Horse Eden : Critique please

MakeEm Fancy

04:26:18 Ally 💜

I made cheeseburger egg rolls and crab ragoons yesterday. Not sure what I will make tonight

Eaglecrest Orchard

04:26:09

Pretty -HEE Click-

Mythological

04:24:43 Crowley

Up not on

Mythological

04:24:04 Crowley

I blew on sales once because of my phone 💀

Angels angels

04:23:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I am so excited I am making swedish meatballs for dinner

Sweet Valley

04:22:59 Anna/Jewel

Cuz I had no idea why it posted 5 times

Sweet Valley

04:22:35 Anna/Jewel

Either my computer is slow or there's a bug in HEE

Munchkin Stables

04:21:45 Munn - PONs

Sure glad the chat didn't crash

MakeEm Fancy

04:21:04 Ally 💜

Try a map and capturing KNN. Thats how I complete that one

Araluen

04:20:04

skip or wait for a capture day and hope you get lucky with a map lol

Sweet Valley

04:19:53 Anna/Jewel

Ikes My computer is going nuts lol. I accidentally posted that 5 times sorry :O

Sweet Valley

04:19:04 Anna/Jewel

Quest Level 2
Craft
Craft Fertilizer.

You can find the recipe under Stable > Inventory > Craft. You can obtain the ingredients from the Store, or from Member Shops under Services > Search Items.
Reward: 1,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits
Quest Level 5
Bravery
Find some Eden Bucks while exploring.

Completed: 1/20
Reward: 3,000 Eden
Capture
Capture a horse with World Class in the Dressage Discipline.
Reward: 15,000 Eden Bucks

How in the world am I supposed to finish the last one? I have HORRID luck when it comes to capture...

Sweet Valley

04:19:04 Anna/Jewel

Quest Level 2
Craft
Craft Fertilizer.

You can find the recipe under Stable > Inventory > Craft. You can obtain the ingredients from the Store, or from Member Shops under Services > Search Items.
Reward: 1,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits
Quest Level 5
Bravery
Find some Eden Bucks while exploring.

Completed: 1/20
Reward: 3,000 Eden Bucks 5,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map
Quest Level 25
Capture
Capture a horse with World Class in the Dressage Discipline.
Reward: 15,000 Eden Bucks 10,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map

How in the world am I supposed to finish the last one? I have HORRID luck when it comes to capture...

Sweet Valley

04:19:03 Anna/Jewel

Sweet Valley

04:19:03 Anna/Jewel

Quest Level 2
Craft
Craft Fertilizer.

You can find the recipe under Stable > Inventory > Craft. You can obtain the ingredients from the Store, or from Member Shops under Services > Search Items.
Reward: 1,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits
Quest Level 5
Bravery
Find some Eden Bucks while exploring.

Completed: 1/20
Reward: 3,000 Eden Bucks 5,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map
Quest Level 25
Capture
Capture a horse with World Class in the Dressage Discipline.
Reward: 15,000 Eden Bucks 10,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map

How in the world am I supposed to finish the last one?

Sweet Valley

04:19:02 Anna/Jewel

Quest Level 2
Craft
Craft Fertilizer.

You can find the recipe under Stable > Inventory > Craft. You can obtain the ingredients from the Store, or from Member Shops under Services > Search Items.
Reward: 1,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits
Quest Level 5
Bravery
Find some Eden Bucks while exploring.

Completed: 1/20
Reward: 3,000 Eden Bucks 5,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map
Quest Level 25
Capture
Capture a horse with World Class in the Dressage Discipline.
Reward: 15,000 Eden Bucks 10,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map

How in the world am I supposed to finish the last one? I have HORRID luck when it comes to capture...

Glacier Bay Cove

04:17:19 Arctic Katz

Congratulations, Fantasy

Glacier Bay Cove

04:16:54 Arctic Katz

She is beyond beautiful, Canter. Stealing her for my collection, lol

Fantasy Horses

04:16:46 Fantasy | Fanta

Finally finished that nigel quest x-x

Prismatic

04:11:07 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Munn
Indeed. Oh well. I'll geld him and see what he does in jumping lol

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MakeEm Fancy

04:26:18 Ally 💜

I made cheeseburger egg rolls and crab ragoons yesterday. Not sure what I will make tonight

Eaglecrest Orchard

04:26:09

Pretty -HEE Click-

Mythological

04:24:43 Crowley

Up not on

Mythological

04:24:04 Crowley

I blew on sales once because of my phone 💀

Angels angels

04:23:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I am so excited I am making swedish meatballs for dinner

Sweet Valley

04:22:59 Anna/Jewel

Cuz I had no idea why it posted 5 times

Sweet Valley

04:22:35 Anna/Jewel

Either my computer is slow or there's a bug in HEE

Munchkin Stables

04:21:45 Munn - PONs

Sure glad the chat didn't crash

MakeEm Fancy

04:21:04 Ally 💜

Try a map and capturing KNN. Thats how I complete that one

Araluen

04:20:04

skip or wait for a capture day and hope you get lucky with a map lol

Sweet Valley

04:19:53 Anna/Jewel

Ikes My computer is going nuts lol. I accidentally posted that 5 times sorry :O

Sweet Valley

04:19:04 Anna/Jewel

Sweet Valley

04:19:04 Anna/Jewel

Quest Level 2
Craft
Craft Fertilizer.

