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Wait what??
-HEE Click-
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05:56:01 AL (RID/WB)
You could send link on pm
dekuisbestboi
05:42:29 Deku
I would show you her but I put her up for sale and I don't wanna get in trouble for it :'(
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-HEE Click-
.-.
confederate_racers
05:41:57 
only if horses irl could have coats like this lol
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05:41:34 Deku
rerolling*
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05:41:26 Capri
Mega rip
dekuisbestboi
05:40:53 Deku
yup!
you guys get some of the prettiest babs. I messed up my pretty baby cause I kept retooling and I regretted it
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-HEE Click-
I also bred this boy on ro
confederate_racers
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capricorn her head!!! soo pretty
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Thanks Deku
dekuisbestboi
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@capri woah that's an interesting little filly! pretty none the less but wow
dekuisbestboi
05:38:22 Deku
your welcome uwu
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-HEE Click-
<3
confederate_racers
05:37:40 
thank you <3
dekuisbestboi
05:37:18 Deku
both are beautiful beans holy heck
dekuisbestboi
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@confederate such a gorgeous bean <3
confederate_racers
05:36:21 
-HEE Click- i meant to show her....im drooling
dekuisbestboi
05:28:03 Deku
so I kinda asked the person I liked out to go to the school football game he said idk I will think about it :')

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM

TheTriggeredHipster
 
Posts: 803
#430104


Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:

After (changing color tones):


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:

After:



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM

Crystal Heart Estate
 
Posts: 481
#430178
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM

TheTriggeredHipster
 
Posts: 803
#430193


Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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