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Ambrosia
10:55:53 Amb
-HEE Click-
Oh fun!
Alpine Acres
10:55:24 Lily
sorry wrong chat xD
Alpine Acres
10:55:16 Lily
Auction ending in 4 hours!
Lots of EEE mares with low bids and peacock geldings
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Star Fields
10:54:57 Stardust/Comet
Bird
Well i am so difficult and have such extreme anxiety that a woman that works in the theraoy shots place for 2 whole years had never met anyone that she couldnt coax into taking the shot. I was her first. Today was the second time i tried getting my vaccines and it didnt work out, the anxiety is too big. So my mom and I are looking into sedation, or as we call it, loopy juice. I tried it once when my anxiety was too big to get me expander out, so we're trying to see if I can get the loopy juice again.
AP Legacy
10:52:33 ✨ Sassy
Haha Sunni, this one is a stallion! Just re rolled him, only took one and I got a pretty coat -HEE Click- <3
Sunni
10:45:00 Sunni bunny
Why I think it was a stallion I can't read.
AP Legacy
10:44:19 ✨ Sassy
Wrong mare XD
But love them both. This is the mare I meant -HEE Click-
Sunni
10:44:10 Sunni bunny
Sassy handsome stallion.
Sunni
10:43:40 Sunni bunny
Bird not me XD
Gum disease run on my mother's side.
My brother got diagnosed with it.
I got 5 missing adult teeth.
2 or completely gone, and 3 baby teeth still in place.
AP Legacy
10:43:05 ✨ Sassy
So proud of this mare -HEE Click- <3
Hummingbird Meadows
10:42:26 Bird
Thankfully good teeth is the ONE good genetic I have. XD
Sunni
10:41:39 Sunni bunny
I also have a %100 over bite that never got fixed.
Sunni
10:40:57 Sunni bunny
Bird I have a tiny mouth. So they laugh at me.
I gotta have so much dental work done.
Id rather them get it done all in one sitting.
Sunni
10:39:41 Sunni bunny
Versa I think when his older he will be okay.
I need to talk to my dentist and see if they don't mind if he watches them work on me.
I think it would make him feel more comfortable and maybe let them try.
My daughter is built different tho XD
Her first needle didn't even cry, just went "oh no!"
The last set she did cry tho.
Hummingbird Meadows
10:39:31 Bird
I used to not mind going to the dentist, but lately I hate it because the hygienists my dentist employs are so rough. I want to switch.
Thunder~Country
10:38:28 
Event his baby i just bred is adorable to -HEE Click-
Versailles
10:37:03 Versa
Sunni,
I know lots of adults who are also terrified of the dentist. So I really don't blame him. Maybe someday he will start to learn that he doesn't have to be scared <3
Sunni
10:36:54 Sunni bunny
Thunder it's that pretty Snowflake coat <3
Thunder~Country
10:36:10 
-HEE Click- okay but why is this thing so cute
Sunni
10:35:20 Sunni bunny
He had a cavity and wasn't gonna even let them look.
XC

