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Sunni
04:21:22 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
Pretty wild maybe I'll be lucky .
It's a win even if she's got a premium bravery.
Sunni
04:18:43 Sunni bunny
My cat keeps dive on me from the table.
Note I am laying on a air mattress and the table is higher then me.
I haven't gotten a wink of sleep XD.
Nightingales Ridge
04:17:36 Issy
Beautiful congrats
Nightingales Ridge
04:17:20 Issy
Looonyyy
Lunalovegood
03:32:52 Loony/Loony Tune
Umm Okay, Just trying to complete a sabino quest…
-HEE Click-
Lunalovegood
03:28:20 Loony/Loony Tune
Busy Bee
Cute :)

Earth to chat……
Foggy Mtn PONs
02:24:52 Fog
I like it too, maybe I will keep that :)
Cozmic Elite
02:17:52 
Oh im a sucker for that snowflake pattern
Foggy Mtn PONs
02:16:56 Fog
CE
What about this? I am so indecisive lol -HEE Click-
Boulder Creek
02:15:16 
The local fish & game and the wildlife conservation center are doing a Bat Netting next week.
I've wanted to go for the past few years when they host annually.

but I don't want to go alone - and not sure I can rustle up anyone else.

and it's an hour drive
Cozmic Elite
02:04:20 
Hmm I like it. I mean you could gamble and reroll. Depends how many rerolls you got.
Foggy Mtn PONs
01:55:00 Fog
I’m currently re-rolling, should I keep this? -HEE Click- :)
Cozmic Elite
01:29:43 
I found them at Walmart :)
Whispering Wood Barn
01:18:12 ~Whispy~
Cozmic,

O.O where can I find?
Cozmic Elite
01:00:15 
There's butterbeer gold fish crackers, they taste like a mix of maple and caramel. Pure sugar basically but really good.
Blue Diamond
12:35:20 Bluey
gn!
Blue Diamond
12:22:20 Bluey
uh oh
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:19:22 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Bd - have fun with that lol this boutta go crazy and poor dudes going to be so confused at the end lol
Blue Diamond
12:13:59 Bluey
Yas

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Sunni
04:21:22 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
Pretty wild maybe I'll be lucky .
It's a win even if she's got a premium bravery.
Sunni
04:18:43 Sunni bunny
My cat keeps dive on me from the table.
Note I am laying on a air mattress and the table is higher then me.
I haven't gotten a wink of sleep XD.
Nightingales Ridge
04:17:36 Issy
Beautiful congrats
Nightingales Ridge
04:17:20 Issy
Looonyyy
Lunalovegood
03:32:52 Loony/Loony Tune
Umm Okay, Just trying to complete a sabino quest…
-HEE Click-
Lunalovegood
03:28:20 Loony/Loony Tune
Busy Bee
Cute :)

Earth to chat……
Foggy Mtn PONs
02:24:52 Fog
I like it too, maybe I will keep that :)
Cozmic Elite
02:17:52 
Oh im a sucker for that snowflake pattern
Foggy Mtn PONs
02:16:56 Fog
CE
What about this? I am so indecisive lol -HEE Click-
Boulder Creek
02:15:16 
The local fish & game and the wildlife conservation center are doing a Bat Netting next week.
I've wanted to go for the past few years when they host annually.

but I don't want to go alone - and not sure I can rustle up anyone else.

and it's an hour drive
Cozmic Elite
02:04:20 
Hmm I like it. I mean you could gamble and reroll. Depends how many rerolls you got.
Foggy Mtn PONs
01:55:00 Fog
I’m currently re-rolling, should I keep this? -HEE Click- :)
Cozmic Elite
01:29:43 
I found them at Walmart :)
Whispering Wood Barn
01:18:12 ~Whispy~
Cozmic,

O.O where can I find?
Cozmic Elite
01:00:15 
There's butterbeer gold fish crackers, they taste like a mix of maple and caramel. Pure sugar basically but really good.
Blue Diamond
12:35:20 Bluey
gn!
Blue Diamond
12:22:20 Bluey
uh oh
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:19:22 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Bd - have fun with that lol this boutta go crazy and poor dudes going to be so confused at the end lol
Blue Diamond
12:13:59 Bluey
Yas

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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