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Fantasy Horses
12:24:47 Fantasy | Fanta
What'd I miss?
Fantasy Horses
12:24:32 Fantasy | Fanta
Gypsy
wait I'm confused
pandemoniu_m
12:23:41 pheezy
if you breed two frame overos or white horses together theres a chance you'll end up with the homozygous genes OO (Frame Overo) or WW (White) which are both lethal and the foal will be dead
Gypsy Family Farm
12:23:37 
*laughs* I mean, I really think HEE is probably better than HEE but no one has completely convinced me that HEE isn't also a really good choice.
pandemoniu_m
12:21:47 pheezy
lethal whites can
Midsummer Meadows
12:21:04 
can foals die in the game?
Calela Eventing
12:15:38 Cali
Hey Gypsy
Have you recovered from last nights chaos?
Tobiano Lady
12:14:00 Tobi | Nix
I didn't know IRL got added. I did use the abbreviated "real life" the other day by accident and nobody said anything though so I guess I got my question answered.
Gypsy Family Farm
12:00:17 
I think it's so commonly used anymore and in another game that I play I thought it was on our list. I'm old, I get confused.
Gypsy Family Farm
11:59:20 
Or I did.
Valhalla Acreage
11:59:09 Eivor
The only textspeak permitted is: OMG, OML, LOL, LMAO, and IRL
Nope still the same
Morning Glory Farms
11:59:06 Terici/Dino/Trish
IRL got added but i dont recall TY being added
Morning Glory Farms
11:58:35 Terici/Dino/Trish
I dont recall TY being added to the allowed chat speak 🤔 Maybe i missed a memo
Valhalla Acreage
11:58:27 Eivor
Lucky are you asking how you make money?
Morning Glory Farms
11:58:04 Terici/Dino/Trish
Lukey no chatspeak please
Lukey
11:56:02 
How much did u guys get out of money?
Midsummer Meadows
11:50:30 
thank you - saved the night! he's 1 in 361 for color
Gem
11:50:17 Gem
As long as the horse was bred by you
Gem
11:49:53 Gem
Manage your horse --> Ungeld
Gypsy Family Farm
11:48:52 
You can ungeld it for 24 hours.

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Fantasy Horses
12:24:47 Fantasy | Fanta
What'd I miss?
Fantasy Horses
12:24:32 Fantasy | Fanta
Gypsy
wait I'm confused
pandemoniu_m
12:23:41 pheezy
if you breed two frame overos or white horses together theres a chance you'll end up with the homozygous genes OO (Frame Overo) or WW (White) which are both lethal and the foal will be dead
Gypsy Family Farm
12:23:37 
*laughs* I mean, I really think HEE is probably better than HEE but no one has completely convinced me that HEE isn't also a really good choice.
pandemoniu_m
12:21:47 pheezy
lethal whites can
Midsummer Meadows
12:21:04 
can foals die in the game?
Calela Eventing
12:15:38 Cali
Hey Gypsy
Have you recovered from last nights chaos?
Tobiano Lady
12:14:00 Tobi | Nix
I didn't know IRL got added. I did use the abbreviated "real life" the other day by accident and nobody said anything though so I guess I got my question answered.
Gypsy Family Farm
12:00:17 
I think it's so commonly used anymore and in another game that I play I thought it was on our list. I'm old, I get confused.
Gypsy Family Farm
11:59:20 
Or I did.
Valhalla Acreage
11:59:09 Eivor
The only textspeak permitted is: OMG, OML, LOL, LMAO, and IRL
Nope still the same
Morning Glory Farms
11:59:06 Terici/Dino/Trish
IRL got added but i dont recall TY being added
Morning Glory Farms
11:58:35 Terici/Dino/Trish
I dont recall TY being added to the allowed chat speak 🤔 Maybe i missed a memo
Valhalla Acreage
11:58:27 Eivor
Lucky are you asking how you make money?
Morning Glory Farms
11:58:04 Terici/Dino/Trish
Lukey no chatspeak please
Lukey
11:56:02 
How much did u guys get out of money?
Midsummer Meadows
11:50:30 
thank you - saved the night! he's 1 in 361 for color
Gem
11:50:17 Gem
As long as the horse was bred by you
Gem
11:49:53 Gem
Manage your horse --> Ungeld
Gypsy Family Farm
11:48:52 
You can ungeld it for 24 hours.

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Art criticism January 13, 2024 02:57 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Please offer me advice! Working on ibis paint with an iPad and stylus
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Edited at January 13, 2024 02:59 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 02:55 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Still looking for advice + pricing suggestions. Thank you :)
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:07 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Doubt post sorry!

Edited at January 16, 2024 03:30 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:16 PM


Amethyst Ranch
 
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I'd definitely say you could be in low tier 1 :) The hair in piece 1 and 3 is amazing <3
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:22 PM


The Unknown
 
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The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.

Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:24 PM


Sweetwater Creek
 
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I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:31 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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The Unknown said:

The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.



I repaint the whole horse depending if I like the face or not lol.
I would love shadow advice - I can never place them right I think I just don't understand light xD
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:32 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Sweetwater Creek said:
I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!


Awesome thanks a million! I really neglect the bodies of my horses which is totally my bad
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:38 PM


Zomb
 
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I personally would say high T2. I love the feel of them! But as stated above, the shadowing feels off for me. I like the lighting on the horse, some soft shadows would define them even more (if you haven't already). Along side the lack of definition in the body with muscles etc etc. but that's easily fixable with a chalk pen + a soft light layer (one for light another for shadows). I think if you could work on those two (happy to help where I can) you definitely would be T1 without a doubt :)
Art criticism March 31, 2024 02:21 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Really interested for critique and thought on this:

Based on this forum I tried to focus on muscling through the body. I hope I've improved a bit.

Edited at June 2, 2024 07:37 AM by Enoki Valley

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