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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 192 Season: Fall

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Afternoon Showers, Sleet Possible

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Stables Online: 78

07:27:05 Ana / Van

Woops, turned*

07:26:26 Ana / Van

-HEE Click-
This one :P

07:25:43 Ana / Van

Min
I had a girl like that, she turnen out Average xD

07:12:13 Louise

that is always so sad lol

07:12:03 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Or she will go all the way and be a sub

Minerva

07:10:59 Min

-HEE Click-

This pony has done 50 moves without spooking at least 3 times- watch her finally spook tomorrow and turn out Superb 🤣🤣

07:06:12 Croft

reroll on an all white sabino I like the frost in mane and tail! -HEE Click-

Embervale Acres

07:03:56 Solar Phoenix

Very nice!

06:58:05 Croft

his little brother coming up next month. They sure have badger face dialed in lol -HEE Click-

06:56:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ohhh I love him *-*

06:55:57 Croft

this is her dad -HEE Click-

06:55:29 Croft

guess my freshman did not do too bad :)

Red Horizon Ranch

06:52:11 Red

Ohh yeah she’s gorgeous Rivercreek

06:50:56 Croft

nice color -HEE Click-

Rivercreek Ranch

06:45:11

-HEE Click-
She's so pretty but her rating has me devestated :((

Tamarack Mountain

06:17:25 Opal

get good show geldings, breed very little only your best quality pairings

South Rock Valley

05:30:59

hi! I'm a returning player with no memory if this game... if you have any tips for starting out or breeding my mail is open!!

Calela Eventing

05:19:07 Cali

I have an addiction for capturing Knaps, my poor capture passes are going down the drain

04:30:26 | Eve

Adding on that obviously, the horse needs to be grey, that isn't what I mean <3

04:29:52 | Eve

Do you need certain genes to get dapple grey or are some greys just shitheads with re rolls? Lol

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07:27:05 Ana / Van

Woops, turned*

07:26:26 Ana / Van

-HEE Click-
This one :P

07:25:43 Ana / Van

Min
I had a girl like that, she turnen out Average xD

07:12:13 Louise

that is always so sad lol

07:12:03 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Or she will go all the way and be a sub

Minerva

07:10:59 Min

-HEE Click-

This pony has done 50 moves without spooking at least 3 times- watch her finally spook tomorrow and turn out Superb 🤣🤣

07:06:12 Croft

reroll on an all white sabino I like the frost in mane and tail! -HEE Click-

Embervale Acres

07:03:56 Solar Phoenix

Very nice!

06:58:05 Croft

his little brother coming up next month. They sure have badger face dialed in lol -HEE Click-

06:56:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ohhh I love him *-*

06:55:57 Croft

this is her dad -HEE Click-

06:55:29 Croft

guess my freshman did not do too bad :)

Red Horizon Ranch

06:52:11 Red

Ohh yeah she’s gorgeous Rivercreek

06:50:56 Croft

nice color -HEE Click-

Rivercreek Ranch

06:45:11

-HEE Click-
She's so pretty but her rating has me devestated :((

Tamarack Mountain

06:17:25 Opal

get good show geldings, breed very little only your best quality pairings

South Rock Valley

05:30:59

hi! I'm a returning player with no memory if this game... if you have any tips for starting out or breeding my mail is open!!

Calela Eventing

05:19:07 Cali

I have an addiction for capturing Knaps, my poor capture passes are going down the drain

04:30:26 | Eve

Adding on that obviously, the horse needs to be grey, that isn't what I mean <3

04:29:52 | Eve

Do you need certain genes to get dapple grey or are some greys just shitheads with re rolls? Lol

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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