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Sweet Valley
03:01:06 Anna
(* i was talking to Brindle Princess)
Sweet Valley
03:00:48 Anna
I don't think a white background goes well with a white kitty. Maybe do a gray? or brown
Sweet Valley
02:59:43 Anna
Oh cool. Well one thing to know is that cucumbers are sorta like squashes. if you pick them then another one grows where you picked one eventually.


This year I'm trying to grow peanuts!
Glacier Bay Valley
02:58:33 The Brindle Princess
Or would you suggest a different background for her
Mythological
02:55:40 Crowley
We grow cucumbers every year.
Mythological
02:55:11 Crowley
DD
You still here?
Cadence Farms
02:54:56 evebot
It's my first year growing cucs.
Cadence Farms
02:54:46 evebot
I didn't plant dill this year, no. I didn't realize the cucumbers would be so prolific.
Sweet Valley
02:53:29 Anna
Okay sounds good. Do you grow your own dill?
Cadence Farms
02:53:09 evebot
Just regular dill. I never made them before so I will start simple.
Sweet Valley
02:50:07 Anna
What kind of pickles are you gonna make? Dill, sweet, sour, or spicy?
Sweet Valley
02:49:31 Anna
Nice size cucumbers, eve!
Cadence Farms
02:48:50 evebot
I'm going to make some of them into pickles.
Glacier Bay Valley
02:48:47 The Brindle Princess
I want to use a marble background for her, if I can find a good one
High Ridge Meadows
02:47:25 
The site crashed for me when I went to look at the cucumbers.
Glacier Bay Valley
02:47:18 The Brindle Princess
Oh those look delicious, Eve
DragonsRidge
02:44:51 Tahiri
Eve-They look fantastic! Hope they are as tasty as they look. :D
Cadence Farms
02:42:50 evebot
Cucumbers I harvested today: -Click-
Glacier Bay Valley
02:36:32 The Brindle Princess
Looking for a decent background for my new avatar
Dash and Duchess
02:28:27 DD | ~Squizard~
Myth, aw darn! Hopefully it's an easy repair?

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Sweet Valley
03:01:06 Anna
(* i was talking to Brindle Princess)
Sweet Valley
03:00:48 Anna
I don't think a white background goes well with a white kitty. Maybe do a gray? or brown
Sweet Valley
02:59:43 Anna
Oh cool. Well one thing to know is that cucumbers are sorta like squashes. if you pick them then another one grows where you picked one eventually.


This year I'm trying to grow peanuts!
Glacier Bay Valley
02:58:33 The Brindle Princess
Or would you suggest a different background for her
Mythological
02:55:40 Crowley
We grow cucumbers every year.
Mythological
02:55:11 Crowley
DD
You still here?
Cadence Farms
02:54:56 evebot
It's my first year growing cucs.
Cadence Farms
02:54:46 evebot
I didn't plant dill this year, no. I didn't realize the cucumbers would be so prolific.
Sweet Valley
02:53:29 Anna
Okay sounds good. Do you grow your own dill?
Cadence Farms
02:53:09 evebot
Just regular dill. I never made them before so I will start simple.
Sweet Valley
02:50:07 Anna
What kind of pickles are you gonna make? Dill, sweet, sour, or spicy?
Sweet Valley
02:49:31 Anna
Nice size cucumbers, eve!
Cadence Farms
02:48:50 evebot
I'm going to make some of them into pickles.
Glacier Bay Valley
02:48:47 The Brindle Princess
I want to use a marble background for her, if I can find a good one
High Ridge Meadows
02:47:25 
The site crashed for me when I went to look at the cucumbers.
Glacier Bay Valley
02:47:18 The Brindle Princess
Oh those look delicious, Eve
DragonsRidge
02:44:51 Tahiri
Eve-They look fantastic! Hope they are as tasty as they look. :D
Cadence Farms
02:42:50 evebot
Cucumbers I harvested today: -Click-
Glacier Bay Valley
02:36:32 The Brindle Princess
Looking for a decent background for my new avatar
Dash and Duchess
02:28:27 DD | ~Squizard~
Myth, aw darn! Hopefully it's an easy repair?

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Newbie Critique October 13, 2024 04:32 PM


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This is the first piece I have ever done and was wondering if some more experienced artists could offer some tips and pointers? It would be really helpful to hear what people like and then what they think can be improved (a lot can I know lol). I think because so much needs improving, I'm a bit lost on where to start!
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 04:20 PM


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I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
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1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
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Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 05:18 PM


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Thank you so much! This is really helpful and gives me some clear direction
:D

Sagebrush said:
I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
.
1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
.
Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.



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