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Sunset River Arabian
06:45:06 Athena - AAs
Realized today that when guys ask me out I have to make sure they know my age
Sunni
06:43:03 Sunni bunny
Thank you cove, I felt like it went well.
It's gonna be different from what I am used to.
Glacier Bay Cove
06:42:17 Arctic Katz
Really crossing my fingers for you, that you get the job, Sunni
Sunni
06:39:01 Sunni bunny
I found the right place for my interview, hopefully they call me back.
Angels angels
06:31:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I really don't want to have to rematch but the owner of the stud I need straws from for two od my mares hasn't been on in a few days DX
Driftwood Farms
06:30:56 
Sorry wrong chat
Driftwood Farms
06:30:44 
For sale!!!
Sire: Toxic Desire
Dam: FEDre X FETis 189
Tobiano Lady
06:24:27 Tobi 👻
redoing the SJ and Dressage naming themes. got Dressage down but now i'm stuck on SJ.
Witches or Stones/Minerals?
Gem Queens Estate
05:59:10 Snow❆Gem
Almost top of the hour, I gotta go. :(
Gem Queens Estate
05:57:47 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Ah, OK. Not every pet can live to granny age... but we wish they can have a good life as long as possible. Unless its a hellbender. LMAO Not the sallandmer thing with that name. ;P Another name is the snot otter.
pandemoniu_m
05:57:36 pheezy
snagged it, thanks angel lol
Mythological
05:56:11 Crowley
Middle age
Gem Queens Estate
05:55:49 Snow❆Gem
@myth

:( Is she middle age or old?
Angels angels
05:55:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Pheezy
Green glass is in store lol
Mythological
05:54:50 Crowley
Yorkie
Gemstone Stable
05:53:39 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Aussie or Yorkie?!
Mythological
05:51:15 Crowley
Gem
It's a waiting game to see if she survives.
Gemstone Stable
05:50:04 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Oh my dear! O.o
Tobiano Lady
05:49:34 Tobi 👻
Myth
Yeah I figured lol

I hope things get better for you soon <3
pandemoniu_m
05:47:58 pheezy
UGH i keep missing the green glass, this is torture X,D

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Sunset River Arabian
06:45:06 Athena - AAs
Realized today that when guys ask me out I have to make sure they know my age
Sunni
06:43:03 Sunni bunny
Thank you cove, I felt like it went well.
It's gonna be different from what I am used to.
Glacier Bay Cove
06:42:17 Arctic Katz
Really crossing my fingers for you, that you get the job, Sunni
Sunni
06:39:01 Sunni bunny
I found the right place for my interview, hopefully they call me back.
Angels angels
06:31:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I really don't want to have to rematch but the owner of the stud I need straws from for two od my mares hasn't been on in a few days DX
Driftwood Farms
06:30:56 
Sorry wrong chat
Driftwood Farms
06:30:44 
For sale!!!
Sire: Toxic Desire
Dam: FEDre X FETis 189
Tobiano Lady
06:24:27 Tobi 👻
redoing the SJ and Dressage naming themes. got Dressage down but now i'm stuck on SJ.
Witches or Stones/Minerals?
Gem Queens Estate
05:59:10 Snow❆Gem
Almost top of the hour, I gotta go. :(
Gem Queens Estate
05:57:47 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Ah, OK. Not every pet can live to granny age... but we wish they can have a good life as long as possible. Unless its a hellbender. LMAO Not the sallandmer thing with that name. ;P Another name is the snot otter.
pandemoniu_m
05:57:36 pheezy
snagged it, thanks angel lol
Mythological
05:56:11 Crowley
Middle age
Gem Queens Estate
05:55:49 Snow❆Gem
@myth

