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Definitely tier 2! My main critique is grounding - I can't see any grounding on any of your pieces, as you seem to avoid it. Dark pieces can be really beautiful and challenging, but remember that they allow you to hide any weaknesses/mistakes. (Not sure if it was purposeful or not, but I would love to see a light piece with the horse's hooves visible) |
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Tanglewood said:
Definitely tier 2! My main critique is grounding - I can't see any grounding on any of your pieces, as you seem to avoid it. Dark pieces can be really beautiful and challenging, but remember that they allow you to hide any weaknesses/mistakes. (Not sure if it was purposeful or not, but I would love to see a light piece with the horse's hooves visible)
I'll add that to my list! Thank you and yeah it's actually total coincidence that both the pieces I have put up is dark haha, but I'll definitely try get a lighter piece up :) |
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Most recent piece. Just thought I'd add it to see if you guys think it's better than the ones up top :) |
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Oh this is very nice! I think if you make pieces that are consistent with this you could probably charge 65k-80k per piece. However some critique if you're okay with it. The lantern appears to be giving off light, this would show up on the horse's neck, top of the front legs, and the face where it would face, a soft yellow glow would be just fine to show the light is actually reflecting on those places. Second thing the muzzle, I've noticed that you tend to just leave it with that patterned marking on it without doing anything to where it will be close to the skin around the mouth and nose. Maybe take a brush and go over it on a new layer with a color burn filter on it and try and make it more pink or grey or whatever the skin is underneath. Although it is definitely better than the first one in this thread, making it a bit more realistic if that's your goal this might help. Lastly the grounding, we can see the horse is standing on grass, but when the hoof actually meets the grass it's just a straight across line. This wouldn't happen in nature, I would suggest going in with a small eraser and making little grass blades along the hooves and then blurring it just a little not too much but just a little to give a nice soft grassy effect Hope this helps I really think you are absolutely amazing! |
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Spirtasi Whims said:
Oh this is very nice! I think if you make pieces that are consistent with this you could probably charge 65k-80k per piece. However some critique if you're okay with it. The lantern appears to be giving off light, this would show up on the horse's neck, top of the front legs, and the face where it would face, a soft yellow glow would be just fine to show the light is actually reflecting on those places. Second thing the muzzle, I've noticed that you tend to just leave it with that patterned marking on it without doing anything to where it will be close to the skin around the mouth and nose. Maybe take a brush and go over it on a new layer with a color burn filter on it and try and make it more pink or grey or whatever the skin is underneath. Although it is definitely better than the first one in this thread, making it a bit more realistic if that's your goal this might help. Lastly the grounding, we can see the horse is standing on grass, but when the hoof actually meets the grass it's just a straight across line. This wouldn't happen in nature, I would suggest going in with a small eraser and making little grass blades along the hooves and then blurring it just a little not too much but just a little to give a nice soft grassy effect Hope this helps I really think you are absolutely amazing!
Thank you! I'll definitely take all that into mind and try a new piece later on :) |
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Edited at January 12, 2021 07:37 AM by Zomb
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So I've decided to open a art shop. However, I think I'm going to start T3 with these prices. this way I can learn more complex patterns and colour changes. What do you guys think?  |
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I would suggest putting your prices in text so you can adjust them easier. And like everyone else has said, you are definitely a Tier 2 artist, but if Tier 3 is where you are more comfortable, go for it. Keep in mind that if you are getting a lot of orders, it is time to raise your prices. |
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Fenntastic said:
I would suggest putting your prices in text so you can adjust them easier. And like everyone else has said, you are definitely a Tier 2 artist, but if Tier 3 is where you are more comfortable, go for it. Keep in mind that if you are getting a lot of orders, it is time to raise your prices.
Thank you :) Im honoured you all think I'm T2. However, I don't have all the patterns and colour changes down. That is the main reason as to why I've put myself in T3 :) |
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Moderate Temperatures and Overcast
