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Sunni

03:41:45 Sunni bunny

Loony I got photos of my dogs on my profile.
Apollo and Loki are brothers.

Lunalovegood

03:39:29 Loony/Loony Tune

ZZ my dog does, Even if I don’t let her XD she’s curled up next to me right now

Sunni

03:38:53 Sunni bunny

Haha my dog Apollo dose the same thing, I yawned and about gagged as he licked the back of my throat.
My husband thought it was funny.

ZequineZ

03:37:12 ZEZ - ZZ

My dog would go for the mouth too if you let her lol

Lunalovegood

03:36:16 Loony/Loony Tune

Sunni, Dont worry my dog likes licking human Tongues

Sunni

03:31:47 Sunni bunny

Haha loony my cat likes to lick my face, she will spend 30 minutes grooming me.
Only problem with that is she will lick your eyes.
It hurts XD normally I close my eyes in time.

Lunalovegood

03:28:39 Loony/Loony Tune

Sunni
You know what, I’m not gonna Ask

Sunni

03:28:12 Sunni bunny

I have no idea why my cat licks my open eye ball.

Lunalovegood

03:23:01 Loony/Loony Tune

Rose Think about the rating, Colour and price, If it looks about right, Go for it… (I’d be really intrigued to see the horse)

Sunni

03:16:18 Sunni bunny

Rose I feel you own that haha, if you like her and think she will fit into your barn I say go for it.

Golden Rose

03:15:23 Rose

I hate being in-between on buying a horse. I like her but just dunnoooo

Sunni

03:09:45 Sunni bunny

I hate am hungry right now.

Sunni

02:57:13 Sunni bunny

-HEE Click-
I adore this coat, she's a pretty AA.

Sunni

02:50:10 Sunni bunny

-HEE Click-
She is such a pretty pony but her rating is awful.

Sunni

02:43:54 Sunni bunny

Anyone wanna chat?

Sunni

02:21:33 Sunni bunny

I can't sleep, XC

Siren Sound Estates

02:18:25 S҉ Sem

ZEZ, I have about 500 foals to test per year ^^°
And the average wellbred foal goes about 15 moves until it spooks.

Kangaroo Studs

02:01:52 ZequineZ - ZZ

So close, but pretty good for a wild caught
-HEE Click-

Kangaroo Studs

02:00:16 ZequineZ - ZZ

It’s such a good feeling haha

Montana

01:59:13 Tana, Kae 2.0

Thanks!
I think my heart literally stopped for a sec 😂

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Sunni

03:41:45 Sunni bunny

Loony I got photos of my dogs on my profile.
Apollo and Loki are brothers.

Lunalovegood

03:39:29 Loony/Loony Tune

ZZ my dog does, Even if I don’t let her XD she’s curled up next to me right now

Sunni

03:38:53 Sunni bunny

Haha my dog Apollo dose the same thing, I yawned and about gagged as he licked the back of my throat.
My husband thought it was funny.

ZequineZ

03:37:12 ZEZ - ZZ

My dog would go for the mouth too if you let her lol

Lunalovegood

03:36:16 Loony/Loony Tune

Sunni, Dont worry my dog likes licking human Tongues

Sunni

03:31:47 Sunni bunny

Haha loony my cat likes to lick my face, she will spend 30 minutes grooming me.
Only problem with that is she will lick your eyes.
It hurts XD normally I close my eyes in time.

Lunalovegood

03:28:39 Loony/Loony Tune

Sunni
You know what, I’m not gonna Ask

Sunni

03:28:12 Sunni bunny

I have no idea why my cat licks my open eye ball.

Lunalovegood

03:23:01 Loony/Loony Tune

Rose Think about the rating, Colour and price, If it looks about right, Go for it… (I’d be really intrigued to see the horse)

Sunni

03:16:18 Sunni bunny

Rose I feel you own that haha, if you like her and think she will fit into your barn I say go for it.

Golden Rose

03:15:23 Rose

I hate being in-between on buying a horse. I like her but just dunnoooo

Sunni

03:09:45 Sunni bunny

I hate am hungry right now.

Sunni

02:57:13 Sunni bunny

-HEE Click-
I adore this coat, she's a pretty AA.

Sunni

02:50:10 Sunni bunny

-HEE Click-
She is such a pretty pony but her rating is awful.

Sunni

02:43:54 Sunni bunny

Anyone wanna chat?

Sunni

02:21:33 Sunni bunny

I can't sleep, XC

Siren Sound Estates

02:18:25 S҉ Sem

ZEZ, I have about 500 foals to test per year ^^°
And the average wellbred foal goes about 15 moves until it spooks.

Kangaroo Studs

02:01:52 ZequineZ - ZZ

So close, but pretty good for a wild caught
-HEE Click-

Kangaroo Studs

02:00:16 ZequineZ - ZZ

It’s such a good feeling haha

Montana

01:59:13 Tana, Kae 2.0

Thanks!
I think my heart literally stopped for a sec 😂

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

Former Stable

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

Former Stable

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

Former Stable

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#206055
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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

Fox Crest Manor

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

Critique

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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#206133
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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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