outside, many thoughts had flooded my mind. Why when I was sixteen? How long ago had it been written?

I open the brown paper package, my hands trembling ever so slightly as I pull out the first solid item. It was a picture frame with a tree bark design. Inside the frame was a picture of me and my father. I remember the moment vividly.

It was my fifth birthday, and unfortunately the day my father committed.

I delve back into the package and grasp at the last remaining item. It was a letter from my father. I read through it slowly, hearing word for word in his voice.

“Dear Jaz,

I understand how you must feel. I too, am disappointed in myself. I just ended up resulting to nothing, feeling nothing. The last time I actually smiled was in that photograph.

You’re sixteen now. What an achievement! I can see your mothers proud smile as you attend your first dance. And when you achieve your perfect grades. I’m proud of you Jaz, don’t you ever forget that. As you walk down the aisle on your wedding day, I’ll be walking with you with a big smile on my face.

I love you Jaz, forever and always,

Xx Dad. “

My whole body began trembling as I sobbed uncontrollably. Part of me was relieved to finally know what had happened. Yet another part was angry, furious even, with him because of what he did. Though, he wasn’t entirely to blame, and the past is in the past. If only she walked in on him before he did it. Before that ungodly piece of rope took the life of the man she loved the most.

Word count - 292

HRAs Creative Writing Stories February 22, 2021 09:17 PM


Rosewood Elites
 
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Looks amzing so far!

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