Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Golden Crest
12:15:09 | Eve
Heck yeah! Bought this wild guy yesterday and just tested his bravery! -HEE Click- 😍
KPH Equestrian
12:12:13 Rapcoon | Jester
boulder
...mmperhaps 3 day eventing?👀
Boulder Creek
12:10:11 
I wonder if I could run OTTR as a Jumper show... There are awesome jumping lineart.

To be honest - I don't even follow racing.
Maple Moth Meadows
11:55:11 Versa
River,
I'm glad! I'm well too, just waiting patiently for a dryer to finish up, ahah
pandemoniu_m
11:54:56 pheezy
jeez sorry for the wall of text
pandemoniu_m
11:54:40 pheezy
river
not exactly what you asked, but i own horses with my dad, and his dad (my grandpa) owns the property and a majority of the horses on the property. my grandpa is a stubborn bastard and one of his colts passed today and i have a hunch its because he was treating it for the wrong illness instead of calling a vet out. i love these animals but its very frustrating working with someone who no longer has their heart or mind in it, and usually cant have his body in it either because hes 80 years old and doesnt listen so he has to be babysat when he "works with the horses"
The Old Gods
11:54:08 Void Malign
...In my case, the horse liked me better than them lmfao
Gilded Roses
11:53:12 River / Brody
Versa
I'm great, how about you? ^^
Maple Moth Meadows
11:51:26 Versa
How is everyone tonight? <3
Gilded Roses
11:48:27 River / Brody
For anyone who owns horses in real life and got them through their parents, how did that work out?
pandemoniu_m
11:48:22 pheezy
-HEE Click-

realized i haven't seen this tobiano pattern before, hm
Glacier Bay Cove
11:44:11 Arctic Katz
For raiding stables
Glacier Bay Cove
11:43:48 Arctic Katz
See all of you tomorrow
Glacier Bay Cove
11:43:05 Arctic Katz
Incredible, Boulder, I can't wait for the next one
starmutt
11:41:02 marsh 🌈
How do I sponsor one of these boulder creek horse races xD
Pegasus Lane
11:40:46 Peggy (or) Peg
That was amazing Boulder!
Fantasy Horses
11:23:22 Fantasy
You could be a commentator lol
Fantasy Horses
11:23:06 Fantasy
Boulder
That is so good!
Boulder Creek
11:13:27 
My adrenaline is still up from writing the Racing Commentary:
-HEE Click-

I really enjoy finding the voice for it.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:40:51 Arctic Katz
At least I am not ebs broke anymore

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Golden Crest
12:15:09 | Eve
Heck yeah! Bought this wild guy yesterday and just tested his bravery! -HEE Click- 😍
KPH Equestrian
12:12:13 Rapcoon | Jester
boulder
...mmperhaps 3 day eventing?👀
Boulder Creek
12:10:11 
I wonder if I could run OTTR as a Jumper show... There are awesome jumping lineart.

To be honest - I don't even follow racing.
Maple Moth Meadows
11:55:11 Versa
River,
I'm glad! I'm well too, just waiting patiently for a dryer to finish up, ahah
pandemoniu_m
11:54:56 pheezy
jeez sorry for the wall of text
pandemoniu_m
11:54:40 pheezy
river
not exactly what you asked, but i own horses with my dad, and his dad (my grandpa) owns the property and a majority of the horses on the property. my grandpa is a stubborn bastard and one of his colts passed today and i have a hunch its because he was treating it for the wrong illness instead of calling a vet out. i love these animals but its very frustrating working with someone who no longer has their heart or mind in it, and usually cant have his body in it either because hes 80 years old and doesnt listen so he has to be babysat when he "works with the horses"
The Old Gods
11:54:08 Void Malign
...In my case, the horse liked me better than them lmfao
Gilded Roses
11:53:12 River / Brody
Versa
I'm great, how about you? ^^
Maple Moth Meadows
11:51:26 Versa
How is everyone tonight? <3
Gilded Roses
11:48:27 River / Brody
For anyone who owns horses in real life and got them through their parents, how did that work out?
pandemoniu_m
11:48:22 pheezy
-HEE Click-

realized i haven't seen this tobiano pattern before, hm
Glacier Bay Cove
11:44:11 Arctic Katz
For raiding stables
Glacier Bay Cove
11:43:48 Arctic Katz
See all of you tomorrow
Glacier Bay Cove
11:43:05 Arctic Katz
Incredible, Boulder, I can't wait for the next one
starmutt
11:41:02 marsh 🌈
How do I sponsor one of these boulder creek horse races xD
Pegasus Lane
11:40:46 Peggy (or) Peg
That was amazing Boulder!
Fantasy Horses
11:23:22 Fantasy
You could be a commentator lol
Fantasy Horses
11:23:06 Fantasy
Boulder
That is so good!
Boulder Creek
11:13:27 
My adrenaline is still up from writing the Racing Commentary:
-HEE Click-

I really enjoy finding the voice for it.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:40:51 Arctic Katz
At least I am not ebs broke anymore

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
Posts: 3283
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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