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Wisteria Run Farm

07:24:37 Solar/Ria

And Angel XD

Wisteria Run Farm

07:24:24 Solar/Ria

Oh, she's pretty Echo!

07:23:41 Anna/Jewel

Cool.

07:21:01 Echo <3

<3 I'm happy with that week 4 :D
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07:20:27 [1k+ brindles] Angel

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Got a W too

Calela Eventing

07:20:14 Cali

Hey guys

07:16:49 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Just a random capture lol

Silver Melody Acres

07:15:32 Solar - KNNs

Pretty girl lol

07:15:23 Anna/Jewel

Nice capture

07:12:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-HEE Click-
>.>

07:11:34 Anna/Jewel

Wow, Fern. Gorgeous Manchado

RFS Thoroughbreds

06:51:58 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

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example a

06:47:51

Hello chat

06:44:12 Rose

Macho looks so nice on TBs *.*

FirstLightFarms

06:18:29 puck

Appy TBs are so pretty. Too bad we only get them in Mnchado

06:01:46 Rose

They're trying to be appy's lol

05:55:24 Heyy it's Capp

Ha yes, ironically, its actually rampant in the TBs LOL

05:54:14 Rose

Thank you :)
My TB girly has it and I was thinking "isn't that an appy thing?" lol

05:48:56 Irish Capp

Any breed can carry PATN, only LP can express it tho. And that's KNN, SH, ISH, PON

05:47:56 Rose

Is PATN-2PATN-2 just a KNN thing?

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Wisteria Run Farm

07:24:37 Solar/Ria

And Angel XD

Wisteria Run Farm

07:24:24 Solar/Ria

Oh, she's pretty Echo!

07:23:41 Anna/Jewel

Cool.

07:21:01 Echo <3

<3 I'm happy with that week 4 :D
-HEE Click-

07:20:27 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-HEE Click-
Got a W too

Calela Eventing

07:20:14 Cali

Hey guys

07:16:49 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Just a random capture lol

Silver Melody Acres

07:15:32 Solar - KNNs

Pretty girl lol

07:15:23 Anna/Jewel

Nice capture

07:12:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-HEE Click-
>.>

07:11:34 Anna/Jewel

Wow, Fern. Gorgeous Manchado

RFS Thoroughbreds

06:51:58 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

-HEE Click-
example a

06:47:51

Hello chat

06:44:12 Rose

Macho looks so nice on TBs *.*

FirstLightFarms

06:18:29 puck

Appy TBs are so pretty. Too bad we only get them in Mnchado

06:01:46 Rose

They're trying to be appy's lol

05:55:24 Heyy it's Capp

Ha yes, ironically, its actually rampant in the TBs LOL

05:54:14 Rose

Thank you :)
My TB girly has it and I was thinking "isn't that an appy thing?" lol

05:48:56 Irish Capp

Any breed can carry PATN, only LP can express it tho. And that's KNN, SH, ISH, PON

05:47:56 Rose

Is PATN-2PATN-2 just a KNN thing?

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December 19, 2019 05:47 PM

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December 19, 2019 05:55 PM

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Critiques or opinions definitely welcome. Advice highly appreciated and desired as well.

December 19, 2019 06:22 PM

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It looks nice. The only thing is it's hard to tell the neck and head apart. Other than that, I love it!

December 19, 2019 08:06 PM

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Overall, I really like this piece. It looks as though you used a very large brush. I would recommend that you use a smaller brush to do the small details like the eye, mane, shadowing, and highlighting. I think the main thing that would make your piece better is to really focus on shadowing and highlighting. Shadowing will held separate the head from the neck and stop them from blending together, like Nevermore stated.

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