Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


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Ravenwood Farm
04:09:08 
No worries! Sounds very nice :)
Minerva
04:07:15 Min
Oops sorry I buggered off haha. Ponies and pub today lol, probably a nice dog walk at some point too
Ravenwood Farm
03:20:17 
Have you got any birthday plans?
Minerva
03:17:38 Min
Ayy nice one Cali!!


Thank you Raven 😊
Ravenwood Farm
03:15:40 
Happy birthday Min! (oof what bandits they are)
Calela Eventing
03:15:38 Cali
Hey Min,
Guess who gave one of your EWE girlies her second EWE ever, both of them have been from my defect stud.
Such luck
Araluen
03:15:36 
just used 10 maps on captures (+15 traits) for a quest, not a single one with ratings above superb :')
Minerva
03:08:46 Min
Oh joy, the ponies have decided to celebrate my birthday by breaking through their fencing into the long grass 🙈 Dickheads haha
Morning Glory Farms
12:23:52 Terici/Dino/Trish
My fingers are crossed for you! I hope she's nice to
Valhalla Acreage
12:21:12 Eivor
-HEE Click-
I'm excited for this I'm using a blue glass on this pair
ShiningStar Stables
12:17:04 Chey / Star
Trish
I'm very nervous to breed her 😬
I will be svenning her as my first match so hopefully she is nice
Morning Glory Farms
12:13:53 Terici/Dino/Trish
I forgot shes 3 next year i cant wait to see how they do
Sunni
12:13:18 Sunni bunny
The match looks really good, and hopefully the cost will be colorful. I am excited for you XD
ShiningStar Stables
12:11:59 Chey / Star
Sunni
That's kind of what I was thinking
The match looks solid plus it has the chance for frame and tobi
Sunni
12:09:56 Sunni bunny
Star I think it's worth the gamble
ShiningStar Stables
12:08:49 Chey / Star
Do I risk throwing my maiden to a freshie?
-HEE Click-
Sunni
12:07:06 Sunni bunny
Geek if it helps you cope, losing someone is all ways painful.
It takes time to heal, and drawing is a good coping mechanism.
Am sorry for your loss, but I all ways tell myself.
It was an honor to know them, and be their friend.
Transformers Acres
12:04:58 Geek, Eek
I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine
Sunni
12:04:46 Sunni bunny
Cove the sleep is coming for you, haha
Glacier Bay Cove
12:04:24 Arctic Katz
Oops I meant Geek

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Ravenwood Farm
04:09:08 
No worries! Sounds very nice :)
Minerva
04:07:15 Min
Oops sorry I buggered off haha. Ponies and pub today lol, probably a nice dog walk at some point too
Ravenwood Farm
03:20:17 
Have you got any birthday plans?
Minerva
03:17:38 Min
Ayy nice one Cali!!


Thank you Raven 😊
Ravenwood Farm
03:15:40 
Happy birthday Min! (oof what bandits they are)
Calela Eventing
03:15:38 Cali
Hey Min,
Guess who gave one of your EWE girlies her second EWE ever, both of them have been from my defect stud.
Such luck
Araluen
03:15:36 
just used 10 maps on captures (+15 traits) for a quest, not a single one with ratings above superb :')
Minerva
03:08:46 Min
Oh joy, the ponies have decided to celebrate my birthday by breaking through their fencing into the long grass 🙈 Dickheads haha
Morning Glory Farms
12:23:52 Terici/Dino/Trish
My fingers are crossed for you! I hope she's nice to
Valhalla Acreage
12:21:12 Eivor
-HEE Click-
I'm excited for this I'm using a blue glass on this pair
ShiningStar Stables
12:17:04 Chey / Star
Trish
I'm very nervous to breed her 😬
I will be svenning her as my first match so hopefully she is nice
Morning Glory Farms
12:13:53 Terici/Dino/Trish
I forgot shes 3 next year i cant wait to see how they do
Sunni
12:13:18 Sunni bunny
The match looks really good, and hopefully the cost will be colorful. I am excited for you XD
ShiningStar Stables
12:11:59 Chey / Star
Sunni
That's kind of what I was thinking
The match looks solid plus it has the chance for frame and tobi
Sunni
12:09:56 Sunni bunny
Star I think it's worth the gamble
ShiningStar Stables
12:08:49 Chey / Star
Do I risk throwing my maiden to a freshie?
-HEE Click-
Sunni
12:07:06 Sunni bunny
Geek if it helps you cope, losing someone is all ways painful.
It takes time to heal, and drawing is a good coping mechanism.
Am sorry for your loss, but I all ways tell myself.
It was an honor to know them, and be their friend.
Transformers Acres
12:04:58 Geek, Eek
I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine
Sunni
12:04:46 Sunni bunny
Cove the sleep is coming for you, haha
Glacier Bay Cove
12:04:24 Arctic Katz
Oops I meant Geek

