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Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Glacier Bay Cove

05:29:34 Arctic Katz

I don't think she is a brindle

05:27:46

-HEE Click-

Oooh what a pretty little brindle she is! (she is brindle right?)

05:13:29 Anna/Jewel

Uh uh. And that quest is worth 15k lol

Crescent Estate

05:12:15 River / Crescent

Anna, do you have any skips?

05:10:48 Anna/Jewel

oooofff "Capture a horse with a W in dressage" ayayayayay Ughhhh how in the NAME of common sense am I supposed to do THAT

05:06:10 Fantasy | Fanta

Enter your horse into a Specialty Clinic to boost their training.
Completed: 1/20

19 more... 😑

Embervale Acres

04:58:21 Solar Phoenix

Ugh, that's like 3 explore trips with no bit shards, so annoying

04:54:46 Anna/Jewel

I think lol...

04:54:37 Anna/Jewel

It's only if this one apartment works out lol

Snitches' Stitches

04:46:37 Snitch

Anna
Aw, that's my birthday! Good luck to them!

Snitches' Stitches

04:46:00 Snitch

Me: squints at my money
When did I lose so much ebs??
Also me: checks the time
oh. never mind lol

04:44:18 Anna/Jewel

My sis and her fiance decided on a date if apartments work out... October 11th

04:38:38 Fantasy | Fanta

Just watched the broadway Frozen... 😳🤯 INCREDIBLE

04:37:12 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oh I love postickers but I have never made them myself
My brothers dad used to make the best porogies though

Glacier Bay Cove

04:36:04 Arctic Katz

And Mandarin Chicken

04:35:25 Ally 💜

I havent made them in awhile and the last ones I had from a restaurant were nasty

Glacier Bay Cove

04:35:11 Arctic Katz

Potstickers

04:32:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I used to make crab ragoons all the time, but I haven't in years. And jalapeño poppers

04:31:43 Ally 💜

Ummm
-HEE Click-

04:29:08 Anna/Jewel

I pulled a hangnail... Ouch

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Glacier Bay Cove

05:29:34 Arctic Katz

I don't think she is a brindle

05:27:46

-HEE Click-

Oooh what a pretty little brindle she is! (she is brindle right?)

05:13:29 Anna/Jewel

Uh uh. And that quest is worth 15k lol

Crescent Estate

05:12:15 River / Crescent

Anna, do you have any skips?

05:10:48 Anna/Jewel

oooofff "Capture a horse with a W in dressage" ayayayayay Ughhhh how in the NAME of common sense am I supposed to do THAT

05:06:10 Fantasy | Fanta

Enter your horse into a Specialty Clinic to boost their training.
Completed: 1/20

19 more... 😑

Embervale Acres

04:58:21 Solar Phoenix

Ugh, that's like 3 explore trips with no bit shards, so annoying

04:54:46 Anna/Jewel

I think lol...

04:54:37 Anna/Jewel

It's only if this one apartment works out lol

Snitches' Stitches

04:46:37 Snitch

Anna
Aw, that's my birthday! Good luck to them!

Snitches' Stitches

04:46:00 Snitch

Me: squints at my money
When did I lose so much ebs??
Also me: checks the time
oh. never mind lol

04:44:18 Anna/Jewel

My sis and her fiance decided on a date if apartments work out... October 11th

04:38:38 Fantasy | Fanta

Just watched the broadway Frozen... 😳🤯 INCREDIBLE

04:37:12 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oh I love postickers but I have never made them myself
My brothers dad used to make the best porogies though

Glacier Bay Cove

04:36:04 Arctic Katz

And Mandarin Chicken

04:35:25 Ally 💜

I havent made them in awhile and the last ones I had from a restaurant were nasty

Glacier Bay Cove

04:35:11 Arctic Katz

Potstickers

04:32:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I used to make crab ragoons all the time, but I haven't in years. And jalapeño poppers

04:31:43 Ally 💜

Ummm
-HEE Click-

04:29:08 Anna/Jewel

I pulled a hangnail... Ouch

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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