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Ambrosia
10:55:53 Amb
-HEE Click-
Oh fun!
Alpine Acres
10:55:24 Lily
sorry wrong chat xD
Alpine Acres
10:55:16 Lily
Auction ending in 4 hours!
Lots of EEE mares with low bids and peacock geldings
-HEE Click-
Star Fields
10:54:57 Stardust/Comet
Bird
Well i am so difficult and have such extreme anxiety that a woman that works in the theraoy shots place for 2 whole years had never met anyone that she couldnt coax into taking the shot. I was her first. Today was the second time i tried getting my vaccines and it didnt work out, the anxiety is too big. So my mom and I are looking into sedation, or as we call it, loopy juice. I tried it once when my anxiety was too big to get me expander out, so we're trying to see if I can get the loopy juice again.
AP Legacy
10:52:33 ✨ Sassy
Haha Sunni, this one is a stallion! Just re rolled him, only took one and I got a pretty coat -HEE Click- <3
Sunni
10:45:00 Sunni bunny
Why I think it was a stallion I can't read.
AP Legacy
10:44:19 ✨ Sassy
Wrong mare XD
But love them both. This is the mare I meant -HEE Click-
Sunni
10:44:10 Sunni bunny
Sassy handsome stallion.
Sunni
10:43:40 Sunni bunny
Bird not me XD
Gum disease run on my mother's side.
My brother got diagnosed with it.
I got 5 missing adult teeth.
2 or completely gone, and 3 baby teeth still in place.
AP Legacy
10:43:05 ✨ Sassy
So proud of this mare -HEE Click- <3
Hummingbird Meadows
10:42:26 Bird
Thankfully good teeth is the ONE good genetic I have. XD
Sunni
10:41:39 Sunni bunny
I also have a %100 over bite that never got fixed.
Sunni
10:40:57 Sunni bunny
Bird I have a tiny mouth. So they laugh at me.
I gotta have so much dental work done.
Id rather them get it done all in one sitting.
Sunni
10:39:41 Sunni bunny
Versa I think when his older he will be okay.
I need to talk to my dentist and see if they don't mind if he watches them work on me.
I think it would make him feel more comfortable and maybe let them try.
My daughter is built different tho XD
Her first needle didn't even cry, just went "oh no!"
The last set she did cry tho.
Hummingbird Meadows
10:39:31 Bird
I used to not mind going to the dentist, but lately I hate it because the hygienists my dentist employs are so rough. I want to switch.
Thunder~Country
10:38:28 
Event his baby i just bred is adorable to -HEE Click-
Versailles
10:37:03 Versa
Sunni,
I know lots of adults who are also terrified of the dentist. So I really don't blame him. Maybe someday he will start to learn that he doesn't have to be scared <3
Sunni
10:36:54 Sunni bunny
Thunder it's that pretty Snowflake coat <3
Thunder~Country
10:36:10 
-HEE Click- okay but why is this thing so cute
Sunni
10:35:20 Sunni bunny
He had a cavity and wasn't gonna even let them look.
XC

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Art Critique July 1, 2018 08:21 PM

Former Stable
 
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Stunning! At least 40-50k
Art Critique July 1, 2018 08:25 PM

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I adore this! I would pay 35-50k. I think the hooves need a tad bit of fixing but other than that, amazing!
Art Critique July 1, 2018 08:35 PM


Chidori
 
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Thank you everyone<3 I'll make sure to work on your suggestions. Hopefully I can get some more examples soon:)
Art Critique July 1, 2018 08:45 PM


Charmed Acres
 
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Hi, just popping in to say that your mane and tail work in this is absolutely gorgeous! <3

But I'd definitely work on matching the background to the horse more, especially when you're putting out such high quality horses! Yes, as everyone else pointed out, the hooves definitely do need some attention, but there are tricks to hiding some little flaws like that until you've mastered them ;)

I would also really love to see a light source added and some more highlights on the horse, and possibly a faint outline to really bring the horse forward more from the background, since you didn't blur much of it (really, that's just artist preference though).

If this particular horse was on a different background with hidden or fixed hooves, I'd probably easily pay 80-100k for it. But this is just judging from the one image, and it really depends on if you can consistently put out this high caliber work on 80-90% of your pieces <3

I look forward to seeing what you can do in the future! This is seriously a great start!

EDIT: I didn't notice you have a second piece up there linked to DA. I think on that one, the mane and tail need the most work. They don't seem to "flow" as well as the first one does. But this is adorable and a super cute concept!
I'd also maybe sharpen the actual horse layer more to be as sharp as you have the mane and tail, and add more definition in the muzzle and face, and add some eye color for sure. This one also kind of needs a bit of an outline because the legs kind of blend together in a couple of places, and the current sharp edge of the neck stands out as too sharp to me and I'd like to see a little bit of a light color breaking up that sharp line.


Edited at July 1, 2018 08:51 PM by Charmed Acres
Art Critique July 1, 2018 10:38 PM


Chidori
 
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Charmed Acres said:
Hi, just popping in to say that your mane and tail work in this is absolutely gorgeous! <3

But I'd definitely work on matching the background to the horse more, especially when you're putting out such high quality horses! Yes, as everyone else pointed out, the hooves definitely do need some attention, but there are tricks to hiding some little flaws like that until you've mastered them ;)

I would also really love to see a light source added and some more highlights on the horse, and possibly a faint outline to really bring the horse forward more from the background, since you didn't blur much of it (really, that's just artist preference though).

