Dakota
07:12:06 
Ice is falling from the sky and they expect me to leave for work? I think not lmao
Mythological
07:09:27 Crowley | Myth
Are we twins?
Mythological
07:09:04 Crowley | Myth
Grimm? >.>
Dakota
07:08:25 
Myth
Toast is better, but like, lightly toasted
Dakota
07:08:02 
Hello pookiegrimm
Mythological
07:07:47 Crowley | Myth
Oat meal or toast...toast I think.
Mythological
07:06:34 Crowley | Myth
Dakota
Yea lol
Dakota
07:05:36 
Myth
If only we got to pick and choose ey?
Mythological
07:05:31 Crowley | Myth
Dakota
I get David but Tom? XD I do love Minecraft.
Wicca Wilds
07:05:07 Grimm(us)
👀
Dakota
07:00:03 
Myth
Lmao thatÂ’s crazy, I often have gaming dreams where it just feels like IÂ’m playing one of my games and get something good, then wake up and become very disappointed
Mythological
06:57:11 Crowley | Myth
Dakota
Tom Huddleston + Minecraft
David Tennat + Minecraft
...
Dutch Manors
06:55:20 Ace/Dutch/July
tired lol
Dakota
06:54:38 
Myth
Okay but what if I do 🤔
Dreams are interesting to hear about no matter how strange or disturbing
Still Water Stables
06:54:02 Oriyana
Makes it easier for people with insane numbers of horses lol
Mythological
06:52:50 Crowley | Myth
Dakota
You don't want to know about mine...

Moon
You?
White_thundacat
06:52:10 Thunda/Cat
Totally forgot there was a mass name change option for the barn. 🤦‍♀️
Dutch Manors
06:50:15 Ace/Dutch/July
myth, good
Dakota
06:49:47 
Myth
Mine are too realistic so I wake up in a full panic thinking something has happened or I'm late for work 😂
Mythological
06:49:08 Crowley | Myth
Moon
I am good.

Dakota
I don't mind my dreams but yeesh lol
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Riptide: New Beginnings (Short Story) June 20, 2019 05:23 PM

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Ok, so this is a little story that kind of just popped in my mind one day, and this is what I have so far.. I'm not sure if I'll continue it, but I'd still like to share it with you guys!
Please let me know how you like it <3

The first thing I remember is coming out of something warm, into something cold and wet. A shiver overtook my body from the sudden change and I let out a weak little whinny. I was immediately answered by a nicker, the familiar smell of my mother filling my nostrils as she nuzzled me, her lips moving against my fur as she licked and groomed me.

I started feeling warmer, and nudged my mother, nibbling at her mane. I let out a snort as her muzzle softly knocked against me, letting me know I needed to stand. My first try ended up a disaster. I tried to stand up and abruptly fell over, letting out a squeal and I ended up on my back with my legs in the air.

My mother shook her head and let out an amused whinny before nudging me over and helping me up this time. I stood shakily on legs that wanted to wobble and do everything but stand still. After a few moments, I felt steady enough to take a step forward. That seemed to work, so I continued to take small little steps all around my mother, trying to get used to these legs of mine.

I sniffed the ground, feeling the green grass prick my nose and the rain drops soak my muzzle, snorting in surprise at how cold it felt. I lifted my head and shook my body, the drops from the constant drizzle flying off my fur. I went over to my mother, nuzzling across her body until I found her milk, suckling her and flicking my tail in happy abandon as I got my fill, resting against her front legs with my head against her stomach, sleepy and content. We both dozed, tired from the days' events, knowing that tomorrow I would be introduced to the herd.

4 months (July) ~~~~~~~~~~

I pranced a couple yards from Echo, my mother. I had learned that I had got my mahogany bay colored coat from her, white tobiano and frame markings covering our similar coats. My splash white markings came from Father, who I had come to find out was the lead stallion.

I lifted my head and looked for him, seeing him a little way from the herd, keeping watch. His splash white markings contrasted brightly with his black coat, muscles moving under his fur as he took a step and leaned down to grab some grass.

