Rain Plains
08:24:41 Kelan/Rain
Myth
Lol the world may never know
Hot 2 Trot
08:24:32 Holly
Grace
Fingers crossed she gives ya something good!
Mythological
08:22:30 Crowley | Myth
Why do I have an S bravery
Little_Butterfly
08:22:15 Butter
Just found out I have the night off sweet! But I have night shift Sunday, so that means tomorrow I can train Balto some more hoping heÂ’ll get the hang of heel again.
Glass Arrow Acres
08:21:45 Grace
Holly
Wow, I'd like to get an E+ bravery... I will be so mad if I do all this work and she's less than an E
Mythological
08:21:02 Crowley | Myth
Well He decided to lunge himself on the lead rope as I held it.
Hot 2 Trot
08:19:59 Holly
Noc
Thanks!

Grace
I one time had a horse that spooked first time but turned out to be elite O.O
Rain Plains
08:19:32 Kelan/Rain
Oooph, what'd he do myth?
Glass Arrow Acres
08:18:43 Grace
So now I have to wait 19min until I can explore again
The Golden Stars
08:18:30 Noc
holly i love your profile
Hot 2 Trot
08:15:51 Holly
Worldclass not premium
Hot 2 Trot
08:15:28 Holly
I only keep elites and premium for my bravery program but my ratings have all sorts of braverys
Glass Arrow Acres
08:15:17 Grace
Myth
Well she's not scared of anything, I got photos of foals, fish, butterfly but I couldn't get one of Chewbacca (bigfoot) in my head I think she gave him stink eye and resting B-face lmao
Hot 2 Trot
08:14:17 Holly
Myth
All together i think its like 3 or something. I did have more but their gone now
DragonsRidge
08:13:23 Tahiri
Not all my captures are rated yet for bravery, but I have gotten an Elite and several Premiums already. So exciting!
Mythological
08:13:11 Crowley | Myth
I keep**
Mythological
08:12:52 Crowley | Myth
I E+ braves
Mythological
08:12:23 Crowley | Myth
Holly
How many Ws do you have?
The Golden Stars
08:11:19 Noc
is elite bravery good to have this filly has it -HEE Click-
Hot 2 Trot
08:11:04 Holly
I managed to catch 2 Elite braverys from yesterday
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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

Araminta Farms
 
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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM

Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

Araminta Farms
 
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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

Amhain Dull Liath
 
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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

Morning View
 
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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM

Kuewi knn stable
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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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