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RFS Thoroughbreds

02:08:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

fumble beh
-Click-

02:03:22

Randomly stumbled upon old pictures - I used to live some place that was soooooo GREEN!
Now I live where it's brown.
😭

02:00:15 Ivy / poison ivy

Caliiiii

01:56:55 Ivy / poison ivy

Lilllyyyy

01:56:10 Lily/Alpine

Ivyyy!

01:56:03 Lily/Alpine

Ugh, can't sleep because of the construction...at 00:25...

Sundown

01:53:53

-HEE Click-
I forgot this girl will be ready next month, I need to start looking at stallions.

01:49:54 Ivy / poison ivy

TRIOO

yayyy

01:49:46 Ivy / poison ivy

caliiiii

01:46:39 Ivy / poison ivy

lilyyy

01:38:28 Lilac

It’s her last breeding year next RO. Any stud suggestions? -HEE Click-

01:18:39 Lily/Alpine

oooh, Sugar Cane is perfect!

12:45:44

I like Carmel drip a lot, or even sugar cane.

12:41:20

Sherpa map in raid

12:41:08 Fantasy | Fanta

A few days after I get that 100 stall barn I need another :')

12:39:42 Lily/Alpine

or 'Caramel Cane' after her sire? She's gorgeous :)

12:39:06

-HEE Click-

I can't get over this filly's coat, I don't know what to name her.
"Caramel drip?"

Rising Stars Stable

12:31:55 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Dun horse in raid

God is Mighty Stable

12:29:30 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
He's going to Angel as well

12:28:12 Fantasy | Fanta

-HEE Click-
If her bravery is bad she's going to Angel lol

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RFS Thoroughbreds

02:08:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

fumble beh
-Click-

02:03:22

Randomly stumbled upon old pictures - I used to live some place that was soooooo GREEN!
Now I live where it's brown.
😭

02:00:15 Ivy / poison ivy

Caliiiii

01:56:55 Ivy / poison ivy

Lilllyyyy

01:56:10 Lily/Alpine

Ivyyy!

01:56:03 Lily/Alpine

Ugh, can't sleep because of the construction...at 00:25...

Sundown

01:53:53

-HEE Click-
I forgot this girl will be ready next month, I need to start looking at stallions.

01:49:54 Ivy / poison ivy

TRIOO

yayyy

01:49:46 Ivy / poison ivy

caliiiii

01:46:39 Ivy / poison ivy

lilyyy

01:38:28 Lilac

It’s her last breeding year next RO. Any stud suggestions? -HEE Click-

01:18:39 Lily/Alpine

oooh, Sugar Cane is perfect!

12:45:44

I like Carmel drip a lot, or even sugar cane.

12:41:20

Sherpa map in raid

12:41:08 Fantasy | Fanta

A few days after I get that 100 stall barn I need another :')

12:39:42 Lily/Alpine

or 'Caramel Cane' after her sire? She's gorgeous :)

12:39:06

-HEE Click-

I can't get over this filly's coat, I don't know what to name her.
"Caramel drip?"

Rising Stars Stable

12:31:55 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Dun horse in raid

God is Mighty Stable

12:29:30 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
He's going to Angel as well

12:28:12 Fantasy | Fanta

-HEE Click-
If her bravery is bad she's going to Angel lol

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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