I nickered to my mom to say I was going to see Father, and she nickered her agreement, warning me not to irritate him too much. I snorted and trotted towards Father, his form growing as I got closer, reminding me of how big he was. I neighed a greeting, and he huffed in reply, his amber eyes glancing down at me.

I flipped my tail as I raised my head towards his, and he briefly touched my nose to his before returning to his watching. I munched happily on grass next to him, lifting my head occasionally and tried to pretend I was Father, watching over the herd. I quickly got bored, and spotting the other foals playing, nickered a good-bye to Father before joining them.

I whinnied in greeting, jumping into a game of tag. Merca, a black filly nipped at my rump, making me 'it'. I immediately turned and chased after a palomino colt named Tocka. I was intercepted by Scarlet, a blood bay filly, who bared her teeth at me and challenged me to catch her as she took off. She was fast and quick, and it took me a little bit, but I finally caught her. By that time, everybody wanted to race, and we took off around the herd, hooves thundering, hind legs kicking, neighs and squeals rushing all over the meadow we were in.

Most of the adults just flicked their ears and continued munching grass, some snorted irritably, but none put up a fuss. That was just foals to them. It went on awhile before Father got tired off it, flattening his ears and stomping his foot before letting out a loud neigh that immediately made us split and arrow back to our mothers.

Echo huffed against my cheek and flipped her tail against my rump, the gentle retort sending me to snuggle under her belly and peek between her front legs with my big brown eyes. She snorted and rolled her eyes before continuing to eat, making it clear it was what I should have been doing as well. I went and suckled what I could before turning to eat some grass. Playtime was over, so it was time to graze and lazily doze in the sunshine.

8 months (November) ~~~~~~~~~~

Echo and I followed within the outskirts of the herd, plodding ahead slow and steady with our heads bowed down slightly. The warm weather had passed and turned into a bitterly cold winter. Icy wind blew over the hills and bit through our thick furry coats, making us shiver and huddle tighter together. Snow had already lightly falling, leaving powdery flakes all over the ground. The trail was hard and rocky that we followed, causing us to have lost an older mare named Ova, who had broken her leg and couldn't keep up with us anymore. Her weak whinnies full of pain and panic at us leaving still rang in my ears, long after we left her.

I shook my head and snorted, trying to get her cries out of my mind. I looked forward through the whipping wind at the black mare Tinna, who was our lead mare, hoping she would say she had found some shelter. I bowed my head as she continued pushing forward, ears back and head low as she continued walking into the wind. I sighed and turned to my mother, nuzzling her neck and letting out a whimper, hungry and wanting to rest. She gently huffed at me, blinking her tired eyes back at me as she continued on. I dutifully continued beside her.

I know not how long we clomped along on heavy legs, the white rolling land seeming to go on forever. Father suddenly let out a loud whinny, causing us to stop and look up, letting out cries and neighs of relief as we see the trees that he had seen. We trotted quickly to the crooked and bare trees, happy all the same to have some kind of shelter to hide under from the bitter wind. We huddled together, using our body heat to keep each other warm, nuzzling what sparse milk I could from my mother.

She nudged me into the middle of the circle when I was done, huddling against the other foals where we got the most of the warmth. Merca and Tocka were leaning against their mothers and dozing, warm and fed. Scarlet nickered at me softly, moving towards me and brushing her head against my shoulder before moving to groom my sparse mane. I returned the favor, flicking my tail happily at the thought of having someone to help pass this boring time of waiting for warm weather to return. We leaned against each other and dozed for some time, knowing only that we were glad of the shared warmth and the break against the chilly wind. Maybe this winter wouldn’t be so lonely after all.

12 months (March) ~~~~~~~~~~

Spring had come at last! My fuzzy coat grew out into sleek patterned fur, and my mane and tail had started to grow out from its scraggly looks. My mother had finally got through to me that I no longer needed to suckle her, and became more adventurous; maybe too much so. As a young colt, I wanted my freedom yet I also wanted the protection from the herd, so as much as I strayed, I always came back. Of course, I had many reasons to. My mother was here, as well as Father. It was all I knew.

