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Sunni
08:20:23 Sunni bunny
Plus I got a ton of anti nausea.
Sunni
08:19:54 Sunni bunny
Cove don't be sorry, things happen.
Best thing you can do is keep going on.
It only hurts me because I couldn't do for my kids.
Plus am better than I have been.
And when flares up do happen my husband makes things easier.
He does everything for the kids, but am the working one so XD
I hope they call me tomorrow about that job.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:17:28 Arctic Katz
Sunni
Glacier Bay Cove
08:17:23 Arctic Katz
Oh, my goodness, I am so sorry, Sunji
Sunset River Arabian
08:17:21 Athena - AAs
Just a multitude of diffent things. Some minor some that hinder my life at times but they're all so broad or not bad enough to be anything
Glacier Bay Cove
08:16:52 Arctic Katz
I bought some cookbooks and I use them a lot
Sunni
08:16:07 Sunni bunny
Doctor kept blaming mental health problems when it was actually inflammation of the bowels.
Everything I ate caused me pain.
Sunni
08:15:21 Sunni bunny
Athena even if it's just in your head the symptoms are real.
And it's unlikely to be in your head.
What are your symptoms like?
If you don't mind me asking.
Sunni
08:14:07 Sunni bunny
Cove my husband has bad acid reflux.
I wish I could help, I've done a lot of research for him to cook.
Sunset River Arabian
08:11:51 Athena - AAs
I'm kind of just starting to think its in my head and if just dont think about, itll go away because I'm not focusing on their being a problem
MakeEm Fancy
08:11:36 Ally 💜
I eat chicken, seafood and Turkey
Glacier Bay Cove
08:11:26 Arctic Katz
When I try new foods, I am never sure if they will trigger an upset stomach or not
Sunni
08:11:10 Sunni bunny
Cove I eat a lot chicken, it's one of the few meats that don't make me sick.
Sunni
08:10:23 Sunni bunny
Athena sometimes it's just trying different things.
Took me a year to find out I had lymphatic colic.
Inflammation in the bowels.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:10:20 Arctic Katz
Because of my acid reflux
Glacier Bay Cove
08:09:30 Arctic Katz
I had to cut back on processed meats, and start eating more lean meats, like chicken, turkey, shrimp and fish
Sunset River Arabian
08:09:14 Athena - AAs
I need to get my hormone levels checked but I've been putting it off for over 6 months. I just know they're going to be completely normal or just barely outside th enormal range and wont explain aything
Sunni
08:08:29 Sunni bunny
Might explain why I am exhausted all the time.
Sunni
08:07:35 Sunni bunny
Solar they haven't said anything about it. They just want to re check it.
It's been high the last 3 blood test.
MakeEm Fancy
08:07:25 Ally 💜
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Sunni
08:20:23 Sunni bunny
Plus I got a ton of anti nausea.
Sunni
08:19:54 Sunni bunny
Cove don't be sorry, things happen.
Best thing you can do is keep going on.
It only hurts me because I couldn't do for my kids.
Plus am better than I have been.
And when flares up do happen my husband makes things easier.
He does everything for the kids, but am the working one so XD
I hope they call me tomorrow about that job.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:17:28 Arctic Katz
Sunni
Glacier Bay Cove
08:17:23 Arctic Katz
Oh, my goodness, I am so sorry, Sunji
Sunset River Arabian
08:17:21 Athena - AAs
Just a multitude of diffent things. Some minor some that hinder my life at times but they're all so broad or not bad enough to be anything
Glacier Bay Cove
08:16:52 Arctic Katz
I bought some cookbooks and I use them a lot
Sunni
08:16:07 Sunni bunny
Doctor kept blaming mental health problems when it was actually inflammation of the bowels.
Everything I ate caused me pain.
Sunni
08:15:21 Sunni bunny
Athena even if it's just in your head the symptoms are real.
And it's unlikely to be in your head.
What are your symptoms like?
If you don't mind me asking.
Sunni
08:14:07 Sunni bunny
Cove my husband has bad acid reflux.
I wish I could help, I've done a lot of research for him to cook.
Sunset River Arabian
08:11:51 Athena - AAs
I'm kind of just starting to think its in my head and if just dont think about, itll go away because I'm not focusing on their being a problem
MakeEm Fancy
08:11:36 Ally 💜
I eat chicken, seafood and Turkey
Glacier Bay Cove
08:11:26 Arctic Katz
When I try new foods, I am never sure if they will trigger an upset stomach or not
Sunni
08:11:10 Sunni bunny
Cove I eat a lot chicken, it's one of the few meats that don't make me sick.
Sunni
08:10:23 Sunni bunny
Athena sometimes it's just trying different things.
Took me a year to find out I had lymphatic colic.
Inflammation in the bowels.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:10:20 Arctic Katz
Because of my acid reflux
Glacier Bay Cove
08:09:30 Arctic Katz
I had to cut back on processed meats, and start eating more lean meats, like chicken, turkey, shrimp and fish
Sunset River Arabian
08:09:14 Athena - AAs
I need to get my hormone levels checked but I've been putting it off for over 6 months. I just know they're going to be completely normal or just barely outside th enormal range and wont explain aything
Sunni
08:08:29 Sunni bunny
Might explain why I am exhausted all the time.
Sunni
08:07:35 Sunni bunny
Solar they haven't said anything about it. They just want to re check it.
It's been high the last 3 blood test.
MakeEm Fancy
08:07:25 Ally 💜
Sent Roan

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Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:24 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zt8M.jpg

I've been working on an updated art style for about two weeks now and I'd love some critiques on my first stage of progress with this. Please no negativity, I'd just love some suggestions and critique on this piece so I can improve :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:29 AM


Flipperruby30
 
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It looks amazing!!Try perhaps editing the top of the landscape behind but other wise Well Done!
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:47 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:53 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)



Thank you! This helps a lot.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:45 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:49 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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VellaDun Manor said:
Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)



Thank you! I've been thinking about trying to paint manes but they never come out how I'd like, no matter how many tutorials I look at xD I'll try that though as well as the lighting. There is a vignette on there, it's light though.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:53 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Mhmm, haha =)

I actually have struggled sooo much with hair, lol, and all the DA tutorials made it look super easy and then mine came out as crap xD So I honestly just played around myself until I finally found something that looked decent and had some potential if I refined the style a bit and such... but yea, feel free to PM me if you need any help with stuff like pesky hair x)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:56 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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I will :P I've got a tablet, but my stupid hand doesn't like drawing xD
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:06 PM

Former Stable
 
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It looks wonderful but the glow around the horse could be slightly less intense and the horse seems a little too smudged but I love it! Looks amazing
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:08 PM


Casanova
 
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It looks great! Only thing I would look into is manes (As mentioned above) But I love the strong glow around the horse! It's personally a style I really like.

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