Horse Eden : Critiques?

10:58:41 Willow ~ TB Breeder

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I'm excited to see her week 7

10:55:02 Willow ~ TB Breeder

Em
That's not true, you have some pretty nice boys

10:52:51 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Sunni
On the bright side my stud has more W foals on his record

Insignia Elites

10:52:21 Em

Just breed to one of my studs xD all they give me are EEE lol

Sunni

10:51:26 Sunni bunny

Willow I gave up on mine, am $25k in the hole.

10:49:39 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

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Another one? Ugh, I give up

Insignia Elites

10:47:54 Em

I buy a new barn and then two days later Im like I need another one xD

10:46:50 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

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Another EEW?
Why is it the one time I want an EEE I can't get one?

Dash and Duchess

10:45:21 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, thank you!! Charm did such an awesome job on her!

10:44:55 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

DD
Wowzas, that is stunning

Dash and Duchess

10:42:56 DD | ~Squizard~

I can't *0* Her arts are so perfect 😭
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Bug in a Rug

10:41:40 Bug | Flea | KPH

lanie
he looks like a Trevor

or Ebony Rhythm, going off of his parents

Goddess lane

10:35:12 Lanie

Anyone have any ideas for his name?

Since I have yet to name him

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KPH Equestrian

10:34:15 Rapcoon | Jester

wind
ehh freshman LBs aren't all that helpful; since only 3yos can be on them, there's a good amount of EWEs and lower, so pretty much any stud with enough foals can get on them

Insignia Elites

10:34:03 Em

Can someone look at my stud Weaver and tell me what you think. I know he isn't the strongest out there but I feel like he had produced quite well

10:33:05 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

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I was breeding for an EEE. Now I still have that quest

Sunni

10:32:27 Sunni bunny

Wind the lead board isn't my strong suit.
I'd say it's pretty good.

KPH Equestrian

10:31:09 Rapcoon | Jester

goldspur
I'd say so, given his rating and pedigree

Sunni

10:31:06 Sunni bunny

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Didn't complete my quest but, am not as mad XD
at least his colorful EEE.

Wild Wind Stables

10:31:03 Wind

Is placing in the top 30 on a freshman sire single breed leaderboard any good? He's an X.

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10:58:41 Willow ~ TB Breeder

-HEE Click-
I'm excited to see her week 7

10:55:02 Willow ~ TB Breeder

Em
That's not true, you have some pretty nice boys

10:52:51 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Sunni
On the bright side my stud has more W foals on his record

Insignia Elites

10:52:21 Em

Just breed to one of my studs xD all they give me are EEE lol

Sunni

10:51:26 Sunni bunny

Willow I gave up on mine, am $25k in the hole.

10:49:39 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
Another one? Ugh, I give up

Insignia Elites

10:47:54 Em

I buy a new barn and then two days later Im like I need another one xD

10:46:50 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
Another EEW?
Why is it the one time I want an EEE I can't get one?

Dash and Duchess

10:45:21 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, thank you!! Charm did such an awesome job on her!

10:44:55 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

DD
Wowzas, that is stunning

Dash and Duchess

10:42:56 DD | ~Squizard~

I can't *0* Her arts are so perfect 😭
-HEE Click-

Bug in a Rug

10:41:40 Bug | Flea | KPH

lanie
he looks like a Trevor

or Ebony Rhythm, going off of his parents

Goddess lane

10:35:12 Lanie

Anyone have any ideas for his name?

Since I have yet to name him

-HEE Click-

KPH Equestrian

10:34:15 Rapcoon | Jester

wind
ehh freshman LBs aren't all that helpful; since only 3yos can be on them, there's a good amount of EWEs and lower, so pretty much any stud with enough foals can get on them

Insignia Elites

10:34:03 Em

Can someone look at my stud Weaver and tell me what you think. I know he isn't the strongest out there but I feel like he had produced quite well

10:33:05 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
I was breeding for an EEE. Now I still have that quest

Sunni

10:32:27 Sunni bunny

Wind the lead board isn't my strong suit.
I'd say it's pretty good.

KPH Equestrian

10:31:09 Rapcoon | Jester

goldspur
I'd say so, given his rating and pedigree

Sunni

10:31:06 Sunni bunny

-HEE Click-
Didn't complete my quest but, am not as mad XD
at least his colorful EEE.

Wild Wind Stables

10:31:03 Wind

Is placing in the top 30 on a freshman sire single breed leaderboard any good? He's an X.

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

Casanova

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

Casanova

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

Casanova

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM