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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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10:41:38 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Oooh gorgeous! Yay I'm happy I kept her! Thanks for showing me!

10:40:59 Peggy (or) Peg

10:40:39 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Oh awesome! I always forget that exists xD

Lucky Ducky Lane

10:39:57

Oh, did the lens of time on her and she's going to be lovely 😍

10:37:59 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Isn't she pretty? I'm keeping her to see what the grey turns out like. If it's boring I'll release her.

10:37:13 Ally 💜

Oh that one is so unique!

10:33:27 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

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Like this one for example

10:31:31 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Ally
Makes sense. I've kept really bad ratings before because they're pretty lol

10:27:10 Ally 💜

I tend to keep anything PPP+ as geldings that I get from quests. I do keep EES combos as well for geldings but only if they are pretty XD

10:26:14 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Cool. The silver colt I bred for the quest turned out a PPP, so glad I could keep him

10:24:30 Ally 💜

Yes

10:23:57 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Ally
Pretty!

Would y'all keep a PPP for a show gelding?

10:22:55 Ally 💜

Ohhh pretty
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10:21:57 Ally 💜

Thats awesome!

10:19:18 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

I got a breed a horse with visible silver on the first try! Yay :D

10:17:53 Ally 💜

Well that took forever

10:12:42 Ally 💜

Breed a foal with Tobiano, Splash White and an Elite rating.

We will see how long that takes

10:11:48 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

I struggle to name wild captures. Any ideas for these boys?

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10:10:32 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Yay for the kitties! <3

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10:41:38 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Oooh gorgeous! Yay I'm happy I kept her! Thanks for showing me!

10:40:59 Peggy (or) Peg

10:40:39 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Oh awesome! I always forget that exists xD

Lucky Ducky Lane

10:39:57

Oh, did the lens of time on her and she's going to be lovely 😍

10:37:59 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Isn't she pretty? I'm keeping her to see what the grey turns out like. If it's boring I'll release her.

10:37:13 Ally 💜

Oh that one is so unique!

10:33:27 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

-HEE Click-

Like this one for example

10:31:31 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Ally
Makes sense. I've kept really bad ratings before because they're pretty lol

10:27:10 Ally 💜

I tend to keep anything PPP+ as geldings that I get from quests. I do keep EES combos as well for geldings but only if they are pretty XD

10:26:14 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Cool. The silver colt I bred for the quest turned out a PPP, so glad I could keep him

10:24:30 Ally 💜

Yes

10:23:57 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Ally
Pretty!

Would y'all keep a PPP for a show gelding?

10:22:55 Ally 💜

Ohhh pretty
-HEE Click-

10:21:57 Ally 💜

Thats awesome!

10:19:18 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

I got a breed a horse with visible silver on the first try! Yay :D

10:17:53 Ally 💜

Well that took forever

10:12:42 Ally 💜

Breed a foal with Tobiano, Splash White and an Elite rating.

We will see how long that takes

10:11:48 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

I struggle to name wild captures. Any ideas for these boys?

-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

10:10:32 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

Yay for the kitties! <3

10:10:22 ⛈ whisper/lynx

miracle* geez

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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