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11:15:54

or any other ideas.

11:15:47

Thinking about changing my stable name again, willow creek or echo ridge?

11:08:38 Lily

oooh very organised

Glacier Bay Cove

11:08:02 Arctic Katz

Nice

11:03:39

What do we think about my barn? -HEE Click-

10:51:45 Lily

You can check how much you're earning by clicking on the arena that is hosting the show (before the show ends of course)

10:49:21 Lily

Potatoes
yes, you do earn a small profit from hosting shows. It depends on how high you set the show entry fees

Hummingbird Meadows

10:37:33 Bird

I kind of wish we could sell the rerolls we get from the game. I am sitting on way to many and won't be using them soon.

Glacier Bay Cove

10:36:05 Arctic Katz

I posted the link for people to join in playing HEE, but I don't think any of them did

10:22:30

Or ignore me. That works to.

10:15:38

Do you win anything from hosting shows?

10:14:17 Rapcoon | Jester

thank you arctic and fog<3<3

Sunset River Arabian

10:10:11 Athena - AAs

Just noticed I had identical bravery fillies. Kind of glad only one was W though
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Sunset River Arabian

10:06:42 Athena - AAs

Thanks! It's one of Trish's OCs

Glacier Bay Cove

10:06:25 Arctic Katz

Those both look absolutely amazing
@Rapcoon
@Athena

10:06:01 Sun/Sunny/Rose

Athena WOW that is gorge

Sunset River Arabian

10:04:46 Athena - AAs

I forgot I made this lol
-Click-

10:03:06 Fog

Looks awesome, Jester!

10:02:25 Rapcoon | Jester

I wasn't too sure at first, but I kinda love it so far >>
-Click-

09:54:00 Fog

Thank you Snitch, I love silver too! <3

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11:15:54

or any other ideas.

11:15:47

Thinking about changing my stable name again, willow creek or echo ridge?

11:08:38 Lily

oooh very organised

Glacier Bay Cove

11:08:02 Arctic Katz

Nice

11:03:39

What do we think about my barn? -HEE Click-

10:51:45 Lily

You can check how much you're earning by clicking on the arena that is hosting the show (before the show ends of course)

10:49:21 Lily

Potatoes
yes, you do earn a small profit from hosting shows. It depends on how high you set the show entry fees

Hummingbird Meadows

10:37:33 Bird

I kind of wish we could sell the rerolls we get from the game. I am sitting on way to many and won't be using them soon.

Glacier Bay Cove

10:36:05 Arctic Katz

I posted the link for people to join in playing HEE, but I don't think any of them did

10:22:30

Or ignore me. That works to.

10:15:38

Do you win anything from hosting shows?

10:14:17 Rapcoon | Jester

thank you arctic and fog<3<3

Sunset River Arabian

10:10:11 Athena - AAs

Just noticed I had identical bravery fillies. Kind of glad only one was W though
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Sunset River Arabian

10:06:42 Athena - AAs

Thanks! It's one of Trish's OCs

Glacier Bay Cove

10:06:25 Arctic Katz

Those both look absolutely amazing
@Rapcoon
@Athena

10:06:01 Sun/Sunny/Rose

Athena WOW that is gorge

Sunset River Arabian

10:04:46 Athena - AAs

I forgot I made this lol
-Click-

10:03:06 Fog

Looks awesome, Jester!

10:02:25 Rapcoon | Jester

I wasn't too sure at first, but I kinda love it so far >>
-Click-

09:54:00 Fog

Thank you Snitch, I love silver too! <3

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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