Sunset Grove Farm
Same here lol. O have quite a few ocs form my time rping in wp, I ended up leaving wp and need to track done my very detailed ocs >~>

I'm stupid and didn't write them down in my notes
07:24:11 Kirra
Supernatural is one of my favourite genres
~ Hades ~
07:23:14 Chat Loner
G'night peoples !
Sunset Grove Farm
Will do ^^

If anyone has any plot suggestions let me know, stoll trying to decide between supernatural, human or canines
07:21:51 Kirra
Awesome, let me know when it's done :)
Sunset Grove Farm
Great :D

It will be semi lit to lit because I want everyone to have something to actually reply to

I'll start working on it in my notes and then copy and paste it into the forum because it's annoying to make a wip forum lol
07:16:59 Kirra
Yesss sunset :)
Sunset Grove Farm
Just curious, I haven't made an rp on hee for almost a year now and I haven't rpes in almost a month

Would anyone be interested in a fantasy or semi realistic detailed roleplay?
California Valley
07:12:17 Cali | Kale | Call
Oh nice! I might be getting another Shepherd puppy because I really miss my other one that passed away. I would love a Dutch Shepherd
~ Hades ~
07:08:34 Chat Loner
So Lynk is GSD x American Staghound x GSP
California Valley
07:07:45 Cali | Kale | Call
Lab or retriever?
~ Hades ~
07:06:50 Chat Loner
He's in fact part GSD but what else is he hmm
California Valley
07:06:31 Cali | Kale | Call
Hades he looks like he has some GSD in him or some kind of Shepherd
Varchie Jones
07:06:04 Shelvie
Anyone want to start a rp? Please PM me with topics if you're up to it!
~ Hades ~
07:04:55 Chat Loner
From a different angle
~ Hades ~
07:03:58 Chat Loner
My itty bitty big boy
Guess his breeds
~ Hades ~
07:03:11 Chat Loner
Didn't see Cali's message but whoo I got something right for once
07:03:04 Bailey
Same Hades lol
07:02:56 Tangle || Woody
Oh. That makes sense
~ Hades ~
07:02:53 Chat Loner
Cocker Spaniel x King Charles Cavalier I'm guessing
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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM

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Crystal Heart Estate said:

TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play

Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:


After (changing color tones):

- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM

Crystal Heart Estate
Posts: 670
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM

Posts: 836

Crystal Heart Estate said:
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33

<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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