You can find the recipe under Stable > Inventory > Craft. You can obtain the ingredients from the Store, or from Member Shops under Services > Search Items.
Reward: 1,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits
Quest Level 5
Bravery
Find some Eden Bucks while exploring.

Completed: 1/20
Reward: 3,000 Eden Bucks 5,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map
Quest Level 25
Capture
Capture a horse with World Class in the Dressage Discipline.
Reward: 15,000 Eden Bucks 10,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map

How in the world am I supposed to finish the last one? I have HORRID luck when it comes to capture...

Sweet Valley

04:19:03 Anna/Jewel

Sweet Valley

04:19:03 Anna/Jewel

Quest Level 2
Craft
Craft Fertilizer.

You can find the recipe under Stable > Inventory > Craft. You can obtain the ingredients from the Store, or from Member Shops under Services > Search Items.
Reward: 1,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits
Quest Level 5
Bravery
Find some Eden Bucks while exploring.

Completed: 1/20
Reward: 3,000 Eden Bucks 5,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map
Quest Level 25
Capture
Capture a horse with World Class in the Dressage Discipline.
Reward: 15,000 Eden Bucks 10,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map

How in the world am I supposed to finish the last one?

Sweet Valley

04:19:02 Anna/Jewel

Quest Level 2
Craft
Craft Fertilizer.

You can find the recipe under Stable > Inventory > Craft. You can obtain the ingredients from the Store, or from Member Shops under Services > Search Items.
Reward: 1,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits
Quest Level 5
Bravery
Find some Eden Bucks while exploring.

Completed: 1/20
Reward: 3,000 Eden Bucks 5,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map
Quest Level 25
Capture
Capture a horse with World Class in the Dressage Discipline.
Reward: 15,000 Eden Bucks 10,000Store Credits 2Pirate Map

How in the world am I supposed to finish the last one? I have HORRID luck when it comes to capture...

Glacier Bay Cove

04:17:19 Arctic Katz

Congratulations, Fantasy

Glacier Bay Cove

04:16:54 Arctic Katz

She is beyond beautiful, Canter. Stealing her for my collection, lol

Fantasy Horses

04:16:46 Fantasy | Fanta

Finally finished that nigel quest x-x

Prismatic

04:11:07 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Munn
Indeed. Oh well. I'll geld him and see what he does in jumping lol

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Critique please

October 14, 2018 10:47 AM

Former Stable

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#243806
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Hey guys,

For the first time i sat down today and made my first patterned horse with the technique of Vixen Studios Turtorial on youtube.

Special thanks to Fox Haven Farm for that one.

Iam kinda proud of this piece as it is my first of this kind and i dont think its to bad but i would like to have some critique on it, to see what others think and see what i can do better in the next one.

Good and Bad critique is welcome :D

http://i67.tinypic.com/xel8x0.jpg

(please dont ask if it is for sale, this is my first and i wont sell it)

Critique please

October 14, 2018 11:52 AM

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This is amazing!

Critique please

October 14, 2018 02:38 PM

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Very cute! nice job

kinda blurry though.

Critique please

October 14, 2018 02:52 PM

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Thank you, you two,

and yeah sunset i noticed that to, the horse stock was not great quality but i make sure to use way better once :D

I get that better done iam sure :D

Critique please

October 14, 2018 05:46 PM

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Very nice! I have a few critiques:

-The horse looks too big for the BG. That can be fixed by making the BG larger or shrinking the horse.

- I would try to add a few subtle lowlights and highlights to try and increase the horse's definition.

-Try using Colour Balance to help match the horse to the BG.

- Remember shadows! They are one of the key things to making art look convincing.

- Following shadows, try to match the lighting in the BG to the lighting on the horse. Here, the BG light source is in the middle but the horse's light source is coming from his rear end. If the horse's light source was more on his back, it would be easier to make the piece more realistic and convincing.

-Try adding a few more long wispy pieces of stray hair as well. ;)

Overall, well done! :D

Critique please

October 14, 2018 06:29 PM

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Trinity Equine said:
Very nice! I have a few critiques:

-The horse looks too big for the BG. That can be fixed by making the BG larger or shrinking the horse.
- I would try to add a few subtle lowlights and highlights to try and increase the horse's definition.
-Try using Colour Balance to help match the horse to the BG.
- Remember shadows! They are one of the key things to making art look convincing.
- Following shadows, try to match the lighting in the BG to the lighting on the horse. Here, the BG light source is in the middle but the horse's light source is coming from his rear end. If the horse's light source was more on his back, it would be easier to make the piece more realistic and convincing.
-Try adding a few more long wispy pieces of stray hair as well. ;)

Overall, well done! :D

Thank you so much, that for sure will help and i apreciate it :D

Critique please

October 16, 2018 02:50 PM

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