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Cozmic Elite
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Sundance
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ISO a color XC PON brood for 193 that matches one of my boys - PM me for specifics!
Paradise Stables
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Port Royal Equines
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Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

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Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

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Grullo WWW Sire. He needs testing.

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Last call! FRing tomorrow. Geldings and Brave mares.
Foal Me Once Farms
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All set to be free ranged tomorrow, get them while you can.
Bluegrass Racing
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TB/X, Couple of SH and an ISH for auction. Y192, PPP to PEE. Mostly Fillies, couple of Colts and Geldings. Ends Today, July 31st at 9PM Game Time.

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Amethyst Ranch
04:56:51 Echo <3
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Art Auction
lass
04:10:39 Captain America
-HEE Click-
Cozmic Elite
04:07:58 Z
-HEE Click-
Speed glass 95k
Sundance
02:31:42 Sun - Tier 4 Artist
ISO a color XC PON brood for 193 that matches one of my boys - PM me for specifics!
Paradise Stables
01:25:56 Ariel / Tara
1. Broods for 193:
-HEE Click-

2. #1 PONLB up for stud:
-HEE Click-

Straw thread for 193:
-HEE Click-

3. Check out my sales barn:
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
01:14:28 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Grullo WWW Sire. He needs testing.

-HEE Click-
Last call! FRing tomorrow. Geldings and Brave mares.
Foal Me Once Farms
12:39:39 Roan🦋⃤
-HEE Click-

All set to be free ranged tomorrow, get them while you can.
Bluegrass Racing
11:57:39 Blue
TB/X, Couple of SH and an ISH for auction. Y192, PPP to PEE. Mostly Fillies, couple of Colts and Geldings. Ends Today, July 31st at 9PM Game Time.

-HEE Click-
Whispering Wood Barn
11:49:58 ~Whispy~
193 Svenned WWW TBLB:
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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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