Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Zodiac Stars
02:05:27 
Looking to buy an upgrade. I have 160k ready to send over. Please pm me
Pepper Tree Stables
02:05:24 
Looking to sell a few 3mo upgrades. 150k per.
Fluffy's Cosy Home
02:02:42 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
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I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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Fluffy's Cosy Home
02:02:42 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Stargazer
01:55:41 Stargazer
4 hours to go. PPP mares, most unbred for the season. RID/KNN mostly. Couple of SH

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Cross N Dot
01:49:48 
Looking for 3 month upgrade, end ready!
pandemoniu_m
01:41:51 pheezy
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Cheap fodder, most are 2+. 100-300ebs
Unbred Bravery mares P/E 600
EEEs 1k
EEW Combos 5k

Im also selling upgrades!
**For first time buyers:
1mo: 90k, 3mo: 180k
**For returning clients:
1mo: 80k, 3mo: 160k
Stone Ridge Acres
01:36:55 
Selling Appy PON Mares and foals!!! Mares are going for 1k while foals are going for 500!!! Also accepting offers, if interested please visit my stables Stone Ridge Acres.(sorry would put a link but don't know how)
Bermuda Triangle
01:18:17 Lost
Mare sale barn!
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EEE-WWW will take offers today :)

Also have a stally sell barn
Skyfeather Stables
01:15:46 Sab
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Foals for sale! Good show string additions

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Zodiac Stars
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Looking to buy an upgrade. I have 160k ready to send over. Please pm me
Pepper Tree Stables
02:05:24 
Looking to sell a few 3mo upgrades. 150k per.
Fluffy's Cosy Home
02:02:42 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Fluffy's Cosy Home
02:02:42 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Stargazer
01:55:41 Stargazer
4 hours to go. PPP mares, most unbred for the season. RID/KNN mostly. Couple of SH

-HEE Click-
Cross N Dot
01:49:48 
Looking for 3 month upgrade, end ready!
pandemoniu_m
01:41:51 pheezy
-HEE Click-
Cheap fodder, most are 2+. 100-300ebs
Unbred Bravery mares P/E 600
EEEs 1k
EEW Combos 5k

Im also selling upgrades!
**For first time buyers:
1mo: 90k, 3mo: 180k
**For returning clients:
1mo: 80k, 3mo: 160k
Stone Ridge Acres
01:36:55 
Selling Appy PON Mares and foals!!! Mares are going for 1k while foals are going for 500!!! Also accepting offers, if interested please visit my stables Stone Ridge Acres.(sorry would put a link but don't know how)
Bermuda Triangle
01:18:17 Lost
Mare sale barn!
-HEE Click-
EEE-WWW will take offers today :)

Also have a stally sell barn
Skyfeather Stables
01:15:46 Sab
-HEE Click-
Foals for sale! Good show string additions

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Would Love Critique August 20, 2019 01:49 PM


Zephyr Elites
 
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I made this piece last night before going to bed and I'm pretty happy with it, but I would love some critique.

https://i.lensdump.com/i/irGSs5.jpg
Would Love Critique August 20, 2019 01:52 PM


River Hill Stables
 
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Holy Cow that Is Gorgeous
Would Love Critique August 20, 2019 02:20 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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That peice is neauriful

Love the hair, always have with your art
The horse prep is great

Horse fits in the background and is an appropriate size

Try cutting the horse out so all peice sof the bg are gone, the green parts on the horse
Would Love Critique August 20, 2019 02:28 PM


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Beautiful Zeph!

1. There seem to be parts of the background left on the horse, odd green patches. Make sure to recolor those parts that are on the horse and cut off any you can.
2. There are odd black lines all over the horse, I assume you were going for shadowing? Make sure to blend these out really well and lessen their opacity a bit, the ones on the hindquarters are especially noticeable.
3. The eye has no depth, so try adding some highlights and lowlights to it where the light is hitting it and such.
4. There is an odd grey smudge on the horses front knee, maybe try to remove that. It's the small details that count.
5. Try adding a few more subtle green hues to the horse to really make it fit the background.

I think you did a great job overall on this one, love it!
Would Love Critique August 20, 2019 02:56 PM


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I didn't even realize I left some of the old background on there, thank you guys for pointing that out.

Thank you Amera for the advice, I will try to fix those things as soon as possible.
Would Love Critique August 21, 2019 04:48 PM


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Thank you for the critique guys! I did some touch up based on the advice from both of you, I hope this is better. :)

https://i.lensdump.com/i/itPWYH.jpg
Would Love Critique August 21, 2019 06:43 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Looks Awsome 😍
Would Love Critique August 21, 2019 11:05 PM


Nordic Designs
 
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The dark lines look much better now! And sometimes honestly the green isn't even the background. Sometimes it's just the lighting being a little more green on the legs like it's reflecting.

The eye looks a little better but it could still use some of that "shine" so to speak to make it look a little more rounded. Doesn't need to be huge as it can EASILY overwhelm the eye. The dark shading could be a little lighter on the face as well

Aside from that, the background is more clear than the horse so the background could use some blurring to make it seem like the horse is the focal point.

Your hair is wonderful, keep up the good work :)

Future reference the higher quality horse stock you choose the more clear and clean it'll come out and look :)
Would Love Critique August 22, 2019 07:03 AM


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Nordic Designs said:
The dark lines look much better now! And sometimes honestly the green isn't even the background. Sometimes it's just the lighting being a little more green on the legs like it's reflecting.

The eye looks a little better but it could still use some of that "shine" so to speak to make it look a little more rounded. Doesn't need to be huge as it can EASILY overwhelm the eye. The dark shading could be a little lighter on the face as well

Aside from that, the background is more clear than the horse so the background could use some blurring to make it seem like the horse is the focal point.

Your hair is wonderful, keep up the good work :)

Future reference the higher quality horse stock you choose the more clear and clean it'll come out and look :)


Thank you so much!
The background blurring is always something I forget to do. Lol
Would Love Critique August 22, 2019 09:12 PM

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Look great !


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