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BlueBirdFalls
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VS Haven
Freshman Stud
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Stud fee: 0$ for testing
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Sweet Valley
02:24:56 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
-HEE Click-

Super low, low, low discount prices for a limited time only until August 7th
Fluffy's Cosy Home
02:19:24 Fluffy
I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
02:18:18 Jessie
WEE mare frost appy 15k obo
-HEE Click-
Painted Performance
02:16:56 
-HEE Click-
Selling my gelding army. All EEE blankets & pearls
Gem
02:16:45 Tier 1 Artist
Art rumble auction!! Bigsby - T1 winner <3
-HEE Click-

W SD boys for auction - RID and KNN, all disciplines. Some LB or previously LB! Plus some great color to add to your SD lines ^^
-HEE Click-
God is Mighty Stable
02:16:19 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
WWW possible KNN colts
Could also be WWE, WEE, EEE, EEP
10k
Disney Acres
02:14:19 
WWW TB with Tobi multiple LB 1 million
-HEE Click-
Metla
02:14:15 
Horses for sale

-HEE Click-
Blueberry Ledge
02:10:01 
-HEE Click-

Rares up for auction!
Brindles
Chimera
Peacock
Manchado
Sootys

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Critique July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png
Wondering what I could do next time to improve.
I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?
Critique July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.
Critique July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png
Critique July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png


Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image
Critique July 31, 2018 04:25 AM


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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they don’t taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)
Critique July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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