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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune

Hey chat, How are ya’ll

01:16:07 Pera/ peral

12:21:26 pheezy

their art is gorgeous kiwi :0

12:13:07 Kiwi

It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
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12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta

I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!

12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Oh absolutely :')

Dash and Duchess

12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT

12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P

Dash and Duchess

12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!

12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta

DD and KPH
Same here >_<
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Dash and Duchess

12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD

12:04:20 Blaze

DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3

Dash and Duchess

12:02:58 DD | ~Squizard~

KPH, Ooo good luck!! She's beautiful *^*
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Blaze, it is! I recommend it! <3

12:00:48 Blaze

DD <3
I heard Gifyu is good! And similar to imgbb

11:59:26 Rapcoon | Jester

DD
same >,>
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Dash and Duchess

11:56:09 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, Ooof! That sucks >.> if you want to try and switch gifyu works great! <3

11:55:32 Blaze

Lens dump is making my want to jump off a cliff right now omfggg

Dash and Duchess

11:55:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Ooo i am getting so nervous for 4s coming up >.<
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Glittercorn Magic

11:33:47 Diva`s Glitter Cave

There's copper ,golden, blood bay, mahogany and light bay

Kanenoki Estate

11:25:31 Noki

ahh okay. i just reread the reroll page, i didn't realise it changed shades of bay etc as well lol

thanks o7

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02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune

Hey chat, How are ya’ll

01:16:07 Pera/ peral

12:21:26 pheezy

their art is gorgeous kiwi :0

12:13:07 Kiwi

It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta

I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!

12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Oh absolutely :')

Dash and Duchess

12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT

12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P

Dash and Duchess

12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!

12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta

DD and KPH
Same here >_<
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD

12:04:20 Blaze

DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3

Dash and Duchess

12:02:58 DD | ~Squizard~

KPH, Ooo good luck!! She's beautiful *^*
-
Blaze, it is! I recommend it! <3

12:00:48 Blaze

DD <3
I heard Gifyu is good! And similar to imgbb

11:59:26 Rapcoon | Jester

DD
same >,>
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

11:56:09 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, Ooof! That sucks >.> if you want to try and switch gifyu works great! <3

11:55:32 Blaze

Lens dump is making my want to jump off a cliff right now omfggg

Dash and Duchess

11:55:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Ooo i am getting so nervous for 4s coming up >.<
-HEE Click-

Glittercorn Magic

11:33:47 Diva`s Glitter Cave

There's copper ,golden, blood bay, mahogany and light bay

Kanenoki Estate

11:25:31 Noki

ahh okay. i just reread the reroll page, i didn't realise it changed shades of bay etc as well lol

thanks o7

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September 29, 2019 01:58 PM

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Hello.. I will just have this for Critique of my art? I make it rarely so I won't put stuff up on here much.. Please be honest in what you think ;-; Thank chew!

https://postimg.cc/dLkmvCLb
What do you think of this? Is it O.K? I understand the coloring is a lot .. odd..

This is a WIP but I thought I'd share, I still have shading on the body, face hooves.. everywhere! And the mane & tail to color in... + everything else on the thing lol Also - This next piece is obviously not for use one HEE.

https://postimg.cc/7JkMSjb5
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Eek. Okay. Took alot of time off to work on line-art coloring and stuff. I decided to do a manip, so far I think it's ok. (It is a work in progress)

https://postimg.cc/SJzcWxW6

Does it seem ok so far?

Edited at December 30, 2019 11:45 PM by Broken Meadows

September 29, 2019 02:00 PM

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Fixed link

https://postimg.cc/dLkmvCLb

Edited at September 29, 2019 02:00 PM by ~Running Free~

September 29, 2019 03:46 PM

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Thank you @Freedom Elites
I don't know why the link won't work..?

September 29, 2019 11:03 PM

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I like it but it does look a bit odd with the lineart horse against such a realistic background.

October 3, 2019 01:17 PM

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I think the colouring is lovely,but the mane/rail needs a bit more...shape?

October 5, 2019 09:13 PM

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Coloring highlights and shadows on the horses would improve it a lot

October 22, 2019 11:14 PM

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Thank you all! I forgot about this forum :/

I have been working on shading / fitting the horses into different backgrounds.

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