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Gemstone Stable

05:49:26 Snow❆Gem

@athena

Sorry, I'm busy. I haven't track any of my horses from last week yet! So I'm cramming all on Sunday evening...

Sunset River Arabian

05:48:51 Athena - AAs

None of them are nearly as stunning as the first one which makes me sad

Snitches' Stitches

05:48:25 Snitch

Athena
Love the last one. Gorgeous

Gemstone Stable

05:47:27 Snow❆Gem

The sounds of happy pigeons cooing... :D

-Click-

Sunset River Arabian

05:46:44 Athena - AAs

Been 1 year. Whos worthy of being the next memory horse?
current one: -HEE Click-
New options:
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Gemstone Stable

05:43:36 Snow❆Gem

@angels

Ah yes. :)

Gemstone Stable

05:42:05 Snow❆Gem

@gypsy

No, we don't check of COVID...

05:41:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Can't wait for week 8s tomorrow

Gypsy Family Farm

05:40:59

Gem, have you checked for COVID? That sounds like the latest variant.

Gemstone Stable

05:40:17 Snow❆Gem

@bay

See-ya! XD

Glacier Bay Cove

05:38:57 Arctic Katz

Gem

Glacier Bay Cove

05:38:52 Arctic Katz

Okay I will start on it later tonight, I have to poof

Gemstone Stable

05:35:14 Snow❆Gem

RIDs are next. :)

05:29:27 Snow❆Gem

*where

05:29:15 Snow❆Gem

Gosh, were are my manners. Thank you, you don't have to unless you wanna. ;P

05:28:39 Snow❆Gem

@bay

Feel free to take a look around! I have some pretty horses. I'm doing TB/X mainly. Trying for cream+pearls and also frames. :)

Glacier Bay Cove

05:27:06 Arctic Katz

Maybe I can make a painting for one of your horses, Gem

05:25:06 Snow❆Gem

Almost done with this accounts tracking...

05:21:57 Snow❆Gem

@bird

XD I can see why!

Hummingbird Meadows

05:21:23 Bird

@Snow gem, every time I watch it I smile.

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Gemstone Stable

05:49:26 Snow❆Gem

@athena

Sorry, I'm busy. I haven't track any of my horses from last week yet! So I'm cramming all on Sunday evening...

Sunset River Arabian

05:48:51 Athena - AAs

None of them are nearly as stunning as the first one which makes me sad

Snitches' Stitches

05:48:25 Snitch

Athena
Love the last one. Gorgeous

Gemstone Stable

05:47:27 Snow❆Gem

The sounds of happy pigeons cooing... :D

-Click-

Sunset River Arabian

05:46:44 Athena - AAs

Been 1 year. Whos worthy of being the next memory horse?
current one: -HEE Click-
New options:
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Gemstone Stable

05:43:36 Snow❆Gem

@angels

Ah yes. :)

Gemstone Stable

05:42:05 Snow❆Gem

@gypsy

No, we don't check of COVID...

05:41:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Can't wait for week 8s tomorrow

Gypsy Family Farm

05:40:59

Gem, have you checked for COVID? That sounds like the latest variant.

Gemstone Stable

05:40:17 Snow❆Gem

@bay

See-ya! XD

Glacier Bay Cove

05:38:57 Arctic Katz

Gem

Glacier Bay Cove

05:38:52 Arctic Katz

Okay I will start on it later tonight, I have to poof

Gemstone Stable

05:35:14 Snow❆Gem

RIDs are next. :)

05:29:27 Snow❆Gem

*where

05:29:15 Snow❆Gem

Gosh, were are my manners. Thank you, you don't have to unless you wanna. ;P

05:28:39 Snow❆Gem

@bay

Feel free to take a look around! I have some pretty horses. I'm doing TB/X mainly. Trying for cream+pearls and also frames. :)

Glacier Bay Cove

05:27:06 Arctic Katz

Maybe I can make a painting for one of your horses, Gem

05:25:06 Snow❆Gem

Almost done with this accounts tracking...

05:21:57 Snow❆Gem

@bird

XD I can see why!

Hummingbird Meadows

05:21:23 Bird

@Snow gem, every time I watch it I smile.

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May 26, 2021 08:02 PM

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Heyy guys

I'm currently trying to get back into art and I'm trying to find my own style. I think I'm getting there but I'm not completely happy with my work. I can't put my finger on what it could be. The pieces below are more realistic pieces and I'm going to try working on more fantasy-like pieces to see if that helps me improve. Anyways I'm getting off track.

I'm just looking for a few people to hardcore critique my art so I can try and improve to the point I'm comfortable and happy with my work :)

Examples:

(newest one where i've found my style ^^)

May 27, 2021 05:23 AM

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Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD

But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^'

For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^

And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high.

The backgrounds are always incredible. <3

I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3

May 27, 2021 05:54 AM

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Thank you so much I really apperciate it! Not too harsh at all <3

Werty said:

Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD

But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^'

For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^

And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high.

The backgrounds are always incredible. <3

I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3

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