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Sagruesal
09:06:30 Ru
RO is so close and I'm just chilling
Glacier Bay Valley
09:02:13 The Brindle Princess
I would probably do the same thing, if I owned horses
Mossy Lane Stables
09:01:27 
As a horse owner, I am guilty of taking pictures of my ponies with all of the bad angles
Glacier Bay Cove
09:01:08 Arctic Katz
In the process of working on getting a second Sven, if I can
Sunni
08:58:06 Sunni bunny
Well am gonna be back on later
Glacier Bay Cove
08:54:47 Arctic Katz
Nice Appaloosa, interesting pictures
starmutt
08:53:28 marsh 🌈
Thinking about the pictures my partner took of his aunt's horses and the absolutely absurd angles he chose. -Click-
Sunni
08:52:43 Sunni bunny
Cove that's kind of how kitty is.
She likes her space but she's is extremely cuddly to.
She will scream if I move her.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:52:15 Arctic Katz
No problem, I got you, Sunni
Glacier Bay Cove
08:51:10 Arctic Katz
My first two cats loved cuddling with me. Cats three and four go meh, we will cuddle with you, on our terms
Sunni
08:49:59 Sunni bunny
On me not in me "face slaps" why me no English right.
Sunni
08:49:33 Sunni bunny
She sleeps right in my arms and lays her body or head in me.
Then aggressive licks the skin off my face haha.
Sunni
08:48:52 Sunni bunny
Cove awww~ my old grey kitty is laying in my arms.
She waiting patiently for me to open my arm so she could cuddle.
Gem Queens Estate
08:48:27 Snow❆Gem
@sunni

Thank you very much! :D
Glacier Bay Cove
08:48:08 Arctic Katz
Now I have the foals to rate, all of my wild captures are done
Glacier Bay Cove
08:47:06 Arctic Katz
Lily sitting on the porch swing
-Click-
Sunni
08:46:56 Sunni bunny
See you gem, wish you luck on the job hunt.
Gem Queens Estate
08:46:00 Snow❆Gem
@sunni

Ah, OK. We don't have any of those by here. And I hop i can just work at fast food for a few months then go to somewhere better. >.<

I gotta go now. See-yas!
Irish Fields
08:45:09 Fawn
Totally forgot her dam is Prlprl.
-HEE Click-
Sunni
08:44:34 Sunni bunny
Cove that's awesome, if I remember right you had to rate a lot of wild captures.

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Sagruesal
09:06:30 Ru
RO is so close and I'm just chilling
Glacier Bay Valley
09:02:13 The Brindle Princess
I would probably do the same thing, if I owned horses
Mossy Lane Stables
09:01:27 
As a horse owner, I am guilty of taking pictures of my ponies with all of the bad angles
Glacier Bay Cove
09:01:08 Arctic Katz
In the process of working on getting a second Sven, if I can
Sunni
08:58:06 Sunni bunny
Well am gonna be back on later
Glacier Bay Cove
08:54:47 Arctic Katz
Nice Appaloosa, interesting pictures
starmutt
08:53:28 marsh 🌈
Thinking about the pictures my partner took of his aunt's horses and the absolutely absurd angles he chose. -Click-
Sunni
08:52:43 Sunni bunny
Cove that's kind of how kitty is.
She likes her space but she's is extremely cuddly to.
She will scream if I move her.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:52:15 Arctic Katz
No problem, I got you, Sunni
Glacier Bay Cove
08:51:10 Arctic Katz
My first two cats loved cuddling with me. Cats three and four go meh, we will cuddle with you, on our terms
Sunni
08:49:59 Sunni bunny
On me not in me "face slaps" why me no English right.
Sunni
08:49:33 Sunni bunny
She sleeps right in my arms and lays her body or head in me.
Then aggressive licks the skin off my face haha.
Sunni
08:48:52 Sunni bunny
Cove awww~ my old grey kitty is laying in my arms.
She waiting patiently for me to open my arm so she could cuddle.
Gem Queens Estate
08:48:27 Snow❆Gem
@sunni

Thank you very much! :D
Glacier Bay Cove
08:48:08 Arctic Katz
Now I have the foals to rate, all of my wild captures are done
Glacier Bay Cove
08:47:06 Arctic Katz
Lily sitting on the porch swing
-Click-
Sunni
08:46:56 Sunni bunny
See you gem, wish you luck on the job hunt.
Gem Queens Estate
08:46:00 Snow❆Gem
@sunni

Ah, OK. We don't have any of those by here. And I hop i can just work at fast food for a few months then go to somewhere better. >.<

I gotta go now. See-yas!
Irish Fields
08:45:09 Fawn
Totally forgot her dam is Prlprl.
-HEE Click-
Sunni
08:44:34 Sunni bunny
Cove that's awesome, if I remember right you had to rate a lot of wild captures.

