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Rubygem

07:08:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

ok i gotta go byee

Rubygem

07:05:22 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

geez i was trying to do breed appovol and my lap top died then i plugged it in then it did a update lol

07:02:25

Hello Ivy :)

07:02:00

Oh no! Hats off to you though, that's dedication!

07:00:37 Ivy / poison ivy

hi

06:58:30 Storm

You're welcome. When I attempted to organize all of my barns, it froze the screen after a few, so it took 4 hours 🫠

06:55:34

Yeah, I'm on mobile using the desktop version, that's probably it. I'll try it again when I have access to my laptop again. Thanks! :)

06:53:14 Storm

Has to be on computer from what I've noticed

06:52:56 Storm

Normally you can move a single one. I've done that

06:52:12

The new-ish organization options for barns and pastures. You can make different "groups" for them now

06:51:03 Storm

What are you talking about?

06:44:28

I just made a new pastureland, but can't drop a singular pasture in it? It just takes them all lol. Is it a computer only type thing?

Minerva

06:10:47 Min

North, why not use the maps on capture days and sell any decent ones you get? Especially if you did a breed like KNN you'd probably make some money

iiSea

06:09:00 Sierra

-HEE Click-

I'd reroll him if he wasn't 1/1.. I like to see my flashy lol

06:02:30 Loony/Loony Tune

Should I reroll?
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05:59:21 Hails

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I have never been happier

05:58:16 Loony/Loony Tune

Ummm okay
-HEE Click-

05:55:24 Heyy it's Capp

Ok cool!

05:54:47 Loony/Loony Tune

Capp I have too many I need a new barn but don’t have the ebs so he has to go somewhere

05:54:24 Tano

I do on this account :D I do all breeds and single disciplines between my two accounts

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Rubygem

07:08:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

ok i gotta go byee

Rubygem

07:05:22 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

geez i was trying to do breed appovol and my lap top died then i plugged it in then it did a update lol

07:02:25

Hello Ivy :)

07:02:00

Oh no! Hats off to you though, that's dedication!

07:00:37 Ivy / poison ivy

hi

06:58:30 Storm

You're welcome. When I attempted to organize all of my barns, it froze the screen after a few, so it took 4 hours 🫠

06:55:34

Yeah, I'm on mobile using the desktop version, that's probably it. I'll try it again when I have access to my laptop again. Thanks! :)

06:53:14 Storm

Has to be on computer from what I've noticed

06:52:56 Storm

Normally you can move a single one. I've done that

06:52:12

The new-ish organization options for barns and pastures. You can make different "groups" for them now

06:51:03 Storm

What are you talking about?

06:44:28

I just made a new pastureland, but can't drop a singular pasture in it? It just takes them all lol. Is it a computer only type thing?

Minerva

06:10:47 Min

North, why not use the maps on capture days and sell any decent ones you get? Especially if you did a breed like KNN you'd probably make some money

iiSea

06:09:00 Sierra

-HEE Click-

I'd reroll him if he wasn't 1/1.. I like to see my flashy lol

06:02:30 Loony/Loony Tune

Should I reroll?
-HEE Click-

05:59:21 Hails

-HEE Click-

I have never been happier

05:58:16 Loony/Loony Tune

Ummm okay
-HEE Click-

05:55:24 Heyy it's Capp

Ok cool!

05:54:47 Loony/Loony Tune

Capp I have too many I need a new barn but don’t have the ebs so he has to go somewhere

05:54:24 Tano

I do on this account :D I do all breeds and single disciplines between my two accounts

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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