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Alpine Acres
08:14:30 Lily/Alpine
Ahh sounds beautiful Angel, I really must visit one day! I actually have a great-aunt there
Alpine Acres
08:12:34 Lily/Alpine
Sorrel, what is the problem that you are having exactly?
Angels angels
08:12:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh no that isn't good that you lost your farm!

It was amazing. I would love to move to Canada. lol It was so beautiful, amazing weather, and most of all people actually knew how to drive XD
Gemstone Stable
08:12:06 Snow❆Gem
*stumbles into chat*

So tired, from lack of sleep because I'm sick. And from how much I've blown my nose in the last hour. LMAO I am a mucus faucet or something. O.o
Sorrelwood Acres
08:10:39 
It's still not letting me create the forum?
Alpine Acres
08:06:25 Lily/Alpine
Never been to Canada myself, I'd love to visit one day! What was it like?
Alpine Acres
08:06:05 Lily/Alpine
Ah that's too real...I'm still living with my parents so we decided to risk it all and go on an adventure while we all still could. We lost our farm back home in the process...but at least we've had a great trip xD
Angels angels
08:04:12 [1k+ brindles] Angel
That is so cool. I want to travel the world so bad but we are too broke lol and I don't know if I could convince my fiancé to get on a plane. The only time I have been out of the country is when I went to Canada with my family years ago
Alpine Acres
08:01:05 Lily/Alpine
We've been travelling Southeast Asia and this is our last stop. Not my first time though, we've been dipping in and out of India since I was 9 :3
Angels angels
08:00:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh that is interesting lol
Alpine Acres
08:00:13 Lily/Alpine
In the area where we are, it's lovely! But if you go just five minutes out of the area, it becomes a trash-filled chaotic mess xD
Angels angels
07:58:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Oh how fun! :3
Is it super pretty there?
Sorrelwood Acres
07:58:31 
Okay thank you
Alpine Acres
07:57:56 Lily/Alpine
Angel, I'm currently in Bangalore, India! Only for a few more days though, before returning home
Alpine Acres
07:57:21 Lily/Alpine
Beat me to it Angel lol xD
Alpine Acres
07:57:11 Lily/Alpine
Sorrelwood, you need to go into the section of the forum that you want to add your forum post to, and scroll down to the bottom of the page. There's a box where you can add your title and text :)
Angels angels
07:56:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Where do you live if you don't mind me asking? Lol
I am in Georgia in the US and it is almost 9:00
Angels angels
07:56:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sorrelwood
Just go to the forums under Community > Forums
Click on the topic that is what your forum will be about then at the bottom there will be a text box to create a post
Alpine Acres
07:55:43 Lily/Alpine
18:25 :)
Angels angels
07:55:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol Lily
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Alpine Acres
08:14:30 Lily/Alpine
Ahh sounds beautiful Angel, I really must visit one day! I actually have a great-aunt there
Alpine Acres
08:12:34 Lily/Alpine
Sorrel, what is the problem that you are having exactly?
Angels angels
08:12:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh no that isn't good that you lost your farm!

It was amazing. I would love to move to Canada. lol It was so beautiful, amazing weather, and most of all people actually knew how to drive XD
Gemstone Stable
08:12:06 Snow❆Gem
*stumbles into chat*

