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The Fallen Rulers
07:55:56 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Hi all
The Old Gods
07:55:43 Void Malign
honestly, some of it is how hot its been, in which case, I can't blame her
Bioshock Manor
07:44:55 Storm
Moody mares
The Old Gods
07:44:04 Void Malign
She was being a bit moody because I'm having to hold her foot so I can clean out the little areas along the sole and the hoof wall
Bioshock Manor
07:41:34 Storm
Hah. Horses are so smart sometimes
Crestwood Eq.
07:38:27 Ivy / poison ivy
yall. my boy is cooked.
The Old Gods
07:32:36 Void Malign
One horse gets thrush spray and the other gets iodine.. Oklahoma was naughty and got tapped on the chest with a crop. She bonked her head on the feeder lmfao. Started listening after that
Bioshock Manor
07:30:37 Storm
I sprayed the silver meds on my arm today. It's still there.
ghost light stables
07:30:19 moldy bread / ghost
Do we have any horsemanship/horse training people online I need any advice I can get
Glacier Bay Cove
07:30:16 Arctic Katz
Oh
Bioshock Manor
07:30:07 Storm
Ah yes. That does it
The Old Gods
07:29:53 Void Malign
iodine and thrush spray
Bioshock Manor
07:29:28 Storm
Lol why?
Glacier Bay Cove
07:29:28 Arctic Katz
Why, Void
The Old Gods
07:23:39 Void Malign
my hands are now stained blue and a vaguely bruised color lol
Bioshock Manor
07:09:24 Storm
Sunny may want to block out the tag and address on your pictures.
Black Meadow Estate
07:08:28 Meadow
anna not really 80K is nothing now days on HEE i use to do upgrades for 150K and that dosent last anymore so no 90K is fair game if your paying real money on hee
Sunni
07:07:28 Sunni bunny
Rose normally I have good luck, this time apparently not.
I waited until I was outside the address.
Just being stupid I guess.
Bioshock Manor
07:07:12 Storm
Can't stand Chime
Bioshock Manor
07:06:59 Storm
I dont pay until I see the product, anything it may be. I have the right to refuse it too

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The Fallen Rulers
07:55:56 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Hi all
The Old Gods
07:55:43 Void Malign
honestly, some of it is how hot its been, in which case, I can't blame her
Bioshock Manor
07:44:55 Storm
Moody mares
The Old Gods
07:44:04 Void Malign
She was being a bit moody because I'm having to hold her foot so I can clean out the little areas along the sole and the hoof wall
Bioshock Manor
07:41:34 Storm
Hah. Horses are so smart sometimes
Crestwood Eq.
07:38:27 Ivy / poison ivy
yall. my boy is cooked.
The Old Gods
07:32:36 Void Malign
One horse gets thrush spray and the other gets iodine.. Oklahoma was naughty and got tapped on the chest with a crop. She bonked her head on the feeder lmfao. Started listening after that
Bioshock Manor
07:30:37 Storm
I sprayed the silver meds on my arm today. It's still there.
ghost light stables
07:30:19 moldy bread / ghost
Do we have any horsemanship/horse training people online I need any advice I can get
Glacier Bay Cove
07:30:16 Arctic Katz
Oh
Bioshock Manor
07:30:07 Storm
Ah yes. That does it
The Old Gods
07:29:53 Void Malign
iodine and thrush spray
Bioshock Manor
07:29:28 Storm
Lol why?
Glacier Bay Cove
07:29:28 Arctic Katz
Why, Void
The Old Gods
07:23:39 Void Malign
my hands are now stained blue and a vaguely bruised color lol
Bioshock Manor
07:09:24 Storm
Sunny may want to block out the tag and address on your pictures.
Black Meadow Estate
07:08:28 Meadow
anna not really 80K is nothing now days on HEE i use to do upgrades for 150K and that dosent last anymore so no 90K is fair game if your paying real money on hee
Sunni
07:07:28 Sunni bunny
Rose normally I have good luck, this time apparently not.
I waited until I was outside the address.
Just being stupid I guess.
Bioshock Manor
07:07:12 Storm
Can't stand Chime
Bioshock Manor
07:06:59 Storm
I dont pay until I see the product, anything it may be. I have the right to refuse it too

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
Posts: 1348
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*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
Posts: 927
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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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