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Art criticism March 31, 2024 02:53 PM


Sagebrush
 
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Looks incredible! I love the muscle definition. In my opinion,
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You need different shades of brown. Grey muzzle, maybe lighter orange/yellow around the points, like chest, armpit, flank, muzzle, etc. darker brown on the bony parts and over the back, on the withers, forehead, etc. Example
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Hair, you need more shading. It's really nice and detailed, but it's a bit strong. You can make the lighting a bit more dramatic over the whole horse, which will make it seem like it fits in better. Purple parts can be darkened (I would use a near black colour on soft light or overlay, and then smudge and blur it to get the desired effect). And then the yellow are the bright highlights, which I would make a similar colour to your backlight, so a bright red/purple. Make sure to do the shadow and highlights on seperate layers from the hair, using a clipping mask Hair idea
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Personally, I would also darken your current strands of hair a smidge, and redo some highlight strands with the shade you're currently using! I would also add some shadowy strands. (Not really sure how to describe this, sorry!
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Lighting, darken up the front of the horse because that's away from the light (but not too much because you need to still see the horse, I showed kind of where I would darken it using purple), and yellow is where I would add the lighting. Example of lighting I would do lighting similar to how I did my My firework piece I do lighting with add, overlay, or soflight and use an almost white colour on a seperate layer. Darkness I use almost black and either soft light or overlay. Blue is kinda where I'd position a shadow, and I choose a colour that's almost black and lower the opacity. I would add some more light where I added the white dot, to make it more dramatic.
Personally, I'd also make the eye a little bit bigger, as that's a central focus of the horses face.
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I love the vibe of this piece, the stock and the background work really well together and the horse really seems to be there! The patterns also turned out really nice, especially in the darker lighting! I can't wait to see how much more you improve in the future!
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Edit: forgot to mention, I would also blur the background a bit and add some vignette! And usually tobiano comes with a face marking, so that might help bring the piece together. Heres a very messy example of all the changes I've suggested implemented on the actual piece! https://i.ibb.co/9b1h0Ts/IMG-8191.png

Edited at March 31, 2024 03:18 PM by Sagebrush
Art criticism March 31, 2024 04:16 PM


Enoki Valley
 
Posts: 2295
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Sagebrush said:
Looks incredible! I love the muscle definition. In my opinion,
.
You need different shades of brown. Grey muzzle, maybe lighter orange/yellow around the points, like chest, armpit, flank, muzzle, etc. darker brown on the bony parts and over the back, on the withers, forehead, etc. Example
.
Hair, you need more shading. It's really nice and detailed, but it's a bit strong. You can make the lighting a bit more dramatic over the whole horse, which will make it seem like it fits in better. Purple parts can be darkened (I would use a near black colour on soft light or overlay, and then smudge and blur it to get the desired effect). And then the yellow are the bright highlights, which I would make a similar colour to your backlight, so a bright red/purple. Make sure to do the shadow and highlights on seperate layers from the hair, using a clipping mask Hair idea
.
Personally, I would also darken your current strands of hair a smidge, and redo some highlight strands with the shade you're currently using! I would also add some shadowy strands. (Not really sure how to describe this, sorry!
.
Lighting, darken up the front of the horse because that's away from the light (but not too much because you need to still see the horse, I showed kind of where I would darken it using purple), and yellow is where I would add the lighting. Example of lighting I would do lighting similar to how I did my My firework piece I do lighting with add, overlay, or soflight and use an almost white colour on a seperate layer. Darkness I use almost black and either soft light or overlay. Blue is kinda where I'd position a shadow, and I choose a colour that's almost black and lower the opacity. I would add some more light where I added the white dot, to make it more dramatic.
Personally, I'd also make the eye a little bit bigger, as that's a central focus of the horses face.
.
I love the vibe of this piece, the stock and the background work really well together and the horse really seems to be there! The patterns also turned out really nice, especially in the darker lighting! I can't wait to see how much more you improve in the future!
.
Edit: forgot to mention, I would also blur the background a bit and add some vignette! And usually tobiano comes with a face marking, so that might help bring the piece together. Heres a very messy example of all the changes I've suggested implemented on the actual piece! https://i.ibb.co/9b1h0Ts/IMG-8191.png


Wow. I'm a huge fan of your pieces and I love the improvements you have made - totally agree! I struggle with lighting so I will be doing a massive focus on it. Thanks for all the critique, I know I takes time. Will be taking this onboard!
Art criticism June 2, 2024 07:36 AM


Enoki Valley
 
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Just popping this up hoping for a bit more criticism. I am hoping I have taken on board some things lol. I think it's a solid improvement. If you have any input, thanks a bunch!
Art criticism June 2, 2024 09:39 AM


Sagebrush
 
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I love it!!! The soft flow of the hair, the lighting, everything is really well done.
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Problems I see is that I don't like the boots on the horse. I would've tried to cover this up with rocks or shadows or replaced the legs with different stock/done a tack removal.
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Second, there's something missing to this piece. Unfortunately I can't put my finger on it, but it's making it feel a little incomplete, hopefully some other artist can help me figure out what it is!
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Overall extremely well done,, I can't find much else to critique!

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