Sam
06:00:56 
-HEE Click-
Not to bad
Sagruesal
06:00:25 Ru
Celeste
counting from the left: 2,4,6
Valley Sports
05:57:05 Sam
Who should I rate today 🧐
Gem Queens Estate
05:56:11 Snow❆Gem
So... actually the answer is yes, but have to be quite old for the game...
Wraithcry Farm
05:56:00 Celeste 🌕
And that photo is from the day I planted them- so it may not be good yet to think about trimming. Which is why I moved them onto the porch so they would not flood in the storm
Gem Queens Estate
05:55:10 Snow❆Gem
@fasque

No, unless its like 60+ years old. lol
Wraithcry Farm
05:52:37 Celeste 🌕
Which one is the petunia? I would have to have my mom help me trim because I do not know how yet. I am lucky they are event still alive
Sagruesal
05:45:27 Ru
Celeste
This petunia needs a trim, if possible
GhostWood
04:55:45 Lysa
Oh i feel like i know what those are i can't think of it though. They are pretty though!
Wraithcry Farm
04:49:37 Celeste 🌕
They sure are! I love them 😍
Fasque
04:31:01 
Does anybody know if rider age plays a role in retirement?
Wraithcry Farm
04:21:53 Celeste 🌕
Here we go
-Click-
Wraithcry Farm
04:21:04 Celeste 🌕
I cannot remember. Hang on I have a pic.
GhostWood
04:20:16 Lysa
Celeste, what kind of flowers?
Wraithcry Farm
04:19:00 Celeste 🌕
Ah yes. Storm season. I am in limbo on whether or not to move my flowers back off the porch or leave them there
GhostWood
04:14:47 Lysa
Min...yeah...this is one of those days where i'm glad i work an office job and i don't miss bringing horses in or walking dogs.
Aeronautica
04:07:53 Wixy / Azi <3
I got 8/20 for my philosophy mock exam, might cry later
Elite Equines
03:59:34 Bones
Well, I'm gonna have a lot to FR on RO... Only got 2 semi decent horses on capture day and ironically they weren't even the two that I used maps to catch haha
Azure Eyes
03:58:32 Azure
-HEE Click-

This coat is gogeous.
SuperTuna
03:53:55 
Nooooo....i forgot about capture party and missed it😅
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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM

Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM
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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM

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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM

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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM
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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM

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