If this particular horse was on a different background with hidden or fixed hooves, I'd probably easily pay 80-100k for it. But this is just judging from the one image, and it really depends on if you can consistently put out this high caliber work on 80-90% of your pieces <3

I look forward to seeing what you can do in the future! This is seriously a great start!

EDIT: I didn't notice you have a second piece up there linked to DA. I think on that one, the mane and tail need the most work. They don't seem to "flow" as well as the first one does. But this is adorable and a super cute concept!
I'd also maybe sharpen the actual horse layer more to be as sharp as you have the mane and tail, and add more definition in the muzzle and face, and add some eye color for sure. This one also kind of needs a bit of an outline because the legs kind of blend together in a couple of places, and the current sharp edge of the neck stands out as too sharp to me and I'd like to see a little bit of a light color breaking up that sharp line.



Wow thank you so much Charmed! I'm honored you gave me so many tips:) I love your art!
I definitely did more work on the first horses mane. The second one I used a much bigger brush so not as much detail there. I did notice that my second example the horse didn't really fit it or match the rest of the picture. I'll definitely try what you suggested. And keep them in mind when making more. My goal is to eventually make art worth 100k so everything is greatly appreciated:) I really needed a detailed list like this to help me think more about how to change a picture rather than just add to it. Thank you<3<3
Art Critique July 1, 2018 11:08 PM

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I love your style for the mane and tail! Everything is beautiful <3 I agree with previous comments about some of those tiny little technical details, but your art is really beautiful art all together. I also think that maybe 50-65K starting out would be a good price range judging off of the first piece which I can tell you really put a lot of work into. The 2nd one is pretty as well and I adore the concept, but the details look a little bit more rushed. Great job though! <3

Edited at July 1, 2018 11:09 PM by Blue Jay Designs
Art Critique July 2, 2018 11:31 AM


Chidori
 
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Blue Jay Designs said:
I love your style for the mane and tail! Everything is beautiful <3 I agree with previous comments about some of those tiny little technical details, but your art is really beautiful art all together. I also think that maybe 50-65K starting out would be a good price range judging off of the first piece which I can tell you really put a lot of work into. The 2nd one is pretty as well and I adore the concept, but the details look a little bit more rushed. Great job though! <3

Thank you for your opinion Blue Jay! Im glad that you see potential in my art it really encourages me to keep working on them. My second example was rushed for an art contest deadline. I guess its bad that you can tell XD But I like that I put up some art that needs help. Ive learned so much from you all!
Art Critique July 4, 2018 04:07 AM


Chidori
 
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OK! I made another piece and tried to listen to all of your suggestions so Id love to hear your opinions one more time. Also what you would pay for this one. I think it is much better quality than the previous two:) I stayed up all night making this one I was so excited how well it was turning out!

Here it is! https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=16110883
When I added this to my horse page the image is really small and you cant really see any detail. Can anyone please help me with this?

This link is to my DA page its probably better quality https://www.deviantart.com/davinab/art/Necrozma-HEE-752864254?ga_submit_new=10%3A1530692761

I did a ton of work to this piece. I really hope you all like it, Im proud:) Heres the original horse stock for you to compare https://www.deviantart.com/chunga-stock/art/E-Friesian-leaping-up-front-view-562790913
Art Critique July 4, 2018 04:36 AM


Skye's Paradise
 
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I agree on the mane and tail on the second example. Your third piece is awesome! I really love it! Love the forelock!! Keep up the great work. I'd pay 60-70k on this one. :)
Art Critique July 4, 2018 04:40 AM


Chidori
 
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Skye's Paradise said:
I agree on the mane and tail on the second example. Your third piece is awesome! I really love it! Love the forelock!! Keep up the great work. I'd pay 60-70k on this one. :)

Thank you! Much appreciated:)

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