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Greetings all, I am urgently in need of a 3 months premium upgrade. Please pm if you can assist. Thanks
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Critique March 25, 2019 02:45 PM


Zephyr Elites
 
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Would love some critique on my most recent pieces.

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https://i.lensdump.com/i/WEW5xx.jpg

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WTfdVT.jpg

Also I currently have my prices set at 35k for a horse avatar, just wanted to know if you guys think thats too high.

Thanks.

Edited at March 25, 2019 03:02 PM by Zephyr Elites
Critique March 25, 2019 02:58 PM

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Hmm I can't see anything that I personally think could be improved , very pretty art though! :)
Critique March 26, 2019 12:43 PM

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For the first one, the horse looks like it's in blue or white light, while the background would be giving off orange/red light. The horse is also pretty light for the darkness of the background.
For the second one, I would work on adding shading to the mane and tail, because they don't look connected to the rest of the horse. I would also work on where shadows would be cast based on where the light is coming from.
Critique March 29, 2019 04:30 PM


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I think the prices are fine. Keep practising and getting better!♡
Critique April 5, 2019 12:51 AM

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Personally, I feel like the patterns on the first are too bright for the overall tone and lighting.The muzzle is also slightly blurred. I do love the movement of the tail on the second, very natural.

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