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Glacier Bay Cove

08:13:41 Arctic Katz

YAY, getting better at not throwing all of my Ebs away in the store

Lynx Glory

07:53:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx

glacier
ooh yes xD my mom would love to have one too lol. her favourite bird species

Glacier Bay Cove

07:53:04 Arctic Katz

I would love to have a pet hummingbird

Lynx Glory

07:53:02 ⛈ whisper/lynx

but it's just not a reality for us and our home. too small, and we would prefer a large home where birds can still fly.

Lynx Glory

07:52:32 ⛈ whisper/lynx

i've always wanted a green cheeked conure and a tiel lol

Versailles

07:50:15 Versa

Ivy,
She's a green cheek conure. Conures are pretty loud. Not nearly as bad as sun conures, though lol

Wisteria Run Farm

07:49:55 Solar/Ria

Well, at least KNNs seem to like being good at Dressage lol
-HEE Click-

Crestwood Eq.

07:44:02 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

What type of bird is Icarus?

Kaldwin Stud

07:43:03 Tano

Aww I miss having tiels. My last one passed when I was 17 and I decided it wasn't really practical to get another and try to find a rental that would accept birds. So I've been 7 years without but I really miss having them around

Versailles

07:40:31 Versa

I mean, tiels aren't too noisy. They rarely scream. It's Icarus mostly

Crestwood Eq.

07:37:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

oh dear. must be loud

Versailles

07:35:51 Versa

Ivy,
Currently riled up, got a bunch of thunderstorm and flood warnings. They're not pleased with the thunder lol

Hummingbird Meadows

07:34:21 Bird

Honestly his favorite toy is a pool noodle. XD

Crestwood Eq.

07:33:16 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

how are the birds?

Versailles

07:32:57 Versa

Hi Ivy :)

Hummingbird Meadows

07:32:54 Bird

He does like the laser. I want to take him outside, but it's been so hot.

Crestwood Eq.

07:32:43 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa!

Versailles

07:32:22 Versa

Oh god, just make sure it's not rechargeable

Glacier Bay Cove

07:31:49 Arctic Katz

How about a battery operated laser pointer, would he like that

Hummingbird Meadows

07:30:40 Bird

@Glacier, no. I try to use a teaser wand and play with him, but he's not super interested

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Glacier Bay Cove

08:13:41 Arctic Katz

YAY, getting better at not throwing all of my Ebs away in the store

Lynx Glory

07:53:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx

glacier
ooh yes xD my mom would love to have one too lol. her favourite bird species

Glacier Bay Cove

07:53:04 Arctic Katz

I would love to have a pet hummingbird

Lynx Glory

07:53:02 ⛈ whisper/lynx

but it's just not a reality for us and our home. too small, and we would prefer a large home where birds can still fly.

Lynx Glory

07:52:32 ⛈ whisper/lynx

i've always wanted a green cheeked conure and a tiel lol

Versailles

07:50:15 Versa

Ivy,
She's a green cheek conure. Conures are pretty loud. Not nearly as bad as sun conures, though lol

Wisteria Run Farm

07:49:55 Solar/Ria

Well, at least KNNs seem to like being good at Dressage lol
-HEE Click-

Crestwood Eq.

07:44:02 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

What type of bird is Icarus?

Kaldwin Stud

07:43:03 Tano

Versailles

07:40:31 Versa

I mean, tiels aren't too noisy. They rarely scream. It's Icarus mostly

Crestwood Eq.

07:37:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

oh dear. must be loud

Versailles

07:35:51 Versa

Ivy,
Currently riled up, got a bunch of thunderstorm and flood warnings. They're not pleased with the thunder lol

Hummingbird Meadows

07:34:21 Bird

Honestly his favorite toy is a pool noodle. XD

Crestwood Eq.

07:33:16 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

how are the birds?

Versailles

07:32:57 Versa

Hi Ivy :)

Hummingbird Meadows

07:32:54 Bird

He does like the laser. I want to take him outside, but it's been so hot.

Crestwood Eq.

07:32:43 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa!

Versailles

07:32:22 Versa

Oh god, just make sure it's not rechargeable

Glacier Bay Cove

07:31:49 Arctic Katz

How about a battery operated laser pointer, would he like that

Hummingbird Meadows

07:30:40 Bird

@Glacier, no. I try to use a teaser wand and play with him, but he's not super interested

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March 14, 2018 01:51 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/411yx0ki9/CONTEST2.jpg

This is my latest. I actually smudged it! And I think it turned out good BUT that is just me. If you think there is anything that would have made this better/ you would change PLEASE (!) let me know!

Edited at March 14, 2018 01:51 PM by Ruby Quater Horses

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March 14, 2018 01:54 PM

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You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

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March 14, 2018 01:56 PM

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Trinity Equine said:
You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

Thank you! Will remember all that an the next one! xD

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March 14, 2018 02:00 PM

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The face isnt really standing out and its super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

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March 14, 2018 02:07 PM

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Midnight storm Arce said:
The face isn’t really standing out and it’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

OK thank you!

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