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 Ceffyldorf
07:35:13 katy
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cheap color clearout auction, all are rated.
ALOUTROYALEQUINE
07:24:54 
COLORED RATED SPP STALLION
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Bermuda Triangle
07:18:16 Lost
Auction in progress with 2 days left.
Eee-www mares

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All mares in this barn are for sale also!
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 DragonFyre Estate
07:18:03 Whip
WWW AALB stud for offers. No sabino and no roan on top of being a consistently higher AALB stud. PM me to discuss.
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Sweet Valley
07:13:21 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
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Low prices! I need money from this to buy something else so grateful for anyone who orders
Port Royal Equines
06:56:45 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

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Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

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Proven Grullo WWW Sire.


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EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.
Caramel
06:53:31 Keijo Or Lake
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EWE+ Show Geldings, EWE Mare, And 1\1 Mare.

If your intrested in any horse in my stable, or looking to breed to one of them PM me!
Wild Hills Stables
06:51:55 
offer for this pretty EWP WB stallion will take the highest -HEE Click-
Connally Coast
06:39:09 
sale listed highest to lowest featuring wild EEE wb +10 unbred
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Elysium Opalus
06:33:17 free palestine
Gen 1 and short gen WEEs
World Class braves for stud
High ratings and shiny colors for sale
CHEAP
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 Ceffyldorf
07:35:13 katy
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cheap color clearout auction, all are rated.
ALOUTROYALEQUINE
07:24:54 
COLORED RATED SPP STALLION
-HEE Click-
Bermuda Triangle
07:18:16 Lost
Auction in progress with 2 days left.
Eee-www mares

-HEE Click-

All mares in this barn are for sale also!
-HEE Click-
 DragonFyre Estate
07:18:03 Whip
WWW AALB stud for offers. No sabino and no roan on top of being a consistently higher AALB stud. PM me to discuss.
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
07:13:21 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
-HEE Click-
Low prices! I need money from this to buy something else so grateful for anyone who orders
Port Royal Equines
06:56:45 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Proven Grullo WWW Sire.


-HEE Click-
EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.
Caramel
06:53:31 Keijo Or Lake
-HEE Click-
EWE+ Show Geldings, EWE Mare, And 1\1 Mare.

If your intrested in any horse in my stable, or looking to breed to one of them PM me!
Wild Hills Stables
06:51:55 
offer for this pretty EWP WB stallion will take the highest -HEE Click-
Connally Coast
06:39:09 
sale listed highest to lowest featuring wild EEE wb +10 unbred
-HEE Click-
Elysium Opalus
06:33:17 free palestine
Gen 1 and short gen WEEs
World Class braves for stud
High ratings and shiny colors for sale
CHEAP
-HEE Click-

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

 Former Stable
 
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


 Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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