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oof. I feel that. Or the filly matches fall through lol
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hrt str & spd = xc med
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Ansley their better as a show gelding to be honest
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Blue Diamond
12:06:29 Bluey
But what is that training
Blue Diamond
12:05:50 Bluey
Ugh, I can't get over this girl's arts <3
-HEE Click-
Blue Diamond
12:05:30 Bluey
Athena
pretty!
Sun Ranch
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Gotta do another few weeks to see what levels out.
Barbury Estates
12:05:06 Amelia
im back from starting my new account lol
Astral Appies
12:04:42 Athena's SA - KNNs
And Brindle! He was a lucky find lol
Sun Ranch
12:04:22 
-HEE Click-
Her training has been fun.
Sunset_Sahara
12:04:18 Straight as a circle
Athena

he's quite the cutie!
Sun Ranch
12:02:28 
Potatoes, rollover is on the 1st
SandWitch Arabians
12:02:26 Witchypoo
4 days
Astral Appies
12:02:26 Athena's SA - KNNs
That was a better Wk4 than I was expecting
-HEE Click-
Ice river stables
12:01:33 
-HEE Click- pretty
Sun Ranch
12:00:26 
Omg. My straws collection is a disaster. I still have some from year 168...when I started this account.
Wild_Potatoes
11:59:51 
How many days until RO?
The Northern Lights
11:56:44 Ansley
Okay thanks everyone
Blue Diamond
11:55:46 Bluey
Witchy
Thank you so much!
Blue Diamond
11:55:36 Bluey
Sun
oof. I feel that. Or the filly matches fall through lol
SandWitch Arabians
11:55:35 Witchypoo
hrt str & spd = xc med
Checkers Catch
11:55:31 
Ansley their better as a show gelding to be honest
Blue Sky Stables
11:54:54 Sweet Valley SA
Definitely yes, Ansley

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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