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Ranch Lands Training

09:07:28 Lilly/PON Addict

*how people in humid states do it*

09:07:11 Ru

Can't be bothered to even name my yearlings, I should at least do that before I FR them all

Ranch Lands Training

09:07:09 Lilly/PON Addict

I don't know how people do it in humid states. After many years of drought we finally got rain. It's 8 AM, 20 above and 85% humidity. I'm dead 😅

09:06:30 Ru

RO is so close and I'm just chilling

Glacier Bay Valley

09:02:13 The Brindle Princess

I would probably do the same thing, if I owned horses

Mossy Lane Stables

09:01:27

As a horse owner, I am guilty of taking pictures of my ponies with all of the bad angles

Glacier Bay Cove

09:01:08 Arctic Katz

In the process of working on getting a second Sven, if I can

Sunni

08:58:06 Sunni bunny

Well am gonna be back on later

Glacier Bay Cove

08:54:47 Arctic Katz

Nice Appaloosa, interesting pictures

08:53:28 marsh 🌈

Thinking about the pictures my partner took of his aunt's horses and the absolutely absurd angles he chose. -Click-

Sunni

08:52:43 Sunni bunny

Cove that's kind of how kitty is.
She likes her space but she's is extremely cuddly to.
She will scream if I move her.

Glacier Bay Cove

08:52:15 Arctic Katz

No problem, I got you, Sunni

Glacier Bay Cove

08:51:10 Arctic Katz

My first two cats loved cuddling with me. Cats three and four go meh, we will cuddle with you, on our terms

Sunni

08:49:59 Sunni bunny

On me not in me "face slaps" why me no English right.

Sunni

08:49:33 Sunni bunny

She sleeps right in my arms and lays her body or head in me.
Then aggressive licks the skin off my face haha.

Sunni

08:48:52 Sunni bunny

Cove awww~ my old grey kitty is laying in my arms.
She waiting patiently for me to open my arm so she could cuddle.

Gem Queens Estate

08:48:27 Snow❆Gem

@sunni

Thank you very much! :D

Glacier Bay Cove

08:48:08 Arctic Katz

Now I have the foals to rate, all of my wild captures are done

Glacier Bay Cove

08:47:06 Arctic Katz

Lily sitting on the porch swing
-Click-

Sunni

08:46:56 Sunni bunny

See you gem, wish you luck on the job hunt.

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Ranch Lands Training

09:07:28 Lilly/PON Addict

*how people in humid states do it*

09:07:11 Ru

Can't be bothered to even name my yearlings, I should at least do that before I FR them all

Ranch Lands Training

09:07:09 Lilly/PON Addict

I don't know how people do it in humid states. After many years of drought we finally got rain. It's 8 AM, 20 above and 85% humidity. I'm dead 😅

09:06:30 Ru

RO is so close and I'm just chilling

Glacier Bay Valley

09:02:13 The Brindle Princess

I would probably do the same thing, if I owned horses

Mossy Lane Stables

09:01:27

As a horse owner, I am guilty of taking pictures of my ponies with all of the bad angles

Glacier Bay Cove

09:01:08 Arctic Katz

In the process of working on getting a second Sven, if I can

Sunni

08:58:06 Sunni bunny

Well am gonna be back on later

Glacier Bay Cove

08:54:47 Arctic Katz

Nice Appaloosa, interesting pictures

08:53:28 marsh 🌈

Thinking about the pictures my partner took of his aunt's horses and the absolutely absurd angles he chose. -Click-

Sunni

08:52:43 Sunni bunny

Cove that's kind of how kitty is.
She likes her space but she's is extremely cuddly to.
She will scream if I move her.

Glacier Bay Cove

08:52:15 Arctic Katz

No problem, I got you, Sunni

Glacier Bay Cove

08:51:10 Arctic Katz

My first two cats loved cuddling with me. Cats three and four go meh, we will cuddle with you, on our terms

Sunni

08:49:59 Sunni bunny

On me not in me "face slaps" why me no English right.

Sunni

08:49:33 Sunni bunny

She sleeps right in my arms and lays her body or head in me.
Then aggressive licks the skin off my face haha.

Sunni

08:48:52 Sunni bunny

Cove awww~ my old grey kitty is laying in my arms.
She waiting patiently for me to open my arm so she could cuddle.

Gem Queens Estate

08:48:27 Snow❆Gem

@sunni

Thank you very much! :D

Glacier Bay Cove

08:48:08 Arctic Katz

Now I have the foals to rate, all of my wild captures are done

Glacier Bay Cove

08:47:06 Arctic Katz

Lily sitting on the porch swing
-Click-

Sunni

08:46:56 Sunni bunny

See you gem, wish you luck on the job hunt.

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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