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The Official Art Critique Forum February 26, 2022 10:43 PM


Tranquility
 
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So, right off the bat I think the lighting needs to be stronger on the horse. On the edges, you could possibly paint a single line to highlight the edge of the horse and just make the lighting stronger in general.
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The mane of the horse is confusing my eyes, sort of. Is it supposed to be a braid? Anyways, pretty, but I would thicken the overall mane to lay across the shoulder better.
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The jewelry lighting almost looks inversed or something to me, it fits the overall lighting though and it your style, so I love it! I would just try to make the jewelry on the face stand out more against the white face.
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Your markings are really realistic and tie in great with the horse and overall piece!
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Overall, lovely job and I would love a piece from you someday! 😊
The Official Art Critique Forum February 26, 2022 10:51 PM


Silent Hill Equines
 
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Critique on my latest piece?
Any long term changes I need to make for future pieces?
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 03:05 PM


Ironclad Roan Estate
 
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Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 04:09 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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Ironclad Roan Estate said:
Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.


out of everything, i'd say the hair needs the mos the long lighting wise, the ends are very light when they shouldn't be. when shading, treat the hair liek the body. Use add layers around the edges of the hair for lighting, ESPECIALLY with harsh down/back lighting, and make the ' middle ' of the hair darker compared to the edges.
Id also make the feet a bit darker, not by too much though. But make sure to leave a bit of unshaded area on the right hand side of the feet for this pice, since it is sort of back lighted.
something not lighting related, but try not to blend the horse out as much, your body prep is beautiful but i feel like you may have lost some details
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 04:12 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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Silent Hill Equines said:
Critique on my latest piece?
Any long term changes I need to make for future pieces?


this lighting on thsi is really good! it's one of the first things that i noticed, which is good because it's eye catching, i love it <3
as for critique, your hair is quite smoother out, rather than the layers and shades within the hair standing out. Hair in manip should look relatively shady if that makes sense? there are plenty of tutorials in the forums and on youtube as far as hair is concerned, but over all i'd say you ahve real potential to make some gorgeous pieces :)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 04:15 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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anyways, i'm back again :D plead click on this peice because it's huge... like 3200x4000 and 85MB huge. And make sure to zoom because i need to be judged super hard. i don't care if it sounds harsh lmao i want it to be harsh

Edited at March 1, 2022 06:01 PM by Bermuda Estate
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 05:35 PM


Ironclad Roan Estate
 
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Thank you! I'll work on each of these suggestions and post the edited piece here.

Bermuda Estate said:

Ironclad Roan Estate said:
Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.


out of everything, i'd say the hair needs the mos the long lighting wise, the ends are very light when they shouldn't be. when shading, treat the hair liek the body. Use add layers around the edges of the hair for lighting, ESPECIALLY with harsh down/back lighting, and make the ' middle ' of the hair darker compared to the edges.
Id also make the feet a bit darker, not by too much though. But make sure to leave a bit of unshaded area on the right hand side of the feet for this pice, since it is sort of back lighted.
something not lighting related, but try not to blend the horse out as much, your body prep is beautiful but i feel like you may have lost some details


The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 06:20 PM


HMH Reality Check
 
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Bermuda Estate said:
anyways, i'm back again :D plead click on this peice because it's huge... like 3200x4000 and 85MB huge. And make sure to zoom because i need to be judged super hard. i don't care if it sounds harsh lmao i want it to be harsh


1. Is this piece already spoken for? If not, can I buy it from you?
2. The body prep is beautiful, the horse looks a bit bright compared to the BG, but I do really like the glowy golden horse. Your hair as always is super pretty. The lighting on it looks a bit bright, there's not much highlights in the BG. Your markings are flawless.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 06:29 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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aww thankyou :) i've dimmed the lighting about to match the BG, and no it isn't spoken for but it is going for auction 0-0
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 06:40 PM


HMH Reality Check
 
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Bermuda Estate said:
aww thankyou :) i've dimmed the lighting about to match the BG, and no it isn't spoken for but it is going for auction 0-0


I'm gonna keep my eye on that one, lol

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