Then, of course, there was Scarlet. Her sleek coat had a shine of copper in the sunlight, and whenever she looked at me her warm brown eyes had a shiver running through my body.

It was a warm day, sun shining and puffy clouds creeping across the sky. The herd was calm, dozing, eating and grooming each other. Father had took a liking to Marcella, a red roan mare with a wheat colored mane and tail. We knew within a month or two she would be with foal and we would be looking forward to another new generation.

I was grazing contentedly next to my mother, letting out soft wickers that she returned. The sun felt so nice on my fur, and I let out a long stretch before shaking myself out, hanging my head and lifting a back foot slightly as I decided to doze myself, closing my eyes and relaxing. I slowly started to fall asleep, knowing I was safe surrounded by the herd and with my mother close by.

The sound of panicked neighing woke me immediately, eyes white as I spun around, trying to find out what was going on. Echo whinnied loudly, helping me pinpoint her as I galloped straight towards the herd, spinning to thump against her side, asking what was going on.

Edited at June 20, 2019 05:31 PM by Crystal Heart Estate
Riptide: New Beginnings (Short Story) June 20, 2019 05:27 PM

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Wolves, she cried, smacking me with her head to send me into a gallop as the rest of the herd took off, Tinna in the front and Father in the back. We sped towards the trees, hoping they would be of some help in protection. We dove into the shelter of the trees with their freshly budded leaves, lunging around to see Father had stopped before reaching them, facing the wolf pack of 4.

The wolves were skinny, with matted and torn fur. Their fangs and sharp teeth showed as they snarled at Father with dripping jaws, eyes wild with hunger. Winter had not been good to them, I thought, else they never would have attacked the herd. As they lunged towards Father, I squeaked and started forward to help him, only to have Tinna lunge in front of me with a whinny. She bared her teeth and snapped at me, warning me to not interfere. It was too dangerous for me to help, for I was not old enough nor had the muscle strength. Echo nickered at her in thanks and roughly nudged me back in the herd, ears back and huffing at me, irritated that I had tried to put myself in danger. I wisely backed into the herd, whimpering an apology.

The cries and bellows of my Father tore right through me, making me tremble in fear as i watched him fight the starving wolves. He bit and kicked and reared, killing one and severely injuring another. The two that were left snapped and his legs, one taking the front and the other his back legs. Father kicked the one in the back with ones of his hooves roughly, sending it tumbling head over heels. It immediately got back up and with a chilling howl, threw itself at Father and snapped its jaws over a hind legs, teeth tearing at flesh.

Father let out a terrible scream filled with pain, spinning around and using his teeth to clamp hard on the wolfs back, jerking his head to snap his spine with a loud crack. It immediately went limp and Father tossed it aside, spinning around to face the last wolf. He let out a growling neigh at the wolf and with a snarl of its own it turned and fled, leaving its packmates lying there. Everything immediately went quiet.

Father stood there breathing hard, eyeing the remaining wolves, letting out a snort when none of them moved. When he was satisfied that they were indeed dead, he turned stiffly and slowly made his way to the herd, unable to move or walk on his left hind leg. The muscles and tendons were torn, leaving a savage open wound and his white leg drenched in bright red blood. He had smaller wounds on his chest and front legs, but they would heal. The one on his back leg wouldn't.

The herd stood quietly, shock and sorrow surrounding them as they watched the once proud stallion walk deafeated towards them. Oh, we knew he would keep fighting and protecting the herd, but with his leg in that state, we all knew his long reign had ended and would be completely if he ever got in another fight. It was a big turning point in my life, for I knew that soon, Father would no longer be with us. It was a sombering thought.

14 months (July) ~~~~~~~~~~


Edited at June 20, 2019 05:42 PM by Crystal Heart Estate

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