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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 192 Season: Winter

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Snow and Sleet Mix, Clearing at Night

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12:02:32 Stardust/Comet

Anna
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Rainbow

12:02:07 Rainy/Prism/Chrome

Stardust
We get a big bag of them at Costco (frozen). They're so yummy.

12:02:00 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-

Stardust-
I think Sparkalicious goes better with a stallion

12:01:37 Stardust/Comet

Rainy
Yes me too. My brain juices are making some top notch potstickers

12:00:48 Stardust/Comet

Ivy
Try them they're good right? I coated them in magic unicorn farts

12:00:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I shall be back shortly

Rainbow

12:00:37 Rainy/Prism/Chrome

Got the postickers going. It smells great in my house 😋

12:00:18 Ivy / poison ivy

Stardust

ok ^^

11:59:57 Stardust/Comet

Ivy
I will send you some through telepathy mrehehe

11:59:28 Stardust/Comet

Anna
Sparkalicious SV "Sparky"

11:59:05 Ivy / poison ivy

Stardust

Save me some

11:58:52 Stardust/Comet

Ivy
Yes, I am cooking them in my lumpy mind box

11:58:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I am so glad I work all day tomorrow. It will make RO come so much faster

11:58:17 Anna/Jewel

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Name?

11:57:36 Anna/Jewel

Angel-
Sorry I can't help lol. I am allergic to dish soap

Solstheim Manor

11:56:53 Sol

okayyy i need to get into RIDs they are so pretty

11:56:52 Ivy / poison ivy

i like potstickers

11:56:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel

lol Comet

Ivy League Acres

11:56:09 Ivy - your slay one

did someone say potstickers??

11:55:58 Stardust/Comet

Angel
SUre! what's your address? You know what never mind I'll just find you >:)

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12:02:32 Stardust/Comet

Anna
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Rainbow

12:02:07 Rainy/Prism/Chrome

Stardust
We get a big bag of them at Costco (frozen). They're so yummy.

12:02:00 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-

Stardust-
I think Sparkalicious goes better with a stallion

12:01:37 Stardust/Comet

Rainy
Yes me too. My brain juices are making some top notch potstickers

12:00:48 Stardust/Comet

Ivy
Try them they're good right? I coated them in magic unicorn farts

12:00:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I shall be back shortly

Rainbow

12:00:37 Rainy/Prism/Chrome

Got the postickers going. It smells great in my house 😋

12:00:18 Ivy / poison ivy

Stardust

ok ^^

11:59:57 Stardust/Comet

Ivy
I will send you some through telepathy mrehehe

11:59:28 Stardust/Comet

Anna
Sparkalicious SV "Sparky"

11:59:05 Ivy / poison ivy

Stardust

Save me some

11:58:52 Stardust/Comet

Ivy
Yes, I am cooking them in my lumpy mind box

11:58:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I am so glad I work all day tomorrow. It will make RO come so much faster

11:58:17 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-

Name?

11:57:36 Anna/Jewel

Angel-
Sorry I can't help lol. I am allergic to dish soap

Solstheim Manor

11:56:53 Sol

okayyy i need to get into RIDs they are so pretty

11:56:52 Ivy / poison ivy

i like potstickers

11:56:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel

lol Comet

Ivy League Acres

11:56:09 Ivy - your slay one

did someone say potstickers??

11:55:58 Stardust/Comet

Angel
SUre! what's your address? You know what never mind I'll just find you >:)

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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