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Cloverleaf Castle

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New ABLB boy - Straws and LC available! -HEE Click-

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Selling ever single horse in this barn includes amazing WWE tobi combo girls pm me offers will take pretty much anything

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-HEE Click- need gone will take offers just need gone

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Includes WWW ISH mare and WWW AA mare
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EWW TB mare with Tobi 275k will lower
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Shop - new things added constantly
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Wild Wind Stables

11:19:28 Wind

EWE freshman I'd love some help with. He's rabicano which is pretty rare in X stallions from what I've seen.
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help me test - EWE producer so far. if he throws EWE+ I will refund :)

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EWE WB mare copper bay with splash 15k obo
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Cloverleaf Castle

11:32:14 KNN

New ABLB boy - Straws and LC available! -HEE Click-

11:32:10

11:32:05

Selling ever single horse in this barn includes amazing WWE tobi combo girls pm me offers will take pretty much anything

11:29:18 K

-HEE Click- need gone will take offers just need gone

11:27:06 Echo <3

Horses for sale
Includes WWW ISH mare and WWW AA mare
-HEE Click-

11:21:37

EWW TB mare with Tobi 275k will lower
-HEE Click-

11:21:24 :)Chase

Horses for breeding
-HEE Click-

Shop - new things added constantly
-HEE Click-

ISO
-HEE Click-

Wild Wind Stables

11:19:28 Wind

EWE freshman I'd love some help with. He's rabicano which is pretty rare in X stallions from what I've seen.
-HEE Click-

11:16:48

-HEE Click-

help me test - EWE producer so far. if he throws EWE+ I will refund :)

11:12:18

EWE WB mare copper bay with splash 15k obo
-HEE Click-

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September 16, 2018 06:56 PM

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Hello all! I am looking for critique I

(And help on making my art better). Don't be scared to tell me if it's horrible, I can handle it.

Will update if I finish more pieces

First piece:

https://i.postimg.cc/CxH3Z298/Untitled18-3.jpg

Second Piece:

https://i.postimg.cc/nhvdRQkf/Untitled19.jpg

Edited at September 16, 2018 07:51 PM by Ifaga Arabians

September 16, 2018 06:58 PM

Andraste Equine

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The piece is only 100x100 px. You can't see anything really

September 16, 2018 07:07 PM

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Andraste Equine said:
The piece is only 100x100 px. You can't see anything really

Fixed

September 16, 2018 07:22 PM

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I think this is a great start!

It's not sloppy or hard to look at.

I think the main thing I see that needs work is shading and highlights!

great job!

September 16, 2018 07:23 PM

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Sunset Equestrian said:
I think this is a great start!
It's not sloppy or hard to look at.
I think the main thing I see that needs work is shading and highlights!
great job!

Thank you! I've been working on shading and highlights. This piece required it

Edited at September 16, 2018 07:25 PM by Ifaga Arabians

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