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Lynx Glory

12:33:15 ⛈ whisper/lynx

myth!

Mythological

12:32:36 Crowley

Lynx

Sun Ranch

12:30:01

Another weird training.
-HEE Click-

Week 4 and 8. Why can't they be consistent? 🤣

Glacier Bay Cove

12:29:37 Arctic Katz

It would also include art shops, sorry I forgot to add that part

Timberland Drafts

12:29:17 Athena's SA - RIDs

we need an option to mass move schoolmasters like we do yearlings or by discipline and all those other ones

Angels angels

12:27:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel

You don't have an art gallery Glacier

Glacier Bay Cove

12:25:58 Arctic Katz

Wondering if any of you would support this idea. Adding Views This Week: 33 to our art galleries, but I don't know if you will like this idea or not

Lynx Glory

12:24:56 ⛈ whisper/lynx

oh my gosh! i found it xD i remembered entering the art for the gallery in the news. i went back and found the "recent searches" and the first search ended up being this horse's number :skull:

Angels angels

12:23:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Same with my WWW girls Athena..

Timberland Drafts

12:22:52 Athena's SA - RIDs

So far so good. I'm nervous for her embryos
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Solstheim Manor

12:20:12 Sol

alright, i won't worry about it for now then! thank you

SandWitch Arabians

12:19:51 Witchypoo

Sol - only if you are really into the Bravery thing.

Solstheim Manor

12:19:06 Sol

is a round pen worth it? im not sure if i want to spend the 100k

Lynx Glory

12:17:42 ⛈ whisper/lynx

they got the art though. like the horse has the arts right now showing on the horse's page. i just needed to find the horse so i could add to my gallery xD it's my own problem loll

Lynx Glory

12:16:52 ⛈ whisper/lynx

yeah lol.

Angels angels

12:16:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Lynx
Well then I guess post in the forums maybe or just leave it and see if someone messages you asking where their art is lol

Lynx Glory

12:16:10 ⛈ whisper/lynx

i was honestly just looking for the horse to add to my gallery xD

Blue Diamond

12:16:06 Bluey

Me literally praying to HEE gods rn that I get a nice EWW filly this RO who trains well lol

Lynx Glory

12:15:51 ⛈ whisper/lynx

angel
lol problem is i cant find the arts either xD that's what's the real problem lol

Angels angels

12:14:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Damn Athena..

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Lynx Glory

12:33:15 ⛈ whisper/lynx

myth!

Mythological

12:32:36 Crowley

Lynx

Sun Ranch

12:30:01

Another weird training.
-HEE Click-

Week 4 and 8. Why can't they be consistent? 🤣

Glacier Bay Cove

12:29:37 Arctic Katz

It would also include art shops, sorry I forgot to add that part

Timberland Drafts

12:29:17 Athena's SA - RIDs

we need an option to mass move schoolmasters like we do yearlings or by discipline and all those other ones

Angels angels

12:27:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel

You don't have an art gallery Glacier

Glacier Bay Cove

12:25:58 Arctic Katz

Wondering if any of you would support this idea. Adding Views This Week: 33 to our art galleries, but I don't know if you will like this idea or not

Lynx Glory

12:24:56 ⛈ whisper/lynx

oh my gosh! i found it xD i remembered entering the art for the gallery in the news. i went back and found the "recent searches" and the first search ended up being this horse's number :skull:

Angels angels

12:23:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Same with my WWW girls Athena..

Timberland Drafts

12:22:52 Athena's SA - RIDs

So far so good. I'm nervous for her embryos
-HEE Click-

Solstheim Manor

12:20:12 Sol

alright, i won't worry about it for now then! thank you

SandWitch Arabians

12:19:51 Witchypoo

Sol - only if you are really into the Bravery thing.

Solstheim Manor

12:19:06 Sol

is a round pen worth it? im not sure if i want to spend the 100k

Lynx Glory

12:17:42 ⛈ whisper/lynx

they got the art though. like the horse has the arts right now showing on the horse's page. i just needed to find the horse so i could add to my gallery xD it's my own problem loll

Lynx Glory

12:16:52 ⛈ whisper/lynx

yeah lol.

Angels angels

12:16:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Lynx
Well then I guess post in the forums maybe or just leave it and see if someone messages you asking where their art is lol

Lynx Glory

12:16:10 ⛈ whisper/lynx

i was honestly just looking for the horse to add to my gallery xD

Blue Diamond

12:16:06 Bluey

Me literally praying to HEE gods rn that I get a nice EWW filly this RO who trains well lol

Lynx Glory

12:15:51 ⛈ whisper/lynx

angel
lol problem is i cant find the arts either xD that's what's the real problem lol

Angels angels

12:14:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Damn Athena..

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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