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12:09:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Well the PATN doesn't do much because AA can't be appy lol but awesome!

Sunni

12:09:24 Sunni bunny

Have any luck in the capture party cove?

Glacier Bay Cove

12:08:21 Arctic Katz

Hello, Sunni

Pragma

12:08:13 Prag/Liz

Angel
Yeah he does! And PATN-2, haha

Sunni

12:08:08 Sunni bunny

Hey cove,

Sunset Hills Ranch

12:07:23 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak

Arctic Katz,
Same, currently running on 4000 ebs

Glacier Bay Cove

12:06:51 Arctic Katz

Uh oh, I better work harder on saving up my ebs, if I want to participate in the October capture party

12:05:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Liz
He should atleast have het creme because he is buckskin!

Pragma

12:01:00 Prag/Liz

Angel
Ooh that sounds like a fun project! I guess I should gene test him too haha

Sunset Hills Ranch

11:59:14 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak

-HEE Click-
Name?

Jezarae

11:58:54

Oh, maybe by you giving me one it completed it. Thank you Glacier Bay Cove!

Glacier Bay Cove

11:58:01 Arctic Katz

Not a problem

Jezarae

11:57:35

Omg im dumb. It finally completed the quest. I guess it just needed more time to process it. Sorry guys!

11:57:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

They have different purposes. The store ones give you a discount when you buy hay the showing ones discount when you enter shows

11:56:39 [1k+ brindles] Angel

There is one that is literally called "Bronze Store Token" lol it has to be that one

Glacier Bay Cove

11:56:39 Arctic Katz

Check your mailbox, Jezarae

Jezarae

11:56:14

I bought the token from the store so I thought it was a store token. There's another bronze token in the store?

11:56:13 Fantasy

oops, haha, listen to angel. I read that wrong.

11:55:53 Fantasy

Jez
You need to go to the quest master page to complete it

11:55:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel

If it needs a store token it needs a store one. A showing one is a different token

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12:09:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Well the PATN doesn't do much because AA can't be appy lol but awesome!

Sunni

12:09:24 Sunni bunny

Have any luck in the capture party cove?

Glacier Bay Cove

12:08:21 Arctic Katz

Hello, Sunni

Pragma

12:08:13 Prag/Liz

Angel
Yeah he does! And PATN-2, haha

Sunni

12:08:08 Sunni bunny

Hey cove,

Sunset Hills Ranch

12:07:23 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak

Arctic Katz,
Same, currently running on 4000 ebs

Glacier Bay Cove

12:06:51 Arctic Katz

Uh oh, I better work harder on saving up my ebs, if I want to participate in the October capture party

12:05:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Liz
He should atleast have het creme because he is buckskin!

Pragma

12:01:00 Prag/Liz

Angel
Ooh that sounds like a fun project! I guess I should gene test him too haha

Sunset Hills Ranch

11:59:14 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak

-HEE Click-
Name?

Jezarae

11:58:54

Oh, maybe by you giving me one it completed it. Thank you Glacier Bay Cove!

Glacier Bay Cove

11:58:01 Arctic Katz

Not a problem

Jezarae

11:57:35

Omg im dumb. It finally completed the quest. I guess it just needed more time to process it. Sorry guys!

11:57:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

They have different purposes. The store ones give you a discount when you buy hay the showing ones discount when you enter shows

11:56:39 [1k+ brindles] Angel

There is one that is literally called "Bronze Store Token" lol it has to be that one

Glacier Bay Cove

11:56:39 Arctic Katz

Check your mailbox, Jezarae

Jezarae

11:56:14

I bought the token from the store so I thought it was a store token. There's another bronze token in the store?

11:56:13 Fantasy

oops, haha, listen to angel. I read that wrong.

11:55:53 Fantasy

Jez
You need to go to the quest master page to complete it

11:55:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel

If it needs a store token it needs a store one. A showing one is a different token

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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