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03:38:51 Tobi | Nix

Green
Lucky!! Congrats :D

Hot 2 Trot *Showing*

03:33:30 Holly

Well for a random breeding that's alright
-HEE Click-

03:25:40 Lily/Alpine

Cali, it's lovely! I would make the credits a little more visible though

03:21:19 Pera/ peral

Greenheart Stables

03:16:41 Green|Gren|Grenlin

@Nix
Had lots of love this RO from my SD, that whole barn is nothing but showstoppers after I hard culled

03:14:26 Storm

Its very dark. Maybe a little more light in the piece?

Calela Eventing

03:13:43 Cali

-Click-
What do we think?

03:11:21 Tobi | Nix

Goddamn Green *.*

03:03:17 Storm

Lol

Valhalla Acreage

03:02:53 Eivor

I love how the accountant is like your -69K in debt but all your ebs is in your savings account so you don't spend it

Greenheart Stables

02:53:37 Green|Gren|Grenlin

-HEE Click-
Uugh he couldn't be any more gorgeous, literally spited me when I said he was gonna flop lol

02:49:04 Storm

Yikes. Sounds like my life, but I can't get away yet. At least i have school to look forward to. Even with a speech class I dread

02:47:29 ♘Tosk

it was horrible. Worst 9 days xD but i survived.

02:47:01 Storm

Oh haha. I'm watching him now for sure though XD love how he did. Hopefully the trip went smooth

02:46:22 ♘Tosk

No, i just returned from my work trip last night and still had to train from last week ^^

02:45:52 Storm

We can train now??

Lucky

02:42:49 luvky

Gosky
woah that is a nice wk 7

02:40:16 Gosky

holy shet
-HEE Click-

Nightfall Dressage

02:39:52 Witchy

Thank you!

02:38:16 Gosky

time to train from last week still.

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03:38:51 Tobi | Nix

Green
Lucky!! Congrats :D

Hot 2 Trot *Showing*

03:33:30 Holly

Well for a random breeding that's alright
-HEE Click-

03:25:40 Lily/Alpine

Cali, it's lovely! I would make the credits a little more visible though

03:21:19 Pera/ peral

Greenheart Stables

03:16:41 Green|Gren|Grenlin

@Nix
Had lots of love this RO from my SD, that whole barn is nothing but showstoppers after I hard culled

03:14:26 Storm

Its very dark. Maybe a little more light in the piece?

Calela Eventing

03:13:43 Cali

-Click-
What do we think?

03:11:21 Tobi | Nix

Goddamn Green *.*

03:03:17 Storm

Lol

Valhalla Acreage

03:02:53 Eivor

I love how the accountant is like your -69K in debt but all your ebs is in your savings account so you don't spend it

Greenheart Stables

02:53:37 Green|Gren|Grenlin

-HEE Click-
Uugh he couldn't be any more gorgeous, literally spited me when I said he was gonna flop lol

02:49:04 Storm

Yikes. Sounds like my life, but I can't get away yet. At least i have school to look forward to. Even with a speech class I dread

02:47:29 ♘Tosk

it was horrible. Worst 9 days xD but i survived.

02:47:01 Storm

Oh haha. I'm watching him now for sure though XD love how he did. Hopefully the trip went smooth

02:46:22 ♘Tosk

No, i just returned from my work trip last night and still had to train from last week ^^

02:45:52 Storm

We can train now??

Lucky

02:42:49 luvky

Gosky
woah that is a nice wk 7

02:40:16 Gosky

holy shet
-HEE Click-

Nightfall Dressage

02:39:52 Witchy

Thank you!

02:38:16 Gosky

time to train from last week still.

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May 26, 2021 08:02 PM

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Heyy guys

I'm currently trying to get back into art and I'm trying to find my own style. I think I'm getting there but I'm not completely happy with my work. I can't put my finger on what it could be. The pieces below are more realistic pieces and I'm going to try working on more fantasy-like pieces to see if that helps me improve. Anyways I'm getting off track.

I'm just looking for a few people to hardcore critique my art so I can try and improve to the point I'm comfortable and happy with my work :)

Examples:

(newest one where i've found my style ^^)

May 27, 2021 05:23 AM

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Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD

But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^'

For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^

And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high.

The backgrounds are always incredible. <3

I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3

May 27, 2021 05:54 AM

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Thank you so much I really apperciate it! Not too harsh at all <3

Werty said:

Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD

But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^'

For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^

And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high.

The backgrounds are always incredible. <3

I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3

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