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6 year old WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 200k. He's produced EWE's and EEE's.
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For sale green stained horse.
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Bravery mares and Geldings for 1k.
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EE combo foals with color for 1,500$
One mare with E bravery
One lace pattern Arab colt
All being released
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9yo EWE X mare for 15k. Proven EEE producer. -HEE Click-

SWP SH Filly for 1k. -HEE Click-

WSS SH Filly for 1k. -HEE Click-
Foal Me Once Farms
09:53:06 Roan🦋⃤
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Boulder Creek
09:52:08 
Help bring the Pretty Pony Pageant back!

-HEE Click-
Connally Stud
09:29:26 Senda
for sale
-HEE Click-
items and decor
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:53:56 Ally 💜
Looking for detergent. Its for a quest :) willing to pay
Skyrim
08:38:28 Wynter/Ghostly
-HEE Click-
6 year old WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 200k. He's produced EWE's and EEE's.
Sunni
08:18:18 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-

For sale green stained horse.
Port Royal Equines
08:17:48 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
-HEE Click-
Bravery mares and Geldings for 1k.
Wild_Potatoes
08:05:49 Potato
-HEE Click-
EE combo foals with color for 1,500$
One mare with E bravery
One lace pattern Arab colt
All being released
Foggy Mtn PONs
08:02:35 ISO Black Chestnuts!
Looking for Black Chestnuts, please PM me if you're selling any šŸ–¤

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! IĀ’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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