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EWW Black 5yo ISH Mare, 100k

both are tracked and trained
Dymphna
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Anyone got a green stained glass figurine they'd be willing to sell? Willing to pay at the store price. 100k
Pm me
Disney Acres
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EWW TB mare with Tobi 175k
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ZequineZ
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Big clear out, switching breeds

unbred brindle mare and a load of PEE-EEE mares for auction, ends Tuesday

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Fantasy Horses
03:55:10 Bravery + AD ISH
Auction! SD WC foals 193
- colts and fillies
- ESubSub+ ratings
- ONLY 900 to 2k SB!
- Perfect if you're wanting to get into SD Dressage!
- Ends on the 10th at 3pm GT!
-HEE Click-
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Come check out my store! Sherpa maps, rusty bits, decor, and more! Cheapest on the market!
-HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
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EEW starting at 5k
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Amelia Stormhand
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hookfang
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PWE WB stallion 10k
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Elysium Opalus
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G1/short gens
WEEs and KNN
WC Braves
Rare colors
CHEAP sales studs and broods
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Studs up.


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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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