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MakeEm Fancy
12:31:24 Ally 💜
Im so thankful for our vet! She has been amazing especially with how worried I have been with this kitten and her eye.
Glacier Bay Cove
12:31:20 Arctic Katz
Super adorable kitten, Ally
Rainbow
12:30:04 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
Veterinarians work some good medical magic <3 I used to work in vetmed and the vets I worked with were some of the bets people I've ever worked with.
Crestwood Eq.
12:29:22 Ivy / poison ivy
I'm gonna go now! Bye loves! <33

-ivy
MakeEm Fancy
12:28:56 Ally 💜
We thought she might need surgery but the vet came up with a game plan to switch antibiotics and her eye looks 10 times better.
Crestwood Eq.
12:28:47 Ivy / poison ivy
Rainy

Thanks! those are some great ideas
MakeEm Fancy
12:27:58 Ally 💜
She had a nasty infection and she had chunks of hair missing :( Her tail still isnt evened out with hair but her infected eye isnt infected anymore. She does have a smaller eye than the other but the vet cleared it and said she would be okay
Rainbow
12:27:48 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ivy
Sure! You could also listen to music/sing, listen to a podcast, listen to an audiobook (some screen involved to get it going but then screen free), do some stretches/exercise/yoga...there's so much to do that doesn't require a screen :)
Rainbow
12:26:04 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
oh my lord, poor baby! She looks much better in the newer picture, good job!
Crestwood Eq.
12:25:32 Ivy / poison ivy
Rainy

thanks! if you think of anything else, let me know
Rainbow
12:25:26 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
I love the baby kitties <3
MakeEm Fancy
12:25:25 Ally 💜
This was her a few months ago
-Click-
Rainbow
12:24:56 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Go for a walk somewhere pretty, draw, do some sort of craft you enjoy, cook something, do a puzzle, color in a coloring book...there's more options but that's what I've got off the top of my head
MakeEm Fancy
12:24:32 Ally 💜
She was tiny when we found her @prism
Crestwood Eq.
12:23:56 Ivy / poison ivy
any other ideas
Rainbow
12:23:21 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
omg little baby <3
MakeEm Fancy
12:22:42 Ally 💜
🥺
-Click-
Crestwood Eq.
12:22:09 Ivy / poison ivy
Rainy

good idea
Rainbow
12:21:55 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ivy
Read a book! :D
Crestwood Eq.
12:20:52 Ivy / poison ivy
What should i do that's screenfree

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MakeEm Fancy
12:31:24 Ally 💜
Im so thankful for our vet! She has been amazing especially with how worried I have been with this kitten and her eye.
Glacier Bay Cove
12:31:20 Arctic Katz
Super adorable kitten, Ally
Rainbow
12:30:04 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
Veterinarians work some good medical magic <3 I used to work in vetmed and the vets I worked with were some of the bets people I've ever worked with.
Crestwood Eq.
12:29:22 Ivy / poison ivy
I'm gonna go now! Bye loves! <33

-ivy
MakeEm Fancy
12:28:56 Ally 💜
We thought she might need surgery but the vet came up with a game plan to switch antibiotics and her eye looks 10 times better.
Crestwood Eq.
12:28:47 Ivy / poison ivy
Rainy

Thanks! those are some great ideas
MakeEm Fancy
12:27:58 Ally 💜
She had a nasty infection and she had chunks of hair missing :( Her tail still isnt evened out with hair but her infected eye isnt infected anymore. She does have a smaller eye than the other but the vet cleared it and said she would be okay
Rainbow
12:27:48 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ivy
Sure! You could also listen to music/sing, listen to a podcast, listen to an audiobook (some screen involved to get it going but then screen free), do some stretches/exercise/yoga...there's so much to do that doesn't require a screen :)
Rainbow
12:26:04 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
oh my lord, poor baby! She looks much better in the newer picture, good job!
Crestwood Eq.
12:25:32 Ivy / poison ivy
Rainy

thanks! if you think of anything else, let me know
Rainbow
12:25:26 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
I love the baby kitties <3
MakeEm Fancy
12:25:25 Ally 💜
This was her a few months ago
-Click-
Rainbow
12:24:56 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Go for a walk somewhere pretty, draw, do some sort of craft you enjoy, cook something, do a puzzle, color in a coloring book...there's more options but that's what I've got off the top of my head
MakeEm Fancy
12:24:32 Ally 💜
She was tiny when we found her @prism
Crestwood Eq.
12:23:56 Ivy / poison ivy
any other ideas
Rainbow
12:23:21 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
omg little baby <3
MakeEm Fancy
12:22:42 Ally 💜
🥺
-Click-
Crestwood Eq.
12:22:09 Ivy / poison ivy
Rainy

good idea
Rainbow
12:21:55 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ivy
Read a book! :D
Crestwood Eq.
12:20:52 Ivy / poison ivy
What should i do that's screenfree

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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