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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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05:05:38 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

i do virtual school so im on my computer all the time anyway. i make it work

Gem Queens Estate

05:04:55 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

I see. I've been there. BUT, looking back... I should have done the tough stuff before HEE. :(

05:04:36 Ivy / poison ivy

gem

now how did that happen ?? XD

Glacier Bay Cove

05:04:21 Arctic Katz

I ended up skipping that quest, Gem

05:03:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

true! Dual hard work. doing schoolwork right now too xD

Gem Queens Estate

05:03:34 Snow❆Gem

Breed a triple Premium Pearl horse (ee Prlprl CcrC)

SWE x ESS = PEE? lol

-HEE Click-

Gem Queens Estate

05:02:47 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Its called working hard. lol

05:01:03 Ivy / poison ivy

gem

like fanta said though. it's slow xD

Gem Queens Estate

05:00:41 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

OK. :)

04:59:36 Ivy / poison ivy

snow

and i'm in a pinch

Gem Queens Estate

04:59:15 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Yup, that works in a pinch. :D

04:56:06 Ivy / poison ivy

Fanta

yep

04:55:57 Ivy / poison ivy

it's a profit sooooo xD

04:55:30 Fantasy | Fanta

Ivy
It is a slow but rewarding process, that I can tell you :P

04:53:50 Ivy / poison ivy

buying cheap 2 year olds with bad ratings and FRing

04:53:04 Fantasy | Fanta

Ivy
Feel like sharing? :3

04:51:13 Ivy / poison ivy

omg. i have a great idea for money making...

Gem Queens Estate

04:50:51 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Ah yes. Everything comes and goes. I have pretty 'keepers' that I'll end up FRing becuase they don't show well or I need room.

04:50:00 Ivy / poison ivy

no i cant T-T. she stays xD

04:48:52 Ivy / poison ivy

Sad to see her go as she was one of my first horses here but she's not doing well 😥 -HEE Click-

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05:05:38 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

i do virtual school so im on my computer all the time anyway. i make it work

Gem Queens Estate

05:04:55 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

I see. I've been there. BUT, looking back... I should have done the tough stuff before HEE. :(

05:04:36 Ivy / poison ivy

gem

now how did that happen ?? XD

Glacier Bay Cove

05:04:21 Arctic Katz

I ended up skipping that quest, Gem

05:03:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

true! Dual hard work. doing schoolwork right now too xD

Gem Queens Estate

05:03:34 Snow❆Gem

Breed a triple Premium Pearl horse (ee Prlprl CcrC)

SWE x ESS = PEE? lol

-HEE Click-

Gem Queens Estate

05:02:47 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Its called working hard. lol

05:01:03 Ivy / poison ivy

gem

like fanta said though. it's slow xD

Gem Queens Estate

05:00:41 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

OK. :)

04:59:36 Ivy / poison ivy

snow

and i'm in a pinch

Gem Queens Estate

04:59:15 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Yup, that works in a pinch. :D

04:56:06 Ivy / poison ivy

Fanta

yep

04:55:57 Ivy / poison ivy

it's a profit sooooo xD

04:55:30 Fantasy | Fanta

Ivy
It is a slow but rewarding process, that I can tell you :P

04:53:50 Ivy / poison ivy

buying cheap 2 year olds with bad ratings and FRing

04:53:04 Fantasy | Fanta

Ivy
Feel like sharing? :3

04:51:13 Ivy / poison ivy

omg. i have a great idea for money making...

Gem Queens Estate

04:50:51 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Ah yes. Everything comes and goes. I have pretty 'keepers' that I'll end up FRing becuase they don't show well or I need room.

04:50:00 Ivy / poison ivy

no i cant T-T. she stays xD

04:48:52 Ivy / poison ivy

Sad to see her go as she was one of my first horses here but she's not doing well 😥 -HEE Click-

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January 29, 2023 11:14 AM

ShiningStar Stables

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This is one of my more recent pieces, and I want some critique on it! I really want to improve, so rip it apart!

January 29, 2023 06:25 PM

Rivendell Steeds

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Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

January 29, 2023 07:09 PM

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I know some great mane tutorials I can send you if you'd like. I've seen white horses with black hair on this game, I think the mane just has too many strands and not enough movement. I'd love to share the tutorials that helped me. Just PM me!

January 29, 2023 07:17 PM

Bellbird Estate

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I agree here

Rivendell Steeds said:

Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

also, I would lower the saturation so the horse doesn't have a green hue, since it's standing over ice not grass.

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