So tired, from lack of sleep because I'm sick. And from how much I've blown my nose in the last hour. LMAO I am a mucus faucet or something. O.o
Sorrelwood Acres
08:10:39 
It's still not letting me create the forum?
Alpine Acres
08:06:25 Lily/Alpine
Never been to Canada myself, I'd love to visit one day! What was it like?
Alpine Acres
08:06:05 Lily/Alpine
Ah that's too real...I'm still living with my parents so we decided to risk it all and go on an adventure while we all still could. We lost our farm back home in the process...but at least we've had a great trip xD
Angels angels
08:04:12 [1k+ brindles] Angel
That is so cool. I want to travel the world so bad but we are too broke lol and I don't know if I could convince my fiancé to get on a plane. The only time I have been out of the country is when I went to Canada with my family years ago
Alpine Acres
08:01:05 Lily/Alpine
We've been travelling Southeast Asia and this is our last stop. Not my first time though, we've been dipping in and out of India since I was 9 :3
Angels angels
08:00:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh that is interesting lol
Alpine Acres
08:00:13 Lily/Alpine
In the area where we are, it's lovely! But if you go just five minutes out of the area, it becomes a trash-filled chaotic mess xD
Angels angels
07:58:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Oh how fun! :3
Is it super pretty there?
Sorrelwood Acres
07:58:31 
Okay thank you
Alpine Acres
07:57:56 Lily/Alpine
Angel, I'm currently in Bangalore, India! Only for a few more days though, before returning home
Alpine Acres
07:57:21 Lily/Alpine
Beat me to it Angel lol xD
Alpine Acres
07:57:11 Lily/Alpine
Sorrelwood, you need to go into the section of the forum that you want to add your forum post to, and scroll down to the bottom of the page. There's a box where you can add your title and text :)
Angels angels
07:56:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Where do you live if you don't mind me asking? Lol
I am in Georgia in the US and it is almost 9:00
Angels angels
07:56:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sorrelwood
Just go to the forums under Community > Forums
Click on the topic that is what your forum will be about then at the bottom there will be a text box to create a post
Alpine Acres
07:55:43 Lily/Alpine
18:25 :)
Angels angels
07:55:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol Lily
What time is it for you?

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Ranch Lands Training
 
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I suck at writing emails and letters. I get all my thoughts all over the place and tend just not make any sense. If you guys don't mind maybe just having a quick read to see if this is actually useable? My vet asked for some suggestions about topics she could talk about.

Thank you so much for asking me about what I would be interested in learning. I am sorry for such a delayed response but I did come up with some topics that I would love to learn about.


I always hear about navicular but I am unsure what it really is. I would be interested in learning what navicular is and how a horse can develop navicular. I would also be interested in learning how to treat and rehab navicular. I would love to know more about abscesses. How do horses get abscesses, how do identify abscesses, and how to treat an abscess.I would also love to know what some common problems that different breeds have with their feet.


Nutrition is something that I would love to know more about. How does a horse's diet contribute to their health and performance? What is laminitas, how can it be prevented, and what connection does it have to their diet? Ulcers is something I would also be interested in learning more about. I never really heard about ulcers until recently and would love to find more about it.


Another topic could possibly be horse growth and joints. I am very interested in how horses grow and what rate. Is there any benefit or harm to joints to riding a young horse. How does growth differ from breed to breed. Why do some horses get arthritis at younger ages than others? I would also be interested in learning about how foals grow and straighten out. What should be concerning when a foal is straightening out, and at what age should a foal have straightened out?


Lastly I find dental very interesting. An example could be how and over bite and under bite can affect a horse. What are wolf teeth and how do they affect a horse. What are some common problems that different breeds have with teeth? I would also love to know how to assess when a horse would need their teeth done. For example, what are common signs?


Thanks so much for doing these talks. The breeding seminar over winter helped a whole bunch and answered so many questions.


Edited at July 22, 2020 04:35 PM by Ranch Lands Training
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FirstLightFarms

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This is such a neat topic! The only things I can really see is that I would put 'navicular' and 'abscesses' into two different paragraphs, so it's easier to read. There are also a few sentences where you ask a question but end it with a . instead of a ?
Otherwise, very concisely written!
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FirstLightFarms said:
This is such a neat topic! The only things I can really see is that I would put 'navicular' and 'abscesses' into two different paragraphs, so it's easier to read. There are also a few sentences where you ask a question but end it with a . instead of a ?
Otherwise, very concisely written!


Mmmk thank you so much. Nobody in my fmaily are really writers so I usally avoid writing big emails or letters with at least a few people reading it.
Proof Read July 23, 2020 12:29 PM


EmeraldHillsFarm
 
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This is definitely useable. In your last paragraph though, I would say "dental problems" instead of just "dental". You also misspelled "laminitis" in your second paragraph. There are also a couple spots where you leave out a "the" or use "an" when you should use "a", but those are just little typos.
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I think that looks super good. The only thing, but this is just me. You specified navicular, why not all unsoundnesses or a little bit more specific, unsoundnesses that occur in the front legs or the hind legs. If it's only navicular your interested in learning about, then your set.

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