:( Is she middle age or old?
Angels angels
05:55:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Pheezy
Green glass is in store lol
Mythological
05:54:50 Crowley
Yorkie
Gemstone Stable
05:53:39 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Aussie or Yorkie?!
Mythological
05:51:15 Crowley
Gem
It's a waiting game to see if she survives.
Gemstone Stable
05:50:04 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Oh my dear! O.o
Tobiano Lady
05:49:34 Tobi 👻
Myth
Yeah I figured lol

I hope things get better for you soon <3
pandemoniu_m
05:47:58 pheezy
UGH i keep missing the green glass, this is torture X,D

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Critiques? July 11, 2023 11:09 PM


Widow Valley Farms
 
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#1123748
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This is my first ever fully done photo manip, and I was looking for some more experienced people to critique it. I am rather proud of it, but I have a tough skin so please, every word counts!
Also, how much do you think a good SB is for it?Things I know im not the greatest at but am working on:
Horse Shadow
Mane
General grounding
Edit: it would probably be helpful if I actually put the image up, huh?
The After:
The Before:

Edited at July 12, 2023 12:09 PM by Widow Valley Farms
Critiques? July 12, 2023 09:08 AM


WildWillow
 
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Welcome to the world of arting - this is a really great first manip! I'm afraid I can't help on SB pricing as I have been a T1 artist for quite a while and am really out of the loop with starter pricing.

Here are some things I really like:
- the action/movement of mane and tail
- the tone of the horse (yellow/golden) matching the tone of the background
- the markings are a nice bright white

Here are some things I would work on:
- The horse
It seems like you accidentally chopped off some of the horse's booty on the right side of the stock image. When cutting, make sure to go very slow with a hard brush. It's important to stay true to the stock horse's form (so no cutting off pieces of body) and making sure your lines are flowing nicely. If you really zoom in on the portion you cut off, you'll notice that the edge is pretty bumpy.
- The hoof color
Hooves aren't golden. :) If a horse has white markings going down to their legs, the hoof is almost always a light coral/cream color. Studying other images of horses, seeing what tones/colors are actually present in horses in real life in their coats, hooves, and mane are incredibly helpful!
- Blend the white markings
You did the markings beautifully, but they look a little too crisp to be "actually" on a horse's coat. With a smudging brush on low strength, just gently work around the edges of the white markings, smudging them ever so softly so it looks like a natural line of coat hairs.
- Shadow & highlights on the horse
While you have a great shadow on the ground, a shadow also needs to be on your horse! It seems as though light is coming from the back in the background. So the "top" portions of your horse need to be highlighted in a lighter yellow/golden color. Likewise, the "bottom" portions of your horse, especially the belly and hooves need to be cast in a darker tone to shadow them. This will provide lots of depth to your horse.
- The mane and tail
It looks like you have tried to draw the mane and tail by drawing each hair individually. It is much easier if, for the base of your mane and tail - you create an outline and then color it in completely. This will prevent "white space gaps" in your mane and tail.

If you would like, please do visit my step-by-step art guide. I have all of these topics broken down and explained much clearer there, along with photos of my artwork so you can follow me through the steps visually as well. :)
If you have any questions, feel free to comment there and I can help you.
Critiques? July 12, 2023 10:53 AM


Widow Valley Farms
 
Posts: 5688
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Thanks a bunch! I'm going to revisit this art piece and try to fix some things you've stated. Im very glad the shadow looks alright, so that was a win for me!
Critiques? July 12, 2023 12:07 PM


Widow Valley Farms
 
Posts: 5688
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This is what I did:
Added highlights/shadows (Your guide was very informative!)
Pasted hooves from original picture to the manip to correct color
Airbrushed under mane to attempt to make it less gappy/more full (cause I am not redrawing that xD)
Smudged the edges of white markings (mainly face)
What I didn't do:
I couldn't find a viable way to make the horse stock look less awkward, so I think its just gonna have to stay that way (Thank you for the erasing tips!)
I also didn't redraw the mane comepletely simply because I didn't want to risk losing the movement I have now, but I will do